Reincarnation of the Phoenix Queen

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Title: The Reincarnation of the Phoenix Author: Wuli Chaoshuang Type of work: Ancient Romance Number of words read: 80,000+ Rating: 84 Commentator : Chen Guozhu Impression: It is an ancient rebirth novel that wears the cloak of the palace, weakens the cruelty of the original palace battle, and carries daily life to the end The story outline is very simple, it is written around the daily life of the reborn heroine. Play with the cat, take a walk around the palace, hold meetings with other concubines from time to time, enjoy flowers, and flirt with the emperor... 1. The real selling point of this book is not the storyline, but the author's attitude towards life The overall writing style tends to be indifferent, which is the feeling of ordinary life. The focus of this book is not palace fighting. Although there are also mentions, such as slapping the female partner, the female partner turning her head and forcing the maid to kneel on the steps, the fertility issues of the royal heirs, etc., These are not the focus. The author spends a lot of pen and ink to write about the personal life of the heroine, especially the cat, which is very vivid. I guess the author is a cat slave in his daily life. From the daily routine of eating, drinking, sleeping, and sleeping, to reflect a kind of stability and freedom, to reflect the heroine's calmness, and to see through the carefreeness of aging in the world, this is the real essence of this book. 2. Because the plot is brought to life, the main line is a little unclear I read Chapter 40, and the general content is that the heroine saved a man twice, fought with other concubines several times, raised a cat, rewarded flowers several times, rejected the emperor several times, and who came from foreign countries... It is relatively fragmented. Because the protagonist has a simple life style, living quietly without fighting or grabbing, this keeps the main line of the storyline in daily life. Apart from the daily life, nothing has changed much. Who did you meet today, what will you eat tomorrow, what fun things will you do the day after tomorrow... It doesn't matter if the time is short, but over time, you will get tired of aesthetics. I read Chapter 40 and don't know how it will develop later, but I think the breakthrough point lies in the two male protagonists and the general environment setting. The background of this book is that the emperor has just succeeded to the throne and the dynasty is very short. It can be said that the foundation is not very stable. There must be a solution to internal and external troubles, and it is okay to focus on the peace and prosperity of the country. The continuous battles between the imperial court and the Jianghu forces are also good breaking points. It is not a bad idea for the heroine to come out from the palace to the front, put down the chaos, and then grow again, becoming an empress who expands the territory of the country to the greatest extent! Of course, the above paragraph is all nonsense, mainly because I need to arrange goals for the heroine. The author's idea may be to "make the heroine who is bent on pursuing a quiet life have to go through the turbulent changes in the world." For example, some of the orders given by the emperor behind his back, Mai's attitude towards the emperor, and the little secrets in the library... These may be hidden clues or foreshadowing. If it is foreshadowing, these plots are a bit sparse in the early 80,000 words. If it involves big issues such as the grievances of the imperial court and the people of the country, then this book is a huge and comprehensive book, and all kinds of monsters and monsters must be displayed from a certain angle. If this book is mainly about the daily life of the heroine, and the style is carried out to the end, there will be no problem for the protagonist, but for the readers, there will be no focus. Readers read books because they have expectations for the development of the story. I am full of expectations for the heroine's emotional line. If this book is mainly about romance and specifically talks about lost and found love, that would also be very good! Talking about the progress of love is also a very good main line! 3. The writing style is acceptable, but the text is stingy in scene changes In fact, this problem has been adjusted in the later stage. For example, when changing the environment, more descriptions of the scenery will be added. The human brain has delays. It always takes time to transition from the previous shot to the next shot. Novels are different from movies and TV series. They rely more on imagination. If there is not enough foreshadowing in this shot, it will cause confusion for the reader. Also, there can be more detailed descriptions. The author's thoughts jump quickly and sometimes the readers can't keep up. Then the detailed description is a way to slow down the author's thoughts and let the readers keep up with the rhythm. For example, in the section going up to the library, although the entire scene is shown, I always feel that it could be more detailed. My impression of the library is that it is a three-story building. There is nothing dusty on the first floor and the location is relatively remote. There is nothing else. Because of the environment, it will make people feel more immersed, pay more attention to what the protagonist does, and become more curious about the details. In the same way, it will make the whole book more vivid. 4. Because the style of the novel is quiet, it has high requirements for the setting of explosive points It is obviously inappropriate to use a calm writing style to control the fast-paced palace battle theme. Fortunately, this book is not a novel with the theme of palace fighting, so its tranquility has become its characteristic. Because of its "features", it will suffer in terms of rhythm. Fast-paced books will keep readers' cerebral cortex in a high state, but calm-style books are soothing and lazy and require stimulation from time to time. However, you need to be very restrained when it comes to explosive plots. You should be like a dragonfly touching water, only causing ripples and not making waves. The author is obviously very restrained in this area. It can be felt that the author is very kind, at least he has not been cruel to the characters. The only things that are more severe are slaps in the mouth and kneeling as punishment. In fact, if you want to enhance the readability, you can slightly increase the current "slight abuse" to "little abuse". This may go against the author's wishes, but it will be very useful in attracting readers. The above are just personal opinions and do not represent public taste. Overall, this book is still very good, and it can be regarded as a refreshing change in palace novels. Finally let's make a summary! 1. Because I don't know the overall layout, so based on the 80,000 words I have read so far, the most suitable path for this book is to seek a lost and recovered life, where the female protagonist accepts love again under the influence of the male protagonist. A book like this will also make people want to put it down! 2. There can be more descriptions of the environment, details, etc. After all, there is no harm, but a lot of benefits. 3. On the premise of not violating the author's wishes, a little abuse will make the whole book more eye-catching. Finally, I am sure that Da Da is a cat slave!

I like the 1v1 setting, spare tire and so on, it is inherently annoying ~ the rebirth plot was originally used to take revenge and overlook all the scum in the previous life. But when used well, it becomes the heroine's primary character. Remember the lesson without losing your authenticity. Knowing how to look back, knowing how to cherish... Well, that's what a lovable heroine is like. That's about it, I'll add it after reading it. 😁

It seems that the author has put great effort into writing. This may be the reason why this book is the author's first book. The outline of the characters is still rough and has obvious characteristics like ancient sayings. The characters are stereotyped and idolized, far away from the soil of reality. The grasp of human nature is still a bit shallow. It can be seen that the author tried his best to avoid this situation, but it still regrettably showed traces.

Come on in the fog(ง •̀_•́)ง

It's foggy, so I'm here to write a book review for you. (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑) First of all, I have only read Chapter 4. My first impression of the heroine Luo Qiuyue: Daughters should strengthen themselves. In the beginning, she was reborn, and the ending of her previous life was to hang herself. It means that she has no hope of surviving in her previous life. But once you are reborn, you have a chance to do it again! At this time, the heroine came online quickly. She first dealt with the poisonous woman who was a demon in her previous life, and also changed her reputation in her previous life. I like this rhythm very much. Because I am quite busy, I will read this here first and will continue to comment next time. In the fog, we are going to duck!

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After ten years, the beautiful face has gradually become bleak, but a handful of neon clothes are as new as new. Returning to Fengyi Palace in the second life, my heart is proud of Qingyun after nine revolutions! Unlike the noisy and lovable woman, this heroine is very quiet. Just like her name, it is an ink painting. Don't rely on color to catch people's eyes, don't win people's hearts with charm. But she has her own attraction. Where the ink falls, the shades are appropriate, and the white space is taken into consideration. It's not a monster, it's not cute, but it hurts people's hearts. This kind of character is extremely rare in online literature. The last time I saw her, she was a medical concubine written by a certain master. The story structure is very three-dimensional, and multiple aspects promote the progress of the plot. Construct a complete classical world that feels within reach. Highly recommended, must read! First, I would like to offer a bouquet of flowers to the author 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Ahem, please everyone, if you don't read the book or follow it, don't give rewards to Wuli 😁 You said that you just reward and don't read the book. Isn't this a waste? Isn't it? You might as well buy a piece of candy and eat it yourself

Will it be released on the 30th? I still have 2 monthly passes. You can tell me whether to keep them or not.

This is such a big article, from the conception to the writing style, it is really speechless. The plot is interlocking and the foreshadowing is very clever. I really love it! ! 😌

The writing is very nice, 6 votes support the author! Why are there so few clicks?

In fact, this is a crowdfunding project. Obsessive-compulsive disorder, no matter how I name it, it doesn't sound right. And I like Inuyasha, also known as Ergouzi, very much. But you can't really name it that way, right? Otherwise, I feel like there won't be many people in my fan team. So... What name can you think of that would be better? The content of the picture below is what I thought before Well, since you can see this, it means that you are not only patient but also a cute fan of this book So, Wuli has a small activity Only for those who have turned to this place 🌹 Name whatever Wuli finds interesting: give a supporting role What? You ask me what a supporting actor is A supporting character is a character that can appear in the book, big or small The identity, story or some skills, etc. Can be drawn up by the supporting actor himself. Well, the ending can be provided and then referred to appropriately [Of course before Tip: Don't go beyond the scope of ancient proverbs, otherwise you will appear in the next book~] [Appropriate modifications: If there are any changes that need to be made to adapt to this book, they will be explained in the building above the building] [The last point: Entertainment is more interactive, so you can accept it]

The sky is blue waiting for misty rain, and the fog is waiting for you. 😊It is really sweet to vote for Dada.

Cherry is so confused, she is such a pitiful and hateful character 😭

The writing is very delicate, and the palace fight scene is really awesome (ง •̀_•́)ง

Wuli Come on in the fog... 😊😊😊 First order support, congratulations on the launch

From the time I planned to write nearly two hundred chapters to now, I have neither missed my medical grades nor missed updates day and night during this period. Sometimes I am still locked in the "little dark room" coding in the middle of the night (the rough man feels bad). "There are still a thousand words left, finish coding before going to sleep" I also wanted to write a novel before, and I had thousands of troops in mind, and even the names of the characters were drawn up, but when I was about to start writing, I hesitated... Could I really write that kind of scene - so I didn't move (this lazy demon is damn charming) In short, good job, little boss! 521 Send a flower to cheer up~

I opened this building to explain to you some of the more abstract things that appear in the book. Of course, if you don't understand anything, you can ask me in the building [ps: there are no spoilers for plot characters, etc.] First of all, let me tell you about the "wooden shooting" that appeared in chapters 97 and 98. Conceptually, you can completely understand it as an ancient version of bowling ball, but the material is changed compared with modern times. In the Song Dynasty, Chao Gongwu gave a brief explanation of the "Mushe Picture" in his "Junzhai Study Chronicles" and left us with a more vivid description. He said: "In the "Mushe Picture", Lu Bing of the Tang Dynasty represented fifteen bamboo shoots to represent the marquis and hit the earth to touch it. Decorated with Zhu and Mo characters to indicate nobility and disgrace. Zhu means benevolence and righteousness. , Propriety, wisdom, trust, gentleness, kindness, respect, frugality, and concession. Mohist: Arrogance, arrogance, greed, abuse. The benevolent will win, and the abuse will be punished. " The following is a picture Okay, that's it for Mu She's explanation. If you have any other questions, you can ask them below. When you ask a question, write a serial number. For example, if the number upstairs is 1, then you write 2. This will make it easier to organize the directory in the future~

Very good! The writing is so good, I read yours before looking at my own, alas! I can't say it... It's hard to describe it in one word, support, support, support

🌿Song of the Reincarnated Queen She is a bit skinny and cute She is a bit smart and a bit weird Her past life is a bit sad Her current life is a bit exciting The emperor she loved was stupid in the previous life He didn't understand people well He deserved it

I keep seeing you at Wanzi's place, come and support me

The chapter 1.54 Sleepless Night has been blocked. It depends on the situation. If the ban is not lifted after the limelight is over, it will be changed again. It will be just a chapter on toy cars. If you skip it, it will not affect the plot. 2. The author will not delete the post, and the system will eat it. I won't say much about the recent rectifications on the site. It is hard to say whether I will spit it out in the future. Many chapters in the background are gone.

Three votes for the female channel every day... Finally found a place to vote 😂

It's almost half a million words, it's amazing 👍👍👍

You have quite a few posts here 😁

Oops, this writing style attracted me so much that I have collected both books for study! So well written!

I'm really curious about the man in the secret room, so is Zhongliqing played by two people? White night travel in ancient costume?

After the holiday, I can finally stay up late and read novels without any distractions. Arrangements [emot = default,88/]

Do you want to be so appetizing?