Huadaofeng

Mr. Author, or Ms. Madam. Fortunately, you left a message in my review, and I saw your advertisement late at night. As you can see, my book review was not too small, and it took half an hour. It only took you six comments in a whole day, and I can count them all with both hands. I tried to read the preface of the work you posted, and I have some ideas. You can give them immediate suggestions or laugh them off. It doesn't matter. To be honest, I looked through the preface of more than ten pages, and some of the rhetoric in certain paragraphs was carefully written, which proves that it was written with intention. But this is an imaginary fantasy or martial arts novel. The beginning you wrote, the prologue, takes up most of the space to introduce the world view. This is not wrong, there are routines. But it feels like a mediocre and mediocre book, and it doesn't capture the heart of an old reader at all. The subject matter is also a little outdated. It has been more than ten years since the film was released, and the young and promising young man who plans to climb a high tree overnight is like the crucian carp crossing the river, but it still looks like the same Celestial Silkworm Potato. You are competing against Tudou and others. As for new readers, do you think they recognize the IP or are they willing to search for it? In addition, if the author, Mr. You, is a woman, treat the above words as if I have not said anything. I apologize. If you are a man...🤓 In the reference to you, there is a mention of dreaming of writing a book full-time... I have read the comments and you have replied to most of them. Do you refresh it frequently? Are you eager for readers to reply to you? It seems that there is no need to say it clearly. Most of your replies are concentrated after ten o'clock in the evening. By eleven o'clock, the pressure of the college entrance examination is normal. But the time spent in these replies is used to conceive the next manuscript or code words, which may be about a thousand words, so why not? (I only wrote this for ten minutes) Writers are the most hard-working people in the world who require enthusiasm, persistence and talent. I have never heard of any scientist or entrepreneur who has a writer who is prone to premature aging and sudden death, right? A motive of making money and being famous cannot support you in writing a book. Think about it carefully, should you treat it as a whim, or just a current hobby? This road is not easy to walk. People today are not as good as before. If I casually go to a big boss and curse a few words, I might get as many malicious comments as you do in a day. The reality is that we are helpless. There are three months left for the college entrance examination, exactly three months, I miss it so much. If you are willing, first, abandon the pit, this is the best stop loss. If you have enthusiasm and confidence, update a chapter every morning, and use your saved manuscript from yesterday before reading in the morning. Chapter 1 from 5pm to 7:00pm. If you have any study plans, cancel them and divide the two days into three days. One chapter per day. You can do whatever you want between 3,000 and 5,000 per chapter. It's up to you to control the pacing, plotting, etc. Don't worry about it. Only by conciseness can you impress the readers. You are at a disadvantage in your current situation. Don't play with your mobile phone, don't stare at the replies, and save more papers on weekends in case you need them (for example, you will save papers for exams). Other times are garbage time not worth updating, don't post. You can also change the time in the morning to after 9pm and before 12pm. You have to think about the social reality, who is writing it for, and update it whenever they have time. After the college entrance examination, check the guide online to see how to update better. Some of the updates you have made are completely wasted. Thank you. If you are willing to accept it, I wish you good luck. If you laugh it off, it doesn't matter. Just think that I am familiar with the keys. For you: Good luck will not favor fools.

This book is really great, and the author works very hard! Come on! Highly recommended! !

When I read the prologue, I felt like the stars were changing. Have I read it too many times?😁

Even though I don't watch this genre anymore, I still recommend it to you.

This book is okay, but the introduction needs to be changed to make people feel like they don't want to read it. And I came in after seeing your advertisement.

Let's build a thank you building and thank the students who voted for recommendations and the students who gave rewards every day. . I found that fewer and fewer students voted 😅😅😅😅

How many of them come from small advertisements? Raise your hand. Haha

If you see it, come and take a look. Save it for now and look at it later when you are fat.

I hope the author can stick to it and recommend 4 pictures to you every day. Regarding signing contracts, authors should not be anxious. As long as the updates are stable, editors will come to you.

Let's join the fan group and discuss it together! 😰😰（971314030）

Old man! ! ! Signed! ! Can anyone give me a reward? !

The day this review will be refined will be the day when this book becomes popular

When someone praises you, I take a look first.

Hmm... I still support the author, but I still have a small suggestion: the update time does not matter whether it is fixed or not, each has its own advantages. The main thing is that basically one update a day is too slow 😅. Two to three updates a day are actually needed... If there are more updates, I believe it will be publicized and signed soon. Keep up the good work, I am very optimistic about the author.

Finally waited for the short stop😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭After waiting for so long, it is finally here😭😭😭😭😭

I don't know why, others don't invest as much as me, and don't comment as much as me, but their recommendations and collections are far more than mine...😭😭😭😭

I would like to give you some advice. If you can't do three chapters a day, don't talk too much and write three chapters a day. Gaffes are more annoying than fewer words. Just ensure the quality. Sometimes speed is not that important. It doesn't matter.

Ahem, is it time to change the cover or something?

Dear, please help me promote "Sword Building Eight Wastelands Road". We just need to collect the tickets, thank you.

Readers, this book is too late because the author is busy with his studies. I am here to inform you that you don't have to wait any longer 🤫

Can you come and take a look at the new book "Qi Practitioner"? The results of my new book were so bad that I fainted in the toilet from crying (ಥ_ಥ)

Congratulations on over 1,000 recommendation votes and signing a contract 🤭

Not bad, not bad. I will update as soon as the college entrance examination is over. How do you like it?

Come on, believe that you are like gold and it will always shine. Then you will be full of confidence when writing novels, and you will write better. You can recommend your own books to new book investment partners and new authors in Dot Circle. It is good to ask for recommendations. Someone will support you. The creative circle is okay, and don't worry. You haven't written 50,000 words yet, so don't worry. When you reach 50,000 words, you can apply for a contract by yourself. If it doesn't work, change the first content. As the saying goes, the three golden chapters must give people a good impression. If the first part is not good, no matter how good the second part is, the editor will not be able to see it. (It does not rule out that the second part is extremely good, which will also be signed.) If 50,000 words doesn't work, apply for 100,000 words. As long as you believe in yourself and don't give up, then you will be the best. There are also newcomers whose first novel is used to practice writing. The first novel generally won't be very famous (of course, it does not rule out that your writing skills are very good and there are many readers, so let's talk about that.) So there is no rush to sign a contract, but it is still a good idea to sign a contract. Don't worry. I read one of your novels and the approval rate is very good, so don't worry. (I read this from your book club. The above only represents my personal opinion. I hope it can give you some help.)

I was planning to keep it, but then I couldn't help myself and finished reading it. It's very good. Come on, I will keep following it.

Sure enough, author, I also have a dream to write a novel. Do you need me to help you write it?🙂🙂🙂

After a hundred chapters, there was no eunuch... I was convinced.

Why is he a eunuch?😥

The author will tell me, how was the college entrance examination? I repeated the exam and will we do 985 together next year? ? ? Hahaha

200,000 Words is too short. It's not enough for me to read in one day. I thought he was a eunuch😅