The Sect Development of the Big Leader System

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"The Cultivation of the Sect of the Big Boss System" Author: Liu Dongbo Type: Xianxia Rating: 7.7 Book review: Da Da's writing style is relatively smooth, and the description of the characters is more vivid and more immersive, but it is still a bit thin when reading. It is recommended that Da Da should appropriately streamline some cumbersome narratives, add more major details, and depict the characters and scenes more carefully, so that readers will not feel too rushed when reading, and the picture will be stronger. In terms of plot, I personally think that the setting of the sect development system is quite interesting. In addition, the writing style and plot design are relatively relaxed, making it interesting to read. At present, it seems that there are no big problems with the great rhythm control and the ups and downs of the plot. There are still points that can catch the readers' attention. Overall, the writing style and plot are pretty good. 19 Has collected it. Please continue to work hard! Finally, I'm sorry to send you a book review so late. I hope you won't mind [Bow From: Chu Shi Ji

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Author, please take your time and go through the most interesting development in one go. The rest of the plot is just a quick glance. You are only 14 chapters long. The plot is like flying on an airplane. What will you write in the future? Do it bit by bit. Each bit of plot should be accompanied by some growth. Also, provoking powerful enemies is essential, but not because the protagonist is stupid, but because of mortal enemies formed by conflicts of interest.

It's so poisonous that I can't stand it after reading three chapters. With the starting configuration, the disciples are all geniuses. . . . Is it true that the spiritual roots of heaven are everywhere? After all, no matter how bad the Tianlinggen (Dual Spiritual Root) technique is, it can't be practiced at the second level at 17/8? There are no details. The house was built in no time, and the disciples didn't seem to be too shocked. The three golden chapters are written like this, alas.

After investing in a typical system farming article, as the head of a sect, it feels like playing a development game. There are no obvious bad points at the moment, but some narratives are a bit cumbersome. The background introduction in Chapter 2 is a bit long, so I just skipped it without reading it carefully... There are some problems with punctuation, such as sometimes there is no colon when speaking. Anyway, good work, author!

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I just saw the scene of destroying the Wu family, and I gave the trash an anti-protagonist halo in advance (this was Jin Yong's routine before he started the book). This makes the system very useless, because no matter how the system is upgraded, this country bumpkin (the four major families in Qingyu Town) will always have the opportunity to plot against the protagonist. Over and over again, it seems like he is the protagonist. And the protagonist is the same as the villain, very cliche and not fun!

I don't know how to explain it. The protagonist of the construction order given in the novice gift pack lied that it was left by the master, so why did the master not use such a good thing long ago and wait until he died to give it to his apprentice? The person who came up with such an excuse is a fool, and the person who believes it is also a fool.

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Shouldn't the characters in the novel about cultivating immortals be called Taoist friends, seniors, etc.? Sister, brother, and grandpa appear all the time, which makes people very embarrassed and out of touch. Finally, I hope that the author can make the character conflicts more natural, make the story more coherent, and make the protagonist more mature and steady. This is a suggestion from a veteran novel about cultivating immortals.

The general logic of writing a book makes sense! Author, you gathered all your book friends, randomly transformed into a star battleship, and then said that this was left to you by your master. How do you think readers will react? The same reaction as your junior brothers and sisters?

The author could probably learn from the novel by The Leader of the Cultivation Sect, which is very well written, and it is the eunuch.

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Is this nm playing a game? Do I need to read your book to play games?

Chapter 8, something is wrong. .

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Why did the investment fail even though there was an update? The author has a problem behind the scenes

After reading three chapters, the biggest problem with this book so far is that the exercises are too complicated.

Brother, use less exclamation marks. There are too many exclamation marks in front of you. . .

In fact, I personally think it would be better without a female protagonist. . . .

Of the same type of books, which one has better results and is read more often? Just read one such book, not this one. Anyway, the plot is pretty much the same

The progress is too fast. Although there are golden fingers, it does not reflect the hard work and hard work of everyone.

This is too poisonous. Except for the sect leader, everyone is a genius. It's too deliberate.