Lord Dragon King Is Here

Sir, times have changed. Nowadays, few people buy into writing waste streams. I don't care how awesome or beautiful your previous books were. As far as this book is concerned, the plot and so on. To be honest, it's outdated. I've been reading it for seven or eight years. I would have thought it was good before, but I'm sorry now. For me personally, it would be a pity to throw away this book if it is tasteless. After all, at the starting point, there are many authors who have written this routine. If you are not a "Rain Demon", the plot of these chapters will be fine if you don't rush into the street.

Like many people I saw in the book review section, I was inspired by the novel Taming the Beast, so I accidentally clicked on this book without hesitation, but the result really disappointed me. If it weren't for the word "Rain Demon", I would probably have given up on this article after reading three or five chapters. I didn't take the stupid words in Chapter 77 too seriously, but I really couldn't stand the plot. It's really hard for me to imagine that a new book by an ancient master would be written like this. The slow pace, settings, and dungeons are not the point. The key lies in the author's poor operation of painting a tiger instead of a dog. Slow pace is not a problem. People with more starting points are those with a slower pace, such as a son-in-law. The setting of the store is not a problem. The setting of the Lord of Mysteries is much more complicated than this article. Bringing copies is still not a problem, the entire book of Emperor's Domination is a copy. The problem is that the author does not have a clear understanding of himself. Not only you, Yu Mo, but also Xuan Yu, Long Ren, Ming Mei, Guang Ya, etc. Of the same generation, I can name a list of names. None of you first-generation authors are good at writing non-fiction. However, you know very well that the current mainstream of the market is non-fiction, and you are reluctant to give up the profit, so you forcefully incorporate a lot of things that you are not good at in the article, and finally turn a good new book into a mess. If you write according to the ideas that you are good at, you may not be able to reach the heights you once were, but at least it will not be difficult to attract a group of die-hard fans with word-of-mouth, at least they will not be criticized like they are now. Can you see if there is a positive comment in the book review area? So, if you still listen to your opinions, just scrap this book and write a new one. I believe that ancient bosses like you don't need to worry about livelihood issues. If I have to stick to this book, then I can only say, goodbye, never see you again.

Although there are so many people who can understand such a profound book, I have read online articles for several years, but I was still persuaded by the author to give up. Goodbye, I wish the author's books will get better and better╭∩╮(￣▽￣)╭∩╮

I have read 20 chapters so far: 1. The protagonist's mind is a bit small. Most readers of online articles who subscribe should be over 20 years old. Indirect substitution will cause obstacles for some readers who do not have high reading literacy. Many people say "poison" because they have a narrow world view and insufficient cognitive ability. They use their real world view to substitute into an imaginary world, causing contradictions and discomfort due to the gap in time and space. 2. Too much realism. This is supposed to be a fantasy novel (?). Too much close-to-life descriptions will lead readers into misunderstandings and blur the real world and the fictional world. It can be seen that there is a large gap between technology, class and reality in this world, and too much realism is not conducive to the development of the world view. Yuda returned to the Internet after many years, and he did not keep a low profile. If the novels he writes are not amazingly talented and beautiful, they will be criticized. At present, it is still an ordinary work. Sometimes, the sword is not old, it is old. It is like sailing against the current. If you don't advance, you will retreat back. The above represents only my personal opinion. (A fan of "The King of Beasts" more than ten years ago)

As far as I'm concerned, if the rain is heavy, you might as well write the routine of Beast King. Now I don't think the routine of Beast King is outdated, but the writing style is relatively green, and this book. It's too toxic. The Qidian Xiaobai is really out of date. I just read the first few chapters and I really can't stand it. You are really in danger of ruining your own brand in the rain. I don't ask you to catch up with the mysterious perfection now, but you also have to have your own plot characteristics. Pet beasts are your characteristics, but the plot cannot be poisonous.

I don't understand if it's a bit ridiculous for a top ten student in the mecha department of the college to not even know the most basic fighting skills. In the future, how will he fight with mechas without fighting skills? He just goes up and throws a bunch of bastard punches. What a joke! This is the first time I've read a book about using mechas and not knowing how to fight. It's too poisonous.

Damn Rain, I'm really not a troll, because your Beast Controlling Room was the only novel I bought in physical form in a bookstore except for Harry Potter. You have to believe in my love for your novels, but what I want to say is that this novel is really not as good as your original one. You can't be proud of your past achievements. You have to find out what the current trend is. This page is wasted on various routine intrigues. You are not good at this. Really, I just want to skip it after reading it And don't portray the protagonist's gradual transformation of his character. You didn't write it out. The protagonist's psychological age is basically not consistent with the age you set... Finally, Rain Demon, don't write the epilogue, it is too easy to offend the readers. After all, the readers can make the author happy In short, I hope it will get better and better

This book was really a bit outdated at the beginning. I didn't even want to spend money on this book, so I read a pirated version Now, the book has gradually become more vivid, so I came back, and those unvivid plots will not be subscribed. I can only say that this is a slow-burning novel. The front is not satisfactory, and the back gradually becomes fuller. Come on, the rain is heavy.

I came in to take a look after seeing the top few in the monthly ticket list. The overall review is just like the title. It is not a book that can be crowned as a god, but it is worthy of tasting the pros and cons. Compared with the real five-star books, this book seems young and a bit perfunctory. The setting is unclear, the details of the car accident are unclear, and the protagonist is not written like a smart kid. However, looking on the bright side, the feelings expressed in the book Dragon King have obvious good and evil and good and evil, and the writing is inspirational and passionate. It is still helpful to cultivate the three views of novice readers. For old readers or middle-to-high-end readers like me, except for feelings, this book has no shining point of its own. Apart from the ultimate goal of becoming the strongest, what other goals are worth mentioning? This book has no Chinese characteristics or traditional thoughts. Guangzongyao is passed down from generation to generation. Can the knowledge in this book change destiny? Of course, there is nothing else worth discussing and thinking about. Maybe the author needs to express too deep a meaning that I can't understand.

The first novel I bought at Xinhua Bookstore was Beast King. I still remember it was Beast King's "Garden of Pets". At that time, I was attracted by this wonderful and beautiful fantasy world. I bought all the books at the end of the cover, "Beast God", and "Rebirth Warrior" by Shi Ou. Looking back now, I still can't forget the book "Beast King" that has accompanied me from the fourth grade of elementary school to the current second year of high school. Every Saturday when I go home, I always go to Xinhua Bookstore to see if there are any new ones.

As a person who has been chasing one more, the plot behind it is actually much better. When the heavy rain starts to enter the starting point, it is actually difficult to grasp the audience of the starting point. Before Yu Da, I had been writing youth literature. Before putting this book on the shelves, I had completed a manuscript of 300,000 words. The entire book had a framework of nearly tens of thousands of words and was still being revised. Later, I found that the results were not very good, but it could not be revised due to contracts and other reasons. This Yuda is actually very uncomfortable, but for my own love and belief, Yuda has not stopped updating, and has continued to modify and improve it in the later stages, and it is getting better and better. This is also the quality of a good writer. Some of the books he writes may be popular and some may not be popular, but he is not proud of their popularity and is not discouraged when his books are not ideal. Let me talk about my feelings about the latest chapters. Either one thing is right or wrong. In fact, it is just looking at the problem from different angles. Of course, the final result can only be written by the winner. The winner is the king and the loser is the enemy. We have to be suspicious of everything and not be mechanically obedient. Finally, I hope the rain will get better and better~ (Next time I try again, I hope it will be Beastmaster Season 2 hahahaha)

I've read almost 100 chapters. Isn't the background of the story a confrontation with sandworms? Why is there internal fighting in the beginning? Moreover, he was chased for thousands of miles just for playing in a gym, and there were even insiders involved. How can such a human society compete with mortal enemies for living space? Anyway, when I first read it, I felt it was a mess, and it felt like the author wrote whatever he thought of. This result is too fake.

I don't understand what I want to express, I can't explain everything clearly, I want to write everything clearly, there is no focus, the world structure is not clear, or it is not explained clearly. If you read this book every 20 chapters, it will have no impact at all. I should have read the author's other books. It was so long ago that I have no impression of them except the name. What I want to express is that since I have made a comeback, don't worry about your feelings, think about the work carefully, it doesn't matter if the update is slow, the key is quality, quality. Of course, if you want to make a quick buck, just pretend I didn't tell you. When you have time, please change the previous one. I subscribed to the latest chapter when I posted the comment. If you have any doubts, just calculate the fan value. I must be a bookworm for more than ten years. The first book I read should be from 2003 called "Seal". Goosebumps is from the same era. It is estimated that many people were not born at that time. Come on, there are not many old authors left. Xiaoda and Fatty Fang have stopped updating, alas.

This book is really written with great care. What I like most is not the hard work of the male protagonist, but the description of his parents, the father's handling of things, and the mother's love for her son. The plot also advances in an orderly manner without any rush, and the rhythm is well controlled. Come on!

This book was added to the bookshelf because it was ranked number one in the recommendation vote, and then I deleted it after reading dozens of chapters. Later, when I ran out of books, I added it again, and then read a few more and deleted it. Finally, I saw that it ranked second in the monthly votes. The comment section was full of praise. The author also said very forcefully in the book that if you don't think it's good enough and want to read something interesting, please leave. There are many great gods. So I wondered if I didn't read carefully enough and didn't realize the connotation of this book. Then I read it carefully again, and finally gave up. I felt that I really couldn't appreciate it. Whether it was the plot or the related characters, it was really lackluster, which gave me no motivation to continue reading. I said goodbye.

Wow, Rain Demon, I remember the ten physical books of Beastmaster I bought in junior high school. .

I don't want to argue with the author about how poorly written his book is. I just want to say that a book that ranks first on the monthly new book list and second on the overall list is ranked 537 on the best-seller list today (it's boring for me to read it for so long)... Do I need to say more?

Come on, finish writing this book and write down the beast king.

I watched Rain Demon's Beastmaster when I was in junior high school, and I really liked it at the time. I bought a complete set of physical books and read the first few books several times, but it was really difficult to read the later ones. This book, Lord Dragon King, can only be regarded as ordinary food for me as an old bookworm. The first few dozen chapters are really too poisonous and difficult to read. The character of the protagonist and various blunt plot arrangements are really difficult to accept now. I still hope that Rain Demon can modify the style a little, otherwise this book can really only be read by children. . .

Beast Taming House? The first novel I read. The content is very interesting, but it seems to be unfinished (=_=)

Wow, it's actually the author of The Beast Taming Room. I couldn't stop reading it!

I support you as always. It's raining heavily. Do you want to consider serializing Beast Taming Studio 🤓

I'm a little surprised at how sarcastic the protagonist's face is, and how he is looked down upon and targeted no matter what he does. . Turn to body training and become a T. The hatred will be drawn steadily, ensuring a god-level T.

Welcome all new and old readers, happy reading!

Reading is a process of enjoyment. You can understand the author's intention behind the scenes by chewing on the words. One Eye and Ten Lines is suitable for reading Shuangwen, but some books do not fall into the category of Shuangwen. The story needs to be foreshadowed, and the plot that is completed overnight will not give people a sense of surprise. Books will always have loopholes, and even textbooks with strict logic will have loopholes, so I created a special post to collect opinions for everyone to discuss. There are a thousand Hamlet in a thousand people. Being poisonous to some people is not the reason for these people to prevent others from reading the book. You can express your dissatisfaction and we will improve it later, but please do not fight with the book friends who support it. The writing mode of the book is fixed like this. After all, the characters need to grow up. So what if the senior brother in the academy is just a junior title, and every mountain is higher than the next. Therefore, this book is not suitable for people who are impatient. In an impetuous society, please feel free to read.

"Beast King" This is the main culprit that caused me to step into the point of no return in online writing

Please explain the setting clearly. I was confused in the early stage. The protagonist was hit by a car and there was no compensation. Even if it was because the family of the person who hit him was powerful, please explain it. And there are bullies who keep targeting geniuses just because they have fallen from the altar? ? ? Is the world so negative? ? ? There is also the eldest lady who pops up out of nowhere. Wouldn't it be awkward if she pops up suddenly? I didn't even apply for the job, so I ended up going to the Sandworm Shop. It was really stuck in my throat. Also, the protagonist fell from the altar and was targeted all the time without even having any friends. Did he do something outrageous when he was in the spotlight? Or is the world in the book so dark? Someone else, Xiao Yan, at least has a wife. There is also the protagonist's mentality. Apart from the rigid indicators of the protagonist's diligence, studiousness, and strong knowledge of martial arts, I don't see any other positive traits. Maybe I missed it, please let me know. "Come here because of fame, and leave disappointed." If the book does not explain the general world view and only relies on readers to understand it, the world of the protagonist described in the previous article is an extremely dark world in my eyes. That world has no system or very little system, and is full of dark sides. Apart from his parents and relatives, there is also the academy trying to save the protagonist's talent. I don't see any other positive aspects. Classmates suppress, neighbors suppress, and strangers suppress. Can't we throw in a few positive characters to provide a buffer? There is a sentence in a post on Jiajing: "If you like to watch, don't watch," which is true, so I am planning to leave. What I want to say is "If you like to listen, don't listen to me." Understanding the author does not mean that you have to tolerate it without a bottom line. I wish you an early film and television adaptation, an anime adaptation, a game adaptation, and I wish you could make enough money to make your hands cramp. Farewell.

I've read a lot of things that say how great the author is, but now I can't stand this work.

After reading dozens of chapters, it's not that kind of rubbish, but it doesn't make me feel bright, let alone amazing. I just read it or not, but when I saw the last few paragraphs of the author in Chapter 77, I immediately lost interest in reading anymore. The author is too self-righteous. He is too arrogant. Regardless of whether he was stimulated by some comments or not, in just a few paragraphs, the author has lowered himself to the same level as the people he is angry with. With such a mentality, it is difficult to write a better and better book, and it is more likely to lead to a dark road that is disappointing. I have also read the author's previous books, and I know the author's achievements, but to be honest, those achievements really cannot support the author's qualifications to say those words. To put it nicely, the author made a mistake, and to put it badly, the author is too arrogant! Whether you listen to the advice or not, let the author realize it for himself, pass by, and leave.

I thought this book was a pet novel, but when I read it, I realized that I was overthinking it. This was not the pet novel I imagined. I'd better read Pokémon fan fiction. Farewell.