Yan Yan Flew Far Away and Sent Her to the South

Commentator: Nan Jian has not sent Number of words read: 51w Liang Quan·Liang Guoxinjun Keywords: Beiyan Proton, Nanliang Xinjun , with a tough temperament Character evaluation: He is a lone wolf who has been dormant in Beiyan for ten years. He has worked hard for the eagle in the wilderness all his life, but he has never been able to retain a dream he had when he was a boy. (Excerpted from the introduction of the pirated book of this book. It should be the previous introduction. I had not seen this book at that time.) I like this character very much. He is well portrayed. It is more reasonable that the book should be renamed "The New King of the Six Kingdoms: The Biography of Liang Quan". Although Moyu gave him the key words at the beginning of the chapter: "Ten years are a pledge, the biological mother dies early, the brothers are separated, and the husband does not favor him." On the wedding night, his wife came with revenge and hurt him and left. In the situation of autumn water, she discovered Langya Jiaoying's old grudges. A song of autumn water written by her biological mother and two pieces of autumn water poems added to the tragic experience of this character But I found that the whole story seemed to revolve around Liang Quan. Although the heroine had a grudge against Liang Quan, she later made him fight for the world because of a piece of pact. Although the hero was an outstanding strategist and was famous among the Six Kingdoms, he met Liang Quan in his early years. He first defeated Liang Quan and helped him ascend to the position of the new king. Although the Qiushui game is exciting, it is Liang Quan's prequel. A mission to Northern Yan also highlighted the conflict between Liang Quan and the entire Yan Kingdom. Later, the dream in the garden, the plot against Liang Mo, and the palace coup all paved the way for him to fight for the throne. The Twenty-Four Solar Terms, the Mei Epidemic Rebellion, and the hundreds of thousands of troops from the Eastern Qi Dynasty pressing down on the country also caused internal and external troubles after he ascended the throne. I really like what the author said about Liang Quan in his mind: "His character is condensed in his name "Quan". Quan is calamus, which means a virtuous person, and it also refers to the king. Calamus is a cold-resistant grass. Liang Quan is not yet a monarch, just like the calamus that grows in the cold winter. Ten years are a pledge. His biological mother died early, his brothers were separated, his father did not value him, and he could not love him. He finally became the king. In my heart, he is not hypocritical, but tenacious. This is the Liang Quan who "hides his wealth and is not fragrant for a long time" The relationship between the heroine and Liang Quan is fruitless, "Lan Zhi changes and becomes less fragrant, and Quan Hui turns into grass." "The orchids have lost their fragrance, and the orchids have turned into vines.  He is not yet a king. Now he is not "the untrustworthy emotion of a king". On the contrary, he is very sincere and affectionate but has no results. He will eventually become an untrustworthy king. If he is frustrated, he will become stronger, just like the vanilla sealed in the dark environment, which will not be fragrant for a long time. " Chu Zhan·Counselor of the World Keywords: Sin slave of the Northern Wei Dynasty, prince of the Western Chu, extraordinary strategy Character evaluation: He is the fairy prince in the hearts of the people of the world, but he is also a person who holds chess pieces to bring chaos to the world. He has the ability to stabilize the country, but he is the one who stirs up troubles. If Liang Quan is the protagonist, Chu Zhan is definitely his counselor on the road to conquering the world. After the six countries become one country, he should be the prime minister of one country. There are really many reversals in him. First, for example, at first I thought Liang Quan was the male protagonist, but I didn't expect him to be the male protagonist, which was surprising. (Could it be that Liang Quan is destined to be the master of the world, so he is not worthy of falling in love? I think it is reasonable to think this way. The world belongs to Liang Quan, and the heroine belongs to Chu Zhan.) Secondly, I thought that the male protagonist and the heroine wanted to destroy the Liang Kingdom, but I did not expect that he was the one who united with the Liang Kingdom to defeat the Yan Kingdom. Third, I thought he was an immortal prince, a prince in Western Chu, with a strategist, good looks, and a perfect character. I didn't expect that he was actually a sin slave. He fought for survival in the city of sin slaves in the Northern Wei Dynasty. Because of his appearance, he joined the Junji Exchange and was even assigned to the Ximen clan, the first clan in the Northern Wei Dynasty. "Everyone in the world calls me a fairy, but they don't know that I climbed up from hell." (In the end, Lan Zha, Chu Zhan and Yifei should have stories. In this way, the protagonist's emotional line can overpower the supporting characters.) Yunhui Wei (Yunhui&Yunwei)•The sun and the moon shine together Keywords: Twins in the Eastern Qi Dynasty, the two sons share one name Character evaluation:The sun and the moon shine together, the twin stars are born, the situation is great, and the country is about to perish. They are the people in the spring boudoir dream of a girl from the Eastern Qi Dynasty. They should have lived a glorious life like the title "Ye", but because of the sixteen-character prophecy, they can only live one person. I have to say that the setting of twins is really amazing. According to the conventional routine, one is dead and the other embarks on the path of chaos for revenge. Unexpectedly, Yun Hui and Yun Wei share the same name, named Yun Hui Wei. Although Yun Wei and Yun Hui are twins, they are completely different. Judging from their life aspirations, the two people are very different. Yun Wei: All he wants in his life is for someone to call him "Yun Wei", not Yun Hui Wei. Yun Hui: My lifelong wish is to sit on the highest position in the world and let everyone know that King Ye Yun Huiwei is two people. Yun Wei loves to dance and write, and Yun Hui loves to ride horses and shoot arrows. These two people became the Ye King Yun Hui Wei in the eyes of the people of the Six Kingdoms, and they also became known as the Four Young Masters of the Six Kingdoms. And Bai Jianjia, who had grown up with them since childhood, loved Yun Huiwei, a Yunwen and Wuyun, and she didn't know whether she loved Yunwei or Yunhui until her death. But there are two places that impressed me deeply. 1. Bai Jianjia got married, and Yun Huiwei was named "Ye" King. Later Yunhui asked Yunwei: What does the word ye mean? Yun Wei said: Brilliant. Yun Hui replied: Then live a glorious life. 2. Yunwei and Lanzha played chess twice, but there was no winner both times. Now that the two are generals of the same country and are about to meet each other on the battlefield, Yun Wei said: Does it mean that the outcome of our unfinished chess game must be determined on the battlefield? Zhou Yuheng·Bright Star Keywords: Prince of the Northern Zhou Dynasty, admiration for Yi Fei, bird in a cage Character Comments Price:Born on the day of the state banquet of the Northern Zhou Dynasty, he was the destiny of the Northern Zhou subjects. In the royal family of the Northern Zhou Dynasty, where there were more girls than boys, he was the only prince. The subjects regarded him as the person who led the Northern Zhou Dynasty to prosperity, but he was the one who never left the imperial city. Yuheng: the brightest star in the Big Dipper The Northern Zhou Dynasty is the smallest country of the Six Kingdoms. In this turbulent era, the only prince of the Northern Zhou Dynasty, Zhou Yuheng, has high hopes. He has been a caged bird in the imperial city for more than 20 years and has never set foot far away, so he admires the female general Yifei who conquers all directions. However, the person he married in the end was Lan Jiang, who was a caged bird in the imperial city with him and had never left Beiyan Imperial City. However, later, due to Lan Jiang's unfortunate illness, the plague spread to Bianjing in the southern Liang Dynasty, and the ten cities of Northern Yan that were originally her dowry for the Northern Zhou Dynasty were compensated to Liang Quan, and the conflict between the two resumed. ifier | (Well, let's leave it to Kongming lanterns to solve the problem of distant places that can't be reached. If one Kongming lantern can't solve the problem, let's use the whole city's Kongming lanterns. On the day Lan Jiang and Zhou Yuheng got married, the entire Qijing people set off Kongming lanterns for them, as if the sky was full of them. There are many stars, but the brightest star in his heart has already lit up for Yi Fei) Writing suggestions: I have never written a book, so I don't know how to write writing suggestions, so I will just tell you my thoughts. Unrealistic suggestions: 1. I think it would be more like a historical drama if the protagonist of this book was not Lan Zi but Liang Quan. If it was Lan Zai, she would inevitably have a female emotional side. If it were Liang Quan, it would be more brilliant and more consistent with many unexplainable logics, such as the change of thinking of the female protagonist, the inaction of the male protagonist, etc.     —"The New King of the Six Kingdoms: The Biography of Liang Quan"  2. Although it is fictional, from a historical perspective, it is mostly legendary and does not conform to historical facts. But if it is serious official history, I might not read it. I would just read history books. How tiring that would be. I am just a reader of novels (what I say is so contradictory, but it is the truth.) The reason why I like reading novels is that I like to see them turn the impossible of reality into possibility. 3. There are so many typos... Emmmmm that I can't even bother to point them out.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         but the author's next step should be to fight. I don't even know how to write, so I can only recommend books: 1. "Test the World" Before the martial arts and after the war, there are many amazing and talented characters, and it is also the war of several countries. It is more legendary than the book Yan Yan. The people in it seem to be more... Like super gods than the people in this book. But it's well written and can be used as a reference. 2. "The Legend of Chu Qiao" also has wars and slaves. You can refer to slaves. 3. The entire storyline of "Amai Joins the Army" is a battlefield, and large-scale battles are described in detail. 4. "The Queen of Arms" is a trap halfway through, but the entire storyline is also a battlefield. It is a war that makes people excited and excited to watch it. It is not cruel, so you can refer to it. (If you read novels written by women on the battlefield, you can recommend them to this bald author.)

Number of words read: 60,000+ Chapter 1 to 10: Poison Test: Liang Quan, a proton of Nan Liang, attacked Bei Yan, won a great victory and almost destroyed the Yan Kingdom. In the end, he returned to the court on the pretext of marrying Yan Lanzha, the princess of Yan Kingdom. In the wedding night, when a big event is about to happen, the heroine kills her husband to prove her truth. Of course it was unsuccessful. The heroine was rescued by Prince Xi Chuzhan and arranged for her to die in the fire in order to let the heroine re-live her life. After some training, the heroine successfully joined the army and made many friends in the recruit camp, all of whom became important figures in the future. Chapter 92 to 101: Testing Poison: Bei Yan Lan Jiang chooses a bride, and princes from all over the world gather at the Bei Yan Palace. After a fierce competition, Lan Jiang succeeds in marrying Zhou Yuheng, the prince of Northern Zhou Dynasty. It's just like what I thought, during the wedding night, everyone still sleeps separately. Everyone is an aspiring member of the royal family, and all they care about is the world. The love between children is just an embellishment! Testing the Poison in Chapters 224 to 233: At this time, Liang Quan has proclaimed himself emperor, and he and the heroine Lan Zai are no longer husband and wife, but monarchs and ministers. Lan Zha took charge of the Hongyan Army and the Black Eagle Army to defeat the Eastern Qi. The princes of Qi, Yun Wei and Yun Hui, are twins, but share the same name. They are also one of the four princes, and they are the targets of the heroine's attack. With hard work, Lan Zha won the military power of the Black Hawk Army and won the military morale of the four lieutenants. It can be seen that the ability to command troops and subordinates is extraordinary. Feelings and Thoughts: The author has a big picture. As written in the introduction, the Chu, Liang, Qi, and Yan kingdoms are in dispute, and the heroine competes with the men in the world and leads the way. With her weak talents, the heroine passed training, entered the military camp, became a general, won great military exploits, and became a talent that all countries competed for. Of course there are those who admire, there are those who fear, and there are also those who trust. You are the heroine, you are the best~ The author's writing style and writing style are very stable. In ancient proverbs, especially those about ancient hegemony, the romance has been weakened. But the author's ancient literary skills and historical knowledge reserve behind him are quite strong. Even the name of the heroine could only be found after Baidu. By reading the author's books, you can not only appreciate the beautiful writing style, but also increase your knowledge and knowledge, and you can also attract girls and men. You can achieve multiple things with one stone! Writing suggestions: Plot design: First, the empress route. After defeating Dong Qi, the twins were in civil strife and the country of Qi was in crisis, so the heroine was invited to rule. Liang Quan, the new emperor of Nanliang, was overthrown by other princes or died unexpectedly. The Liang Kingdom was in turmoil. Some old officials discovered the true identity of the heroine and wanted to make her the emperor. Chuzhan of Western Chu naturally disagreed. After all, he had already worshiped heaven and earth, so he led his troops to attack Liang Guo. After a dispute, Western Chu and Nanliang got married. As for Beiyan, it is the mother country of the heroine. You can also design turmoil, plague, or natural disasters. It is best to encounter a royal family murder when visiting the Yan Kingdom and trigger a war. In short, one principle. Wherever the heroine goes, there will be turmoil. He will try his best to help the heroine become the emperor and unify the world. The hero and the supporting actor die at the right time. But the dragon seed must be left behind so that he can personally govern from behind the curtain in the future. Second, the fairy route. After becoming emperor, it is inevitable to be bored. When the heroine remembers her lover, she has the idea of ​​cultivating immortality, just like the First Emperor and others. On the one hand, he secretly cultivates immortality, on the other hand, he raises the prince, on the other hand, he shows the new policy and fights with the ministers and the royal family. Third, the palace battle route. After proclaiming himself emperor, the prince grew up and prepared to ascend the throne, only to discover that he was not of the former emperor's blood, triggering a coup. After the suppression, the prince successfully ascended the throne. Afterwards, there was controversy over the selection of concubines, fights in the harem, and so on. To expand your imagination, you can refer to the biography of Zhen Huan, which goes all the way to the period of the Queen Mother. Character design: More detailed and fuller. Because the plot jumps quickly and there are too many characters, the character's personality is not very clear and the picture is a bit weak. It is recommended to highlight the personality of key characters through the characters' language, clothing, movements, attitudes, etc., And design some special decorations or small actions to enhance memory points. For example, the clown can increase the action of picking his nose, the beauty can cover her face with a fan, and the general can inject chicken blood and shout slogans. Summary: Main drama: The story ends with the heroine becoming emperor. The details will be slightly increased based on the current situation. After two million is completed, the heroine must at least achieve the position of the Queen Mother, and various details must be comprehensively increased, including language, environment, and characters. The plot is increased, including invasion by foreigners and resurrection from the dead. Drama: Then please increase the number of words. Take a 2,000-word chapter as an example. The first 300 words are about the environment, the middle 1,000 words are about dialogue, the last 400 words are about action scenes, and the end is about 300 words about foreshadowing or twists. Cultivation of Immortality: Then there is no limit. It depends on how far you want to cultivate. If it is more than three million words, you can cultivate the earth, infinite time travel, ancient and modern time travel, plane travel, three lives and three lives, whatever you want. Finally: Write the novel you want to write, do not follow the readers' preferences or go against your own wishes. When you find that writing is very painful and you can't continue writing no matter what, you can stop for a while and try again. If you still have no love. Then, it's time to finish and start a new book. However, I still hope that there will be more than one million, at least I will have preliminary ideas for various structures, designs, worlds, characters, etc. I am wrong, please forgive me! Hope this helps you a little bit! I am Cang Yiwei, I bring salt for myself!

"Poetry" said: "Give me peaches and repay Qiong Yao. It is always good to be repaid by a bandit!" In view of the fact that Heiyu spared time from his busy schedule and worked hard to write a wonderful book review for Benlong, so in the spirit of never returning, Benlong hereby submits a book review, please accept it. Number of reading words: about 50,000, the first copy is over Writing suggestions: Between the lines in the main text, choose your own as appropriate —————————————— 1. Introduction to the book title: The title of the book is derived from "The Book of Songs·Beifeng·Yanyan", which [highlights] a certain cultural temperament. The ancient sayings of Nupin seem to like this format of four or sixty-eight sentences, such as "Three Lives, Three Worlds and Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms", "A fish swims north and returns to the underworld as Kun", and "Mountains and rivers hire the sun and moon as matchmakers". Generally speaking, they are catchy and not bad. The introduction is a bit poor. The first two seven-character sentences are actually the product of a mashup. The original sentences are "Who will rule the ups and downs of the Spring and Autumn Period for a hundred years" and "The children of Jiangdong are so talented that it is unknown whether they will make a comeback." However, mixing and matching seems to be the author's habit. There are many similar assembled poems in the text, which may seem a bit inconsistent to the discerning eye. The following sentence of introduction is concise and concise, but unfortunately it is a wrong sentence without a subject. The word "" is a typo, and the phrase "road to wind and cloud" is still unclear. In fact, the author's writing is outstanding, but it is not easy to make all the mistakes in words, phrases and sentences in one sentence. 2. Writing format: To use a classic line from a CEO article: "Woman, you have caught my attention." The author's book is written with great literary talent, and his writing style is extremely outstanding. Even if the author cannot say that he admires her wholeheartedly, he certainly feels sympathy for her. The author's sentences are elegant and calm, with a unique charm, first-class atmosphere, and accurate descriptions. It can even be used as a textbook for writing training. There are wonderful clips everywhere, and the random excerpts are worth reading carefully, which is a testament to your skill. There are some flaws in the format. In addition to some paragraphs being too long, there are also too many typos, especially typos in some key positions that can cause confusion every minute. The author laughs at himself for being a typo, and he has a bit of a literary ruffian spirit of "not being ashamed, but being proud of it". However, such typos do seriously affect the reading experience, especially when the writing is outstanding. I hereby solemnly suggest to the author that he should go back and do more proofreading when he has time. He is responsible for both himself and the readers. 3. Character setting: The author's character creation can be said to be very layered. Who is the heroine, who is the first male, who is the second male, who is licorice, and who is the secondary actor, you can easily judge from the amount of pen and ink spent, which reflects the skillful writing skills. In particular, he is good at using details to enrich the character of the characters. Many seemingly inadvertent or unnecessary plots actually make the characters' images stand out to a large extent. This is especially valuable in the Internet environment that emphasizes short, flat and quick writing, and is closer to the writing method of traditional literature. The character's personality and life background are not told completely, but are gradually revealed as the plot evolves. Some foreshadowings are used well, which is often refreshing. However, sometimes there will be a slight split in the character. Take the heroine as an example. As the princess of the Yan Kingdom, the author initially gave her a character that is calm, sophisticated and understanding of righteousness, so she can calmly accept the fate of marrying an enemy country and bravely assassinate her husband on the wedding night. But with the appearance of the male protagonist, the female protagonist instantly degenerates into a young girl who has just started to fall in love. She has no immunity to the male protagonist's teasing. The sudden change in her personality is inevitably shocking. Then the heroine resolutely joined the army, and without any obstacles she was labeled as a heroic (future) female general. She prided herself on being a flamboyant and proud heroine, and even openly confronted the eldest prince of the Liang Kingdom regardless of the consequences. This was completely different from the initial character design. As the saying goes, it is difficult to agree with everyone. The author may want his heroine too much to please all readers, so the personality shown in different situations is also very different. The result is that it may be enjoyable to watch at the time, but it cannot withstand scrutiny afterwards. This is worthy of careful consideration by the author. 4. Storyline: The theme of the story is very big, including the hatred between the country and the family, the love between children, and even the in-depth discussion of "the journey of the great road and the world is for the common good", which is especially impressive in female videos. The plot development is also wonderful, with many outstanding explosive points and touching tears. The details are well done and the book effect is also good. However, there are some problems with rhythm control. After the fierce conflict in the three golden chapters, the plot related to the recruit camp seems too light (sha) and loose (diao). If not careful, readers will forget that the heroine is still the enemy of the country and the family. After the plot came to the city of sin slaves, the atmosphere immediately became heavy and abnormal. The rapid advancement of the plot lacked necessary foreshadowing, making it impossible for readers to change their emotions naturally. In addition, the details of the story are also weak, which is concentrated in the conflict between the heroine and the eldest prince. Although the eldest prince is a drunkard and a womanizer, it does not mean that he has low business intelligence. However, he is easily approached by a heroine with no background and is threatened into obeying her words in just a few words. This is somewhat childish. Although it is a common routine to praise the protagonist and despise the villain, it should be limited to reasonable logic. If it is excessively distorted, although it may seem enjoyable, it is actually inferior. 5. Simple Suggestions: The online literature world is a place where demand determines supply. Authors are often reduced to a humble role trying to figure out what is best. Not everyone has Zhang Muzhi's courage and can make money standing up. So I hope the author can find a balance between sticking to his original intention and catering to readers, gradually exploring and experimenting with the critical state that satisfies both parties, and the future will be promising.

Although it seems to me that it's all trivial, I mainly watch the plot. (Student party, you are too poor to give rewards, you read books for free, please give me suggestions and write comments to support) 1. The threshold is too high at the beginning, although I have annotated it, and you have also changed a lot of uncommon words, but it is not clear enough, and it may be easy to persuade them to quit 2. There are too many characters at the palace banquet in Chapter 2, I am afraid I can't remember them. But there is still a sense of expectation 3. Titles, the bug of emperor and king, queen and queen. There are also some ancient bugs, but for the sake of emptiness, I won't mention them~ emptiness is the way to go~ 4. Just reading the beginning can easily make people misunderstand that this article is tragic or even depressing. However, I didn't expect that the heroine was very domineering in the end and asked the hero to be with her. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is obviously very sweet, and they are always trying to show off their feelings... I feel like you should mention it in the introduction to avoid being considered as emotionally abusive. (Serial...)

[Number of words read]: 51w [Commentator]: Shi Hua Xia [Introduction] "There are many talents in the Spring and Autumn Period, and it is unknown who will rise and fall." As a female figure, she competed with the men in the world and embarked on the road to success. [Note]: The background of this book is fictional and does not require a sense of historical substitution. ———————————————————— (I searched for the title of the book and found this one. It also appears in the work, and Sister Yu'er seems to have said it herself. But I still highlighted it with a symbol, ehhehe~) "Yan Yan" [Pre-Qin] Anonymous Yan Yan is flying, and her feathers are different. The son returned home and was sent far away into the wild. LookingLooking beyond reach, weeping like rain. The swallows are flying, and they are flying. When his son returns home, he is far away from his general. LookingLooking beyond reach, standing and crying. Yan Yan is flying, and its sound is rising from below. The son returned home and was sent far to the south. LookIt is beyond my reach, but it really works my heart. Zhong's heart is blocked if he is left alone. At the end of the day, he is warm and helpful, and he is careful about himself. The thoughts of the first emperor are used to win over others. ［Translation］ Swallows fly in the sky, spreading their wings unevenly. The girl is getting married today, and we are seeing each other by the roadside in the countryside. LookingNo one could be seen, and tears were falling like rain. Swallows are flying in the sky, their postures are falling and rising. My sister is getting married far away today, so it won't be too long to see each other off. [Looking] No one could be seen, standing there with tears streaming down his face. Swallows fly in the sky, singing low and low. The girl is getting married today and sending each other off to the south. [Looking] I can't see anyone, which is really sad and sad. Second SisterIntegrity and stability, practical and profound thinking. Gentle and respectful, cautious and kind-hearted. I often think about my father, and his warnings ring in my ears.   ●[Brief Analysis of the Protagonist's Image] ◆Lanza "Although I don't know what the world of Datong in your minds looks like. I have never thought about saving the world with one person's power. But I will try my best to destroy the injustice in this world." The most beautiful woman in the world, the most beautiful woman in the six countries, with peerless beauty. The second princess of the defeated Yan Kingdom She changed her name to Chu Jiu and entered the new military camp. Enter the cavalry camp and become the champion in martial arts. Secretary of the Ministry of War, General Yulin Zhonglang, and General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom. Kind and strong, but poor at cooking. Open-minded and high-level. ◆Chu Zhan "I just want to reorganize the world's political power. As for who is the master of the world, it has nothing to do with me." He has stirred up disputes in the world, and he will not participate in this drama of competing for the throne. Songjian, the best young master in the world, is as noble and tall as jade and pine green. The prince of Chu State with noble blood Sin slave, warrior, extraordinary strategist, courage and talent, Mysterious, scheming, and played a big game of chess. Overthrow the world and abolish slavery ●[Brief description of characters + brief analysis of plot] ◇Marry far away in the south [Lan Zai marries far away, runs away as a newlywed, and Chu Zhan makes his debut. I thought it would be "He used his swords to pile up piles of corpses and separated her from her parents and brothers, but she destroyed his country and his family with a single strike of her fragrant skirt." Such a masterpiece of revenge, but this is not the case. The man behind the scenes is Chu Zhan. I felt that it would be heartbreaking when the truth came out, but it didn't. ◇Jiangque·City of Sin Slaves "Because of my cowardice, I dare not open my arms to you. When spring comes, I embrace my death and die in the dust." Beautiful military concubine, strong female slave, Liang Quan's undercover agent, Xu Wu's favorite. He died tragically due to poisoning and was buried in the sea of ​​​​fire with his lover. [Lanza changed his name to Chu Jiu and entered the military camp for the first time, and made a splash in the city of sin slaves] [The eldest prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls"] Xu Wu, who advocated world harmony, did not deserve to die. The part about the recruit camp is really wonderfully written. There is lightness and humor in the seriousness. The character of Ji Ziyi was created quite successfully, I really like it. "Is that you, Xiu'er?" And then there's Ji's women's clothing, ha. ◇Lou Lan·Qiushui Bureau "A collection of Langya paper, the book is full of love." The daughter of Lou Xiang, famous all over Kyoto. He admired Liang Quan and was imprisoned for his infatuation. She cut her wrists and was rescued. She was granted the title of concubine and stayed with her. [Lan Tzu enters the court, becomes the minister of the Ministry of War of the fourth rank, and solves the Qiushui case] [The building collapses] The solution of the Qiushui case gave me a sense of immediacy like "The Record in the Hairpin". Sister Yu'er has good writing style and detailed descriptions. But Chu Zhan doesn't appear much, so I want to call the missing male protagonist. ◇Lanjiang·Fengyunjihui (marriage selection meeting) The bird is dressed as a canary in the palace, it is willing to be a caged bird, Princess Yan is pitiful and pathetic. [Lan Zai abolished the cruel and powerful entertainment activities, Lan Jiang used the city as a dowry to marry Zhou] Sister Yu'er's pattern is actually quite big, unlike ordinary female video authors. But for some reason, I was so embarrassed at the marriage selection meeting. The picture is a bit awkward, I don't dare to imagine it. ◇Manji·Dreams in the Garden "It rains for three minutes in the spring, but there is a cloud in Wushan when I go to sleep." A famous actor and actress, a witch who brings disaster to the country. Drunk and warm in the gentle countryside, taking poison and going to hell together. [The second prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls", Liang Quan ascends to the throne, Lan Zai regains her daughter's body and becomes General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom] Lan Zai and Chu Zhan finally have more interactions. However, I feel that the relationship between the second prince and Man Ji is a bit strange. The two of them felt like they were sleeping together. The plot is a bit rushed. Sister Yu'er writes about passionate love and infatuation, "I don't know where the love starts, but it goes deeper and deeper." ◇Bailu·Bianjing Plum Epidemic "The jianjia is green, and the white dew is like frost. The so-called love is on the other side of the water." After all, you can't get it. Bai Jianjia is the daughter of Bai Cang, a great scholar of the Eastern Qi Dynasty. I am a childhood sweetheart with my twins. Cause the chaos in Bianjing, and draw blood to make medicine and fragrance. [Chaos in Liang, the twenty-four solar terms, and Yunhui's plan is beginning to appear. Farewell, the two countries are at war, leaving Yinchuan. Emotions are really terrible things, and chaos arises from emotions. It is estimated that there will be more drama behind the twenty-four solar terms. Sister Yu'er's plot design is very clever, thumbs up. ◇Yifei Jinghong Female General Not many appearances so far. "Although I can't take you out of the imperial city, I can tell you what the outside world is like." This sentence suddenly reminded me of the story of Wang Quan and Qingtong. [Questions & Writing Suggestions] ◇Sister Yu'er's plot concept is clever and exciting. The twins gathered together in the clouds at the beginning, which is eye-catching. Later, Po Yanjunji, The Game of Autumn Waters, and The Twenty-Four Solar Terms were really impressive. The description is exquisite. After reading the whole novel, I feel happy physically and mentally. The talented man and beautiful woman are pleasing to the eye and very seductive. His literary skills are really good, and I will never accept any refutation of this. Lanza Chuzhan's interaction was really sweet again. But compared to the supporting characters, the protagonist's feelings are less unforgettable.

Preliminary score: 70 points Number of words read: 50,000 words + 25 chapters Type of work: Ancient romance Status of work: Contracted, serialized Reviewer: Zhile Yuanyou [Book title introduction] (16/20) Book title (7.5/10) This name is full of ancient charm, rich emotions are bred in it, and it has a lingering meaning, which is unbelievably eye-catching. Introduction (8.5/10) It is concise and comprehensive, pointing out the highlights, which can well stimulate readers' interest in reading. Three Golden Chapters(15/20) Chapter One: Marrying to the South The opening chapter explains the background of the story, the war between Yan and Liang, the Yan Kingdom was captured by Liang Quan, the fourth son of Emperor Liang, and 28 members of the royal family were robbed. However, Liang Quan used this as a proposal to marry the second princess of Yan, Lan Zha, and the king and the princess had no choice but to agree. Chapter 2: The Southern Palace The plot develops quickly and without any delay. Half a month later, everyone arrived in Liang State. Liang Quan took Lan Zai to the palace for a banquet. Liang Quan's words and deeds revealed his love for Lan Zai. Chapter 3 Wedding Night On the wedding night, Liang Quan was extremely excited to get his wish. When he was confused and infatuated, Lanzha stabbed Liang Quan and stunned Liang Quan before going to see Prince Xi Chuzhan. Story(14/20) 1. The State of Yan was conquered by Liang Quan and the Yan royal family was taken captive. Liang Quan took this as a job and asked to marry the second princess of Yan, Lan Zao. Lan Zao assassinated Liang Quan on her wedding night and fled. With the help of the Chu prince Chu Zhan, she disguised herself as a man and lurked in the Liang State military camp in an attempt to cooperate with Chu Zhan inside and outside to defeat the Liang State. Let us wait and see where Lan Zai will go in this chaotic world. 2. The emotional entanglements between Lan Zai and Liang Quan, Chu Zhan, Yun Wei and others are exciting. Advantages(13/20) 1. The writing is relatively smooth, has a sense of pictures, and contains emotions between the lines, attracting readers to move forward. 2. Liang Zao's affectionate portrayal is good. Although he doesn't know where he started, he has indeed fallen deeply into it. 3. The plot is quick and simple, and it is a story that people love to hear. It is estimated that it can be made into a film and television drama to attract a group of viewers. 4. The cover echoes the content of the book, and the artistic conception and color match each other. The biggest highlight(12/20) 1. The names of the people in the book have ancient meanings, and they match the ancient Chinese characters very well, which shows the author's wisdom. 2. The themes of a beautiful lady who loves a country and a prince who loves her deeply, family and country, love and hatred will never go out of style. Disadvantages 1. It is recommended that the author search for typos, which will invisibly lower the level of the book by several notches. 2. Plot bugs (1) Why did Liang Quan fall in love with Lan Zi? Is it because of beauty? Then he is too superficial and inconsistent with his tolerant temperament; is it because of kindness? It's not mentioned in the book; because of intelligence? The orchids in the book are not smart. Then why did he desperately fall in love with Lan Za? The same problem also appeared with Chu Chan. (2) When Lan Zha was in a situation where her country was ruined and her family was about to die, and she was forced to marry far away, she actually had feelings for Chu Zhan again and again. What kind of character setting is this? (3) After the wedding, the troublemaker Lan Za did not follow far away. Instead, he continued to stay in Liang State and finally entered the Liang State military camp. Even Yun Huiwei, King Ye of Eastern Qi, entered the Liangguo military camp. I would like to ask: Where is Liang Guo's intelligence agency? Are they all deaf, blind and other decorations? Do Liang people have no sense of patriotism? After Ji Ziyi learned the identity of King Ye, he actually agreed to conceal it, which is very difficult for me to understand. 3. The previous portrayal of the heroine Lan Zai in Chapter 15 was quite a failure. She was pale and hazy, with no real soul to support her. She was only driven by the plot, like a puppet on strings. Apart from her beauty and lack of clues, she really didn't leave any other impression on me. 4. Although the author has literary talent, he lacks the ability to control his writing style. It is quite difficult to write about such grand themes as love, hatred, family, country, and world. Alternatively, the author can write fast-travel or light novels to practice his writing. Summary: This is an ancient romance novel in which family, country and emotions are entangled and difficult to separate. There is no system or golden finger in the article, just Princess Yan's hard work and hard work. I wish the author will write more wonderful books.

Just by reading the beginning, I can feel the author's profound cultural heritage and writing skills. The title of the book is taken from the Book of Songs, the names of the people are taken from the Songs of Chu, and coupled with the author's description of ancient customs and rhymes, I seemed to have followed the heroine Lan Za back to ancient times, to that era of strife, and felt Lan Za's sorrow of separation. Those who know me say that I am worried; those who do not know me say that I want nothing. Long sky, who is this? The description at the beginning is very detailed. As the plot develops and the heroine arrives in the military camp, the description becomes relatively rough. From one picture to another, it can be seen that the author has a strong ability to control words. After reading the first few chapters, I thought that this work would only focus on the turbulent struggle for imperial power. However, the author found a new way and let Lan Zi, who had been pampered since childhood, come to the military camp. This made me feel the twists and turns of the plot and my heart. I also felt that the author was very careful when arranging the plot. The author's outline of the characters is very three-dimensional. The heroine Lanzha, who is like pampas grass, left a deep impression on me. At the same time, I am also looking forward to the subsequent story and the emotional development of the hero and heroine. The body is weak, and the men are outnumbered, but the heart is stronger than the men. Calculate the liver and gallbladder in life, because people are often hot. Who knows me with my vulgar mind? A hero's end is a torment. In this world of mortals, where can I find a close friend? The green shirt is wet!

A total of 17 book reviews have been received this time. I am very grateful to you all the big guys (big guys is not enough to describe you) for taking time out of your busy schedule to encourage me, a salty author. After scanning so many book reviews, I probably have an understanding of my own problem. However, the issues you mentioned are somewhat biased, especially regarding military camps. Everyone has his or her own preferences. There are some differences in the perspectives of authors and readers, and there are also differences among different age groups. Young ladies like lively and sweet articles, while older sisters like calm and atmospheric(Male friends, please feel free to substitute between older sisters and younger sisters according to their age). The only thing we agree on is that I made a typo. Don't talk nonsense and announce the results. 🌟First place (2. Both of them wrote so well that it was hard to choose between them. I thought about it again and decided that it's a waste of time. Let's take first place together...      🙋I don't have any shady stories, the quality of the book reviews by these two top guys is super high. ) 1. {"NickName":"Meet_ego","UserId":329639097} (academic school) The super long review, approaching ten thousand words, has the meaning of a literary review. The plot, characters, settings, emotional foreshadowing, and detail processing are all analyzed in great detail. The suggestions given are also of great reference value. I will modify the small details based on the opinions given, and make patches after I finish writing. I am very good at digging holes, so now that I have changed, I don't know where I will find another hole. The last thing to say is, worship the boss. 2. {"NickName":" Senyou","UserId":327443381} (Exquisite School) This book review is as exquisite as the author's own book. It is rare for a book review to be written with such literary grace. It mainly starts from the character analysis, and comprehensively mentions various important characters and related story units in the book. It is a pleasant book review. Unlike other commentators who give detailed suggestions, Hua Xia's suggestions are all overall suggestions, probably because she read a lot of words (after all, she read 510,000 words), so she has a more holistic view. Although some points cannot be written due to platform restrictions, I still very much agree with her opinions and suggestions. 🌟Second Place (The second place is also increased by one) 1. {"NickName":"Kunlun Resent","UserId":328206773} (Bapi Pie) I thought Bapi was going to complain about me and avenge [uc shock], but I didn't expect that the comments were very objective and praised me for all my mistakes. In fact, the entire book review style is very much like that of a professional reviewer, and the last paragraph was very popular with me. 2. {"NickName":"note","UserId":328794760} (Personal Design School) "The New King of the Six Kingdoms: The Biography of Liang Quan" is a pretty good idea, and it also exposed the fact that I took the portrayal of the second male lead too seriously and made most readers think he was the male protagonist. It is my fault that everyone got the wrong CP. The entire review is based on the analysis of several male characters in the book. If you add the previous analysis of the supporting female characters, it is also the first in my mind, but that one was written before the event, so it does not count! 3.{"NickName":"Ms. Sliver","UserId":328699113} (inspiring school) This is an old reader. She has supported me since I was a stand-alone player, and her comments are also very insightful. Especially that sentence, about reflecting the destiny of the times with the fate of characters, spoke to my heart, and I also agree with that sentence. Rather than saying that this is a book about tactics in troubled times mixed with various love elements, it is better to say that it is an ancient book with the background of tactics in troubled times. 🌟Third place 1.{"NickName":"Kura Ichiwei","UserId":314848406} (Mud-Stone School) Every time you watch it again, you will laugh out of Mr. Kurang's writing suggestions, with six-pack abs, no, eight-pack abs. It's such a shocking transformation of the devil that it's no problem to open another book in the Immortal Empress series. However, I always feel that if I really let the female protagonist become an immortal, blades might fly all over the sky. 2.{"NickName":"Zhileyouyou","UserId":315439142} (Teaching Evidence School) Sister Le really left me a lot of chapter comments. When I read it, I felt as if my Chinese teacher had changed the composition. It can be said that it has a sharp eye on the issue of poison points, and two important bugs have been raised, namely the heroine design and Ji Ziyi issues. 3.{"NickName":"Meichuan Picks","UserId":335705251} (Reader Party) A book review with a very special perspective, very good for I answered two questions: "Should the author accommodate the reader's preferences?" And "What kind of book does a reader want to read?" It is of great reference value and expresses the voice of a reader from all aspects of writing, character design, plot, and suspense. 🌟Participation Award: Dear reviewers, it's not that I think your writing is not good, but that the demons and monsters above are so good at writing, show your hands. 1.{"NickName":"Yan Xiaomo L","UserId":197431287} (cute style) Xiao Mo's book review is as cute as myself. Then the suggestions given were about rare words. Regarding the problem of rare words, except for people's names, everything else is easy to say. There is also the issue of emotional lines. This may have something to do with my character. I like the electric rhythm. But later, in order to slow down the pace, the cruel male protagonist was changed far away, which lost a lot of readers. It seems that everyone likes sweet love. 2. {"NickName":"Tao Sanbai","UserId":130047594} (rushing party) I have read a lot, but I, a jio newbie, would have written better if I had not pressed the line to rush to the stage. The main problems mentioned are 1. It is difficult to control the big picture 2. Supplementary emotional lines 3. The protagonist's aura is strong 4. Hopeless typos 5. Too many pitfalls. But everyone has mentioned these points. (Then, the more I read the beginning, the more funny I found it) 3.{"NickName":"Yiyiyang","UserId":226288876} (Yu Chui Pie) This is a Yu Chui book review. The whole article is full of praise and it makes me very happy. I am so happy that I can explode in the sky. However, the required question in this event is writing suggestions. From this point of view, it can only be cruel to drag Yangyang into the participation award. 4. {"NickName":"Snacks that are about to be late","UserId":327175306} (details school) Chi Chi's book review is the type that digs into various details. The focus is on the plot of the first five chapters. It is very detailed, and the subjective emotional factors are very strong, just like the feeling of a real reader. I feel that the strength of Guyan's boss should not be limited to this. 5. {"NickName":"Be careful","UserId":314617031} (Sweet Literature School) When everyone taught me to be cruel, grand, fierce, and decisive in killing, this young lady suddenly emerged and told me that I want more sweet plots. Although in the eyes of many big guys, Tiantian's plot is very abrupt when it is thrown into a serious drama in a troubled world, but my subscription tells me that every time I write about Tiantian's plot, the subscription will be higher than that of fighting, intense, or those plots that require brains. This is the rumored market choice and reader preference. 6. {"NickName":"Mycobacterium tuberculosis","UserId":330536027} (touching fish pie) This young lady should like the big picture type, and she is also a book reviewer who picks out the specific points. The young lady told me privately that she wanted to see the heroine die for the greater good. I didn't dare to write about this. I remember that several people asked me at the beginning if it was a tragedy. The author who abuses the master will be sent a razor blade at the cost of his life. 7.{"NickName":"Liu Mei","UserId":217022991} (joining in the fun) This book review of Liu Mei also belongs to the category of Yu Chui There are many praises for the characters, but it raises a very important issue, which is the problem of facial-shaped characters. The male protagonist and the second male protagonist do belong to the classic representative series of male gods in female videos. I think I can only let readers see their differences through stories. 8.@681 There are too many numbers, not good for Aite. (Hidden Master Sect) This is a big man who hides his merits and fame, and focuses on participation. He is also an old reader. He has always given me a lot of opinions and suggestions, and he has also written a lot of limericks. The collection of those limericks has won the first place. However, the boss said he would not be involved in the ranking series, so I will give him a final nomination. Finally, {"NickName":"Dream Day and Night","UserId":329378595} Thank you for your support. However, the word count does not meet the requirements of the event, and the format does not meet the requirements, so I can only cruelly remove you from the list of winners. Finally, I would like to thank you all again. The quality of your participation in this book review activity is very satisfactory to me. Many of your opinions are not only applicable to this book, but also very useful in my future creations (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

Comment: A book with excellent writing and ink Book title: "Swans Flying, Sending Far to the South" (Ancient Romance) Author: A Moyuer Commentator: The Heart is Not Aim Keywords: Romance, Ancient Chinese Proverbs, Literary Rhythm Introduction: [Chu Zhan]: He is the most amazing and talented Songjian son in the Six Kingdoms. He takes the world as his chess and guides the country, and the first chess piece is played on the fourth prince of the Liang Kingdom with Yan as hostage. [Yan Lanzi]: She was originally the most beautiful princess in the country of snowy land. Her country was strong, loved by her people, and she had a worry-free life. However, she changed her beauty and married to Nanliang to save the twenty-eight royal families of the Yan Kingdom. From then on, she disguised herself as a man, joined the military camp, and embarked on the road of disrupting the turmoil of the Six Kingdoms. [Liang Quan]: He is a lone wolf who has been dormant in the Yan Kingdom for ten years. He has worked hard all his life to become an eagle in the wilderness. It only took one year for the most powerful Beiyan Empire to fall. It was famous among the six kingdoms, but it still could not keep a dream of its youth. Book link: Book review: The title of the book brought me a poetic world. The poetic name aroused my interest in reading. The antithesis, rhyming and novel words are indeed interesting. The introduction introduces the characters, which is different from other authors. The specific content can only be understood from the plot analysis of the characters. The introduction is a perfect explanation of the book. I hope the author can polish it! Romance, romance, and love, but the author's "plot" is perfectly unfolded in the form of three golden chapters. The first three chapters narrate the plot and are also integrated into the article, giving a thumbs up to the world written by the author! After reading it for a while, it can be seen that the author's writing is very powerful and the article is very immersive. Coupled with the profound background of the text, the poems and short sentences are lightly interspersed. Reading and savoring carefully, it is like edification and enjoyment. The plot seems to have a twist, but it is well integrated. The author cleverly uses rare classical Chinese words, which I feel is very suitable for my taste. I also like to read classical Chinese words as a spare time, and read two poems every day. Women joining the army is like Mulan Ci, but the author uses the Six Kingdoms as the background and adds some popularization of classical Chinese. This is still good. I hope the author can continue to stick to it. Summary: Classical Chinese romance, the author's writing style is very rich, it is worth reading.

What drives me to write this comment? It's not the fluent limericks written by a tiger next door, it's not the writing style and wording that has a very ancient proverb feel in the book, it's not the author and I who met a few times at the beginning... It's because of this sentence in the first chapter: "Who can say that these two people are not a match made in heaven, but there is hatred of family and country between them." It was probably this, I can't remember the original words clearly. When I saw this sentence, I jumped directly back to the home page of the book and quickly scrolled down. Oh, fortunately, that guy is not the male protagonist but the male supporting actor. I guess the emotional scene will not be too sad? Then I went back and continued reading with peace of mind. Regarding my views on this book, I have already mentioned it in the second sentence of the second paragraph, so I won't go into details here. What I want to say to the author is also as written in the book list next door - For the sake of the righteousness of her family and country, Yan Lanjuan married away from home, and disguised herself as a man to compete with men. Her life was wonderful, her heart was strong, and her nature was kind - as good as orchid, she will definitely achieve something. This book review ends here. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I have been too busy recently to read the book when I have time~~

Number of words read: 60 chapters (100,000+) Book review: I wanted to comment in detail from the book title, introduction, plot and other aspects, but my ability is limited. I thought for a long time but could not think of the right words, so I could only say a few nonsense words in the usual form to express that I have been here. It's better not to be weird when fishing. There are many talents in the Spring and Autumn Period, and it is unknown who will be in charge. Just from the concise and direct introduction, you can tell that it will be a magnificent masterpiece that points the sword to the world, and the person holding the sword is a woman who is the most beautiful in the world. Due to the destruction of her family and country, Princess Yan Lanzi of Northern Yan was forced to marry far away from Nanliang. (When Yan Yan flew, her voice rose and fell; when her son returned, he was sent far to the south.) But how could she be willing to serve a man who led troops to break through her country and humiliated the entire Northern Yan royal family? On their wedding night, she stabbed his chest with a hairpin and received help. Although she was temporarily freed from the cage of the palace wall, her heart of revenge for the chaos of the country could not be easily stopped. At this point, the woman transformed into a man, first joining the army and then entering the court. Let's see how she competes in this world where men are respected. As far as the plot trend is concerned, except for a few emotional lines at the beginning, there is almost no feeling of procrastination and complexity. In terms of character description, the author wrote many world-famous characters. Whether it is the heroine who is both beautiful and intelligent and can dominate the world, the male protagonist who is indifferent but has control over the world, or the second male protagonist who has been alone for ten years and achieved fame all at once, at first glance, they will all give people a very similar feeling. In this case, characters like Ji Ziyi are more likely to shine. It seems that it is not that simple to write about an already perfect person even more perfectly, but if you write about other people with different personalities, you may get unexpected results. As for the writing style, it is probably unnecessary to say anything more. Just from the author's explanation of the names of the main characters in the article, we know that the author must be familiar with many very ancient classics. With this background, it goes without saying that writing is a word. (No refutation is allowed here. If you don't believe me, read the novel yourself.) Finally, since the novel is classified as ancient romance, the various infatuated people in the novel will not be described in detail here. In addition, the author's digging skills are also first-rate. Although I don't really like to watch those emotional dramas where you torture me and I torture you, I am quite looking forward to the story of the heroine knowing that the hero is the one who conspired to break up Yan. Key PS: The above are all opinions of one person. Please forgive me for any inappropriateness.

My first impression is that the title of the book is very beautiful. From the title of the introduction, it seems that it is a serious drama with a big picture! But, I can't remember! I don't know why this is? Õ_Õ Personally, I rarely watch this type of drama. I prefer lighthearted and funny dramas, because the impression of serious dramas is relatively heavy. Due to personal time issues, I didn't read much. I only read 28 chapters. I read the book carefully. I am not a professional commentator. In fact, I just wrote some of my own thoughts. Based on the plot we have seen so far, it tells the story of the defeat of the Yan State, the destruction of the family and the country, and the princess Yan Lanzi was forced to marry far away from Nanliang. And how could she be willing to be the wife of the man who broke through her home country? On the wedding night, he pierced his heart with a silver hairpin and left the Liang Kingdom with the help of others. With the help of the prince of Chu State, the woman disguised herself as a man and entered the military camp. Is it a rise? Revenge? Or it may disrupt the six countries, which remains to be understood! _(´_`‖ ∠)_ How to say it? Originally, I couldn't remember the title of the book, but after reading the beginning twice, I understood the meaning of the title, so I remember it now! Yan Yan flew away and was sent far away to the south. The princess married far away. Will she rise like this? ٩◔̯◔۶ In terms of writing style alone, I have nothing to fault. The writing style is very good, and the description in the article is very good! From the beginning, there are foreshadowings everywhere. There were some things that I didn't understand at the beginning, but it was smoothed out after reading it. The description of the characters is very well controlled, and it can be seen that each character has his own story. In terms of characters, the heroine's character is not like that of ordinary women. She has her own stubbornness, tolerance, resourcefulness, and even kills when she should. I personally like this character quite a bit. However, what I like better is King Dong Qi Ye in the article. At first, I didn't understand. As King Ye of Dong Qi, how could no one recognize him when he sneaked into the military camp? I later learned that the so-called King Ye of Dong Qi was actually a twin! Yun Huiwei actually has two names. The sentence "The sun and the moon shine together, the twin stars are born, the wind and clouds gather, the country will perish!" It is only sixteen words, but it prevents the two of them from appearing in front of the world at the same time. The three words "Yun Huiwei" have restricted their lives, which is a lot of helplessness. Yunhui and Yunwei were originally two people, but they could only appear in front of the world with one name! One person goes out and the other stays in the small courtyard. It is bitter and sad. To be honest, it really hurts. Looking back, even Chu Zhan, as the prince, has an unknown story that is deep in his heart! Suggestions that are not suggestions: 1. Looking at the whole article, there are actually a lot of uncommon words_(´_`‖ ∠)_. When you are brewing emotions and don't recognize the uncommon words, sometimes you will suddenly feel a little weird and get out of the emotion. (Maybe it's because I'm relatively illiterate ٩◔̯◔۶) 2. The emotional line in the article develops so fast. If you look closely, it feels a bit abrupt! But I think it's a bit sweet ٩◔̯◔۶ Personally, I was attracted by the overall structure of the article. It seems to have a sense of family and country righteousness and individual calculations. Overall, this is an article worth savoring! (๑´ㅂ`๑)Just a few thoughts!

I haven't read a book in a month. It's already 500,000. I'll catch up on it at night.

Today I read Moyuer's book review activity, and said that my inspiration is a bit dry. What should I do if I run out of inspiration? Please like the book review activity. A friend asked Ye Moyuer, What can I rely on if I don't love or play, I don't know what I think about every day, Written in the middle of the night At the time of writing, half a year has passed and half a million, every word is stained with blood and tears, day and night are reversed for renewal, a bald fish asks for treatment, the writing spans tens of thousands of miles, the wild can serve as a hundred thousand soldiers, killings are everywhere on the battlefield, People in the rivers and lakes call it a big fish, You can swim freely in muddy water, If you have enough energy to do it, write a code, A cool little girl, Build a great world in her writing, Speech and behavior are not simple, Laughing and cursing in an article, >Life is full of scenery, In front of you is not Mr. Salted Fish, ......

Okay, not bad. I am optimistic about you and will become a god as soon as possible.

The words are elegant and the writing style is solid. 🤓 Worship Moyuer

: 51W       [] :       []      "，" ， [Note]: The background of this book is fictional and does not require a sense of historical substitution. ———————————————————— (I searched for the title of the book and found this one. It also appears in the work, and Sister Yu'er seems to have said it herself. But I still highlighted it with a symbol, ehhehe~) "Yan Yan" [Pre-Qin] Anonymous Yan Yan is flying, and her feathers are different. The son returned home and was sent far away into the wild. LookingLooking beyond reach, weeping like rain. The swallows are flying, and they are flying. When his son returns home, he is far away from his general. LookingLooking beyond reach, standing and crying. Yan Yan is flying, and its sound is rising from below. The son returned home and was sent far to the south. LookIt is beyond my reach, but it really works my heart. Zhong's heart is blocked if he is left alone. At the end of the day, he is warm and helpful, and he is careful about himself. The thoughts of the first emperor are used to win over others. ［Translation］ Swallows fly in the sky, spreading their wings unevenly. The girl is getting married today, and we are seeing each other by the roadside in the countryside. LookingNo one could be seen, and tears were falling like rain. Swallows are flying in the sky, their postures are falling and rising. My sister is getting married far away today, so it won't be too long to see each other off. [Looking] No one could be seen, standing there with tears streaming down his face. Swallows fly in the sky, singing low and low. The girl is getting married today and sending each other off to the south. [Looking] I can't see anyone, which is really sad and sad. Second SisterIntegrity and stability, practical and profound thinking. Gentle and respectful, cautious and kind-hearted. I often think about my father, and his warnings ring in my ears.   [Brief Analysis of the Protagonist's Image] ◆Lanza "Although I don't know what the world of Datong in your minds looks like. I have never thought about saving the world with one person. But I will try my best to destroy the injustice in this world." The most beautiful woman in the world, the most beautiful woman in the six countries, with peerless beauty. The second princess of the defeated Yan Kingdom She changed her name to Chu Jiu and entered the new military camp. Enter the cavalry camp and become the champion in martial arts. Secretary of the Ministry of War, General Yulin Zhonglang, and General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom. Kind and strong, but poor at cooking. Open-minded and high-level. ◆Chu Zhan "I just want to reorganize the world's political power. As for who is the master of the world, it has nothing to do with me." He has stirred up disputes in the world, and he will not participate in this drama of competing for the throne. Songjian, the best young master in the world, is as noble and tall as jade and pine green. The prince of Chu State with noble blood Sin slave, warrior, extraordinary strategist, courage and talent, Mysterious, scheming, and played a big game of chess. Overthrow the world and abolish slavery [Brief description of characters + brief analysis of plot] ◆Marry far away in the south [Lan Zai marries far away, runs away as a newlywed, and Chu Zhan makes his debut. I thought it would be "He used his swords to pile up piles of corpses and separated her from her parents and brothers, but she destroyed his country and his family with a single strike of her fragrant skirt." Such a masterpiece of revenge, but this is not the case. The driving force behind the scenes is Chu Zhan, and I feel that he will be tortured when the truth comes out. ◆Jiangque·City of Sin Slaves "I dare not open my arms to you because of my timidity. When spring comes, I embrace my death and die in the dust." Beautiful military concubine, strong female slave, Liang Quan's undercover agent, Xu Wu's favorite. He died tragically due to poisoning and was buried in the sea of ​​​​fire with his lover. [Lanza changed his name to Chu Jiu and entered the military camp for the first time, and made a splash in the city of sin slaves] [The eldest prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls"] Xu Wu, who advocated world harmony, did not deserve to die. The part about the recruit camp is really wonderfully written. There is lightness and humor in the seriousness. The character of Ji Ziyi was created quite successfully, I really like it. "Is that you, Xiu'er?" And then there's Ji's women's clothing, ha. ◆Lou Lan·The Game of Autumn Water "A collection of Langya paper, the book is full of love." The daughter of Lou Xiang, famous all over Kyoto. He admired Liang Quan and was imprisoned for his infatuation. She cut her wrists and was rescued. She was granted the title of concubine and stayed with her. [Lan Tzu enters the court, becomes the Minister of the Ministry of War of the fourth rank, and solves the Qiushui case] [The building collapses] Solving the Qiushui case gave me a sense of immediacy like "The Record in the Hairpin". Sister Yu'er has good writing style and detailed descriptions. But Chu Zhan doesn't appear much, so I want to call the missing male protagonist. ◆Lanjiang·Fengyunjihui (Marriage Selection Meeting) Ching Ling dresses like a canary in the palace, is resigned to being a caged bird, Princess Yan is pitiful and pathetic. [Lan Zai abolished the cruel and powerful entertainment activities, Lan Jiang used the city as a dowry to marry Zhou] Sister Yu'er's pattern is actually quite big, unlike ordinary female video authors. But for some reason, I was so embarrassed at the marriage selection meeting. The picture is too embarrassing to imagine. ◆Manji·Dreams in the Garden "It rains in the spring, but there is a cloud in Wushan when I go to sleep." A famous actor and actress, a witch who brings disaster to the country. Drunk and warm in the gentle countryside, taking poison and going to hell together. [The second prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls", Liang Quan ascends to the throne, Lan Zai regains her daughter's body and becomes General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom] Lan Zai and Chu Zhan finally have more interactions. Moreover, the relationship is a bit inexplicable. The two of them feel that they fell asleep. The plot is a bit rushed. Sister Yu'er writes about passion and obsession. "Love doesn't know where it started, it goes deeper and deeper." ◆Bai Lu·Bianjing Plum Epidemic "Jiang Jia is green, white dew is frost. The so-called love is on the side of the water." After all, you can't get it. Bai Jianjia is the daughter of Bai Cang, a great scholar of the Eastern Qi Dynasty. I am a childhood sweetheart with my twins. Cause the chaos in Bianjing, and draw blood to make medicine and fragrance. [Chaos in Liang, the twenty-four solar terms, and Yunhui's plan is beginning to appear. Farewell, the two countries are at war, leaving Yinchuan. Emotions are really terrible things, and chaos arises from emotions. It is estimated that there will be more drama behind the twenty-four solar terms. Sister Yu'er's plot design is very clever, thumbs up. ◆Yifei Jinghong Female General Not many appearances so far. "Although I can't take you out of the imperial city, I can tell you what the outside world is like." This sentence suddenly reminded me of the story of Wang Quan and Qingtong. [Questions & Writing Suggestions] ◇Sister Yu'er's plot is ingenious and exciting. The twins gathered together in the clouds at the beginning, which is eye-catching. Later, Po Yanjunji, The Game of Autumn Waters, and The Twenty-Four Solar Terms were really impressive. ◇The description is exquisite. After reading the whole novel, I feel happy physically and mentally. The talented man and beautiful woman are pleasing to the eye and very seductive to the eye. His literary skills are really good, and I will never accept any refutation of this. ◇The interaction between Lan Zha and Chu Zhan was really sweet again. Compared with the supporting characters, the protagonist's feelings are less unforgettable. But there are problems. ◆1. Most of the love affairs in the book are caused by love, but the relationship between countries will never be so pure. This is a flaw, I don't know what advice I can give, I can forgive it. ◆2. There is too much infatuation, a little unnatural and not very thorough. Xu Wu Chi "Ah Que, you are no longer here, do I still have the meaning of a harmonious world?" When these words came out, people were shocked. It is no wonder that such a scholar cannot realize a harmonious society. Dare I ask if the unity of the world is only for the love of children? ? I don't think Xu Wu deserves to die because his character has collapsed. This is the first reason. In addition to Xu Wu, there are also Lou Lan, Man Ji, and the second prince. It feels like I really don't know where my feelings come from, giving people the feeling that I am overly affectionate all of a sudden. Winning is here, success is here, and failure is here. What a pity. Sister Yu'er's writing is a bit thin in these parts, but she actually advances too quickly. "By the way, I heard that you have been exhausted recently?/Smirk/ How about writing a few extras to enrich it? Return to the state where your ideas are flowing?" ◆3. The other aspect is advancing too fast; the pattern is too big. Overthrowing the Six Kingdoms, currently more than 500,000 words have caused chaos in Yan, Liang, and Zhou. Qi is starting to become a bit messy. I have written too much about the affairs of the court, and I feel that Sister Yu'er is a little unable to do what she wants. The pattern is too big and difficult to write in the later stage. It is almost impossible to transform into palace fighting and immortal cultivation all at once. Would you like to write about Jianghu? But it doesn't feel good either. It feels like the main mission is still in the court. It feels like it is a pity that the emotional stories of the female protagonists are not described in detail. ◆4. Settings of the male protagonist and female protagonist After reading the whole article, I feel that Lan Zai and Chu Zhan have a very high level of life, and it is difficult to "stumbling" them. The aura of the protagonist is too strong, which does not reflect the difficulty of the plot tasks, and looks relatively bland. ◇Do you have a big heart? The princess who was defeated by the Yan Kingdom quickly transformed into a soldier, official and general of the two enemy countries. The author obviously lacked description of the ideological change and it was a little unnatural. Just a few words from Chu Zhan are not enough. "There needs to be a patch here. I think the best patch is "the world is unified", and we must have the mind of "equalizing everything and the world". If Lan Zai is immersed in the idea of ​​the world is unified, what will happen next, her attitude towards all countries, and The change of identity is naturally much more reasonable. " ◇It was later learned that Chu Zhan wanted to overthrow the world in order to abolish the slavery system, but it was not logically possible to set up a plan to abolish slavery on his own. The abolition of slavery is a historical choice and the power of the people. The possibility of it being achieved by just one person in one generation is not very high. Slavery in history was mostly abolished by law. "Sister Yu'er can learn from the history of various countries, such as China, ancient Rome, Britain, etc." And the supporters and beneficiaries of slavery completely forgot to describe them, or the author made them kind and gentle, and couldn't write bad guys, and they weren't cruel enough. The royal aristocracy and the ruling class are the biggest slave owners, but apart from love and love, they don't seem to care much about anything else. "A brutal and powerful slave owner, a great villain, can you consider owning one?" ◇Chu Zhan only wants to overthrow the world, but does not want to compete in it. I personally think it is a bit illogical. The male protagonist's realm is too high. Why is he so confident that the chosen leader of the world will do what he wants. Shouldn't you be the one who believes in this kind of thing the most? [Art is a fragment of human nature] I feel that Sister Yu'er must be a very gentle and kind person in real life (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎) And the male and female protagonist's outlook on life and indifferent state must be extremely similar to Sister Yu'er's own worldview and values. Yan Yan flew far away and was sent to the south, The love that she didn't know started deepened. Sister Yuer, you have good intentions.

​ [Note]: The background of this book is fictional and does not require a sense of historical substitution. ———————————————————— (I searched for the title of the book and found this one. It also appears in the work, and Sister Yu'er seems to have said it herself. But I still highlighted it with a symbol, ehhehe~) Yan Yan [Pre-Qin] Anonymous Yan Yan is flying in the sky, but she is inferior to her feathers. The son returned home and was sent far away into the wild. LookingLooking beyond reach, weeping like rain. The swallows are flying, and they are flying. When his son returns home, he is far away from his general. LookingLooking beyond reach, standing and crying. Yan Yan is flying, and its sound is rising from below. The son returned home and was sent far to the south. LookIt is beyond my reach, but it really works my heart. Zhong's heart is blocked if he is left alone. At the end of the day, he is warm and helpful, and he is careful about himself. The thoughts of the first emperor are used to win over others. ［Translation］ Swallows fly in the sky, spreading their wings unevenly. The girl is getting married today, and we are seeing each other by the roadside in the countryside. LookingNo one could be seen, and tears were falling like rain. Swallows are flying in the sky, their postures are falling and rising. My sister is getting married far away today, so it won't be too long to see each other off. [Looking] No one could be seen, standing there with tears streaming down his face. Swallows fly in the sky, singing low and low. The girl is getting married today and sending each other off to the south. [Looking] I can't see anyone, which is really sad and sad. Second SisterIntegrity and stability, practical and profound thinking. Gentle and respectful, cautious and kind-hearted. I often think about my father, and his warnings ring in my ears.   [Brief Analysis of the Protagonist's Image] ◆Lanza "Although I don't know what the world of Datong in your minds looks like. I have never thought about saving the world with one person. But I will try my best to destroy the injustice in this world." The most beautiful woman in the world, the most beautiful woman in the six countries, with peerless beauty. The second princess of the defeated Yan Kingdom She changed her name to Chu Jiu and entered the new military camp. Enter the cavalry camp and become the champion in martial arts. Secretary of the Ministry of War, General Yulin Zhonglang, and General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom. Kind and strong, but poor at cooking. Open-minded and high-level. ◆Chu Zhan "I just want to reorganize the world's political power. As for who is the master of the world, it has nothing to do with me." He has stirred up disputes in the world, and he will not participate in this drama of competing for the throne. Songjian, the best young master in the world, is as noble and tall as jade and pine green. The prince of Chu State with noble blood Sin slave, warrior, extraordinary strategist, courage and talent, Mysterious, scheming, and played a big game of chess. Overthrow the world and abolish slavery [Brief description of characters + brief analysis of plot] ◆Marry far away in the south [Lan Zai marries far away, runs away as a newlywed, and Chu Zhan makes his debut. I thought it would be "He used his swords to pile up piles of corpses and separated her from her parents and brothers, but she destroyed his country and his family with a single strike of her fragrant skirt." Such a masterpiece of revenge, but this is not the case. The driving force behind the scenes is Chu Zhan, and I feel that he will be tortured when the truth comes out. ◆Jiangque·City of Sin Slaves "I dare not open my arms to you because of my timidity. When spring comes, I embrace my death and die in the dust." Beautiful military concubine, strong female slave, Liang Quan's undercover agent, Xu Wu's favorite. He died tragically due to poisoning and was buried in the sea of ​​​​fire with his lover. [Lanza changed his name to Chu Jiu and entered the military camp for the first time, and made a splash in the city of sin slaves] [The eldest prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls"] Xu Wu, who advocated world harmony, did not deserve to die. The part about the recruit camp is really wonderfully written. There is lightness and humor in the seriousness. The character of Ji Ziyi was created quite successfully, I really like it. "Is that you, Xiu'er?" And then there's Ji's women's clothing, ha. ◆Lou Lan·The Game of Autumn Water "A collection of Langya paper, the book is full of love." The daughter of Lou Xiang, famous all over Kyoto. He admired Liang Quan and was imprisoned for his infatuation. She cut her wrists and was rescued. She was granted the title of concubine and stayed with her. [Lan Tzu enters the court, becomes the minister of the Ministry of War of the fourth rank, and solves the Qiushui case] [The building collapses] The solution of the Qiushui case gave me a sense of immediacy like "The Record in the Hairpin". Sister Yu'er has good writing style and detailed descriptions. But Chu Zhan doesn't appear much, so I want to call the missing male protagonist. ◆Lanjiang·Fengyunjihui (Marriage Selection Meeting) Ching Ling dresses like a canary in the palace, is resigned to being a caged bird, Princess Yan is pitiful and pathetic. [Lan Zai abolished the cruel and powerful entertainment activities, Lan Jiang used the city as a dowry to marry Zhou] Sister Yu'er's pattern is actually quite big, unlike ordinary female video authors. But for some reason, I was so embarrassed at the marriage selection meeting. The picture is too embarrassing to imagine. ◆Manji·Dreams in the Garden "It rains in the spring, but there is a cloud in Wushan when I go to sleep." A famous actor and actress, a witch who brings disaster to the country. Drunk and warm in the gentle countryside, taking poison and going to hell together. [The second prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls", Liang Quan ascends to the throne, Lan Zai regains her daughter's body and becomes General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom] Lan Zai and Chu Zhan finally have more interactions. Moreover, the relationship is a bit inexplicable. The two of them feel that they fell asleep. The plot is a bit rushed. Sister Yu'er writes about passion and obsession. "Love doesn't know where it started, it goes deeper and deeper." ◆Bai Lu·Bianjing Plum Epidemic "Jiang Jia is green, white dew is frost. The so-called love is on the side of the water." After all, you can't get it. Bai Jianjia is the daughter of Bai Cang, a great scholar of the Eastern Qi Dynasty. I am a childhood sweetheart with my twins. Cause the chaos in Bianjing, and draw blood to make medicine and fragrance. [Chaos in Liang, the twenty-four solar terms, and Yunhui's plan is beginning to appear. Farewell, the two countries are at war, leaving Yinchuan. Emotions are really terrible things, and chaos arises from emotions. It is estimated that there will be more drama behind the twenty-four solar terms. Sister Yu'er's plot design is very clever, thumbs up. ◆Yifei Jinghong Female General Not many appearances so far. "Although I can't take you out of the imperial city, I can tell you what the outside world is like." This sentence suddenly reminded me of the story of Wang Quan and Qingtong. [Questions & Writing Suggestions] ◇Sister Yu'er's plot is ingenious and exciting. The twins gathered together in the clouds at the beginning, which is eye-catching. Later, Po Yanjunji, The Game of Autumn Waters, and The Twenty-Four Solar Terms were really impressive. ◇The description is exquisite. After reading the whole novel, I feel happy physically and mentally. The talented man and beautiful woman are pleasing to the eye and very seductive to the eye. His literary skills are really good, and I will never accept any refutation of this. ◇The interaction between Lan Zha and Chu Zhan was really sweet again. Compared with the supporting characters, the protagonist's feelings are less unforgettable. But there are problems. ◆1. Most of the love affairs in the book are caused by love, but the relationship between countries will never be so pure. This is a flaw, I don't know what advice I can give, I can forgive it. ◆2. There is too much infatuation, a little unnatural and not very thorough. Xu Wu Chi "Ah Que, you are no longer here, do I still have the meaning of a harmonious world?" When these words came out, people were shocked. It is no wonder that such a scholar cannot realize a harmonious society. Dare I ask if the unity of the world is only for the love of children? ? I don't think Xu Wu deserves to die because his character has collapsed. This is the first reason. In addition to Xu Wu, there are also Lou Lan, Man Ji, and the second prince. It feels like I really don't know where my feelings come from, giving people the feeling that I am overly affectionate all of a sudden. Winning is here, success is here, and failure is here. What a pity. Sister Yu'er's writing is a bit thin in these parts, but she actually advances too quickly. "By the way, I heard that you have been exhausted recently?/Smirk/ How about writing a few extras to enrich it? Return to the state where your ideas are flowing?" ◆3. The other aspect is advancing too fast; the pattern is too big. Overthrowing the Six Kingdoms, currently more than 500,000 words have caused chaos in Yan, Liang, and Zhou. Qi is starting to become a bit messy. I have written too much about the affairs of the court, and I feel that Sister Yu'er is a little unable to do what she wants. The pattern is too big and difficult to write in the later stage. It is almost impossible to transform into palace fighting and immortal cultivation all at once. Would you like to write about Jianghu? But it doesn't feel good either. It feels like the main mission is still in the court. It feels like it is a pity that the emotional stories of the female protagonists are not described in detail. ◆4. Settings of the male protagonist and female protagonist After reading the whole article, I feel that Lan Zai and Chu Zhan have a very high level of life, and it is difficult to "stumbling" them. The aura of the protagonist is too strong, which does not reflect the difficulty of the plot tasks, and looks relatively bland. ◇Do you have a big heart? The princess who was defeated by the Yan Kingdom quickly transformed into a soldier, official and general of the two enemy countries. The author obviously lacked description of the ideological change and it was a little unnatural. Just a few words from Chu Zhan are not enough. "There needs to be a patch here. I think the best patch is "the world is unified", and we must have the mind of "equalizing everything and the world". If Lan Zai is immersed in the idea of ​​the world is unified, what will happen next, her attitude towards all countries, and The change of identity is naturally much more reasonable. " ◇It was later learned that Chu Zhan wanted to overthrow the world in order to abolish the slavery system, but it was not logically possible to set up a plan to abolish slavery on his own. The abolition of slavery is a historical choice and the power of the people. The possibility of it being achieved by just one person in one generation is not very high. Slavery in history was mostly abolished by law. "Sister Yu'er can learn from the history of other countries, ancient Rome, Britain, etc." And the supporters and beneficiaries of slavery completely forgot to describe them, or the author made them kind and gentle, and couldn't write bad guys, and they weren't cruel enough. The royal aristocracy and the ruling class are the biggest slave owners, but apart from love and love, they don't seem to care much about anything else. "A brutal and powerful slave owner, a great villain, can you consider owning one?" ◇Chu Zhan only wants to overthrow the world, but does not want to compete in it. I personally think it is a bit illogical. The male protagonist's realm is too high. Why is he so confident that the chosen leader of the world will do what he wants. Shouldn't you be the one who believes in this kind of thing the most? [Art is a fragment of human nature] I feel that Sister Yu'er must be a very gentle and kind person in real life (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎) And the male and female protagonist's outlook on life and indifferent state must be extremely similar to Sister Yu'er's own worldview and values. Yan Yan flew far away and was sent to the south, The love that she didn't know started deepened. Sister Yuer, you have good intentions.

[Number of words read]: 51w [Commentator]: Shi Hua Xia [Introduction] "There are many talents in the spring and autumn of a century, and it is unknown who will rise and fall." As a female figure, she competed with the men in the world and embarked on the road to success. [Note]: The background of this book is fictional and does not require a sense of historical substitution. ———————————————————— (I searched for the title of the book and found this one. It also appears in the work, and Sister Yu'er seems to have said it herself. But I still highlighted it with a symbol, ehhehe~) Yanyan [Pre-Qin] Anonymous Yanyan is flying, but she is wrong. The son returned home and was sent far away into the wild. LookingLooking beyond reach, weeping like rain. The swallows are flying, and they are flying. When his son returns home, he is far away from his general. LookingLooking beyond reach, standing and crying. Yan Yan is flying, and its sound is rising from below. The son returned home and was sent far to the south. LookIt is beyond my reach, but it really works my heart. Zhong's heart is blocked if he is left alone. At the end of the day, he is warm and helpful, and he is careful about himself. The thoughts of the first emperor are used to win over others. ［Translation］ Swallows fly in the sky, spreading their wings unevenly. The girl is getting married today, and we are seeing each other by the roadside in the countryside. LookingNo one could be seen, and tears were falling like rain. Swallows are flying in the sky, their postures are falling and rising. My sister is getting married far away today, so it won't be too long to see each other off. [Looking] No one could be seen, standing there with tears streaming down his face. Swallows fly in the sky, singing low and low. The girl is getting married today and sending each other off to the south. [Looking] I can't see anyone, which is really sad and sad. Second SisterIntegrity and stability, practical and profound thinking. Gentle and respectful, cautious and kind-hearted. I often think about my father, and his warnings ring in my ears.   [Brief Analysis of the Protagonist's Image] Lanza "Although I don't know what the world of Datong in your minds looks like. I have never thought about saving the world with one person. But I will try my best to destroy the injustice in this world." The most noble woman in the world, the most beautiful woman in the six countries, with peerless beauty. The second princess of the defeated Yan Kingdom She changed her name to Chu Jiu and entered the new military camp. Enter the cavalry camp and become the champion in martial arts. Secretary of the Ministry of War, General Yulin Zhonglang, and General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom. Kind and strong, but poor at cooking. Open-minded and high-level. Chu Zhan "I just want to reorganize the world's political power. As for who is the master of the world, it has nothing to do with me." He has provoked disputes in the world, and he will not participate in this drama of competing for the world. Songjian, the best young master in the world, is as noble and tall as jade and pine green. The prince of Chu State with noble blood Sin slave, warrior, extraordinary strategist, courage and talent, Mysterious, scheming, and played a big game of chess. Overthrow the world and abolish slavery [Brief description of characters + brief analysis of plot] Marry far away in the south [Lan Zhi marries far away, runs away as a newlywed, and Chu Zhan makes his debut. I thought it would be "He used his swords to pile up piles of corpses and separated her from her parents and brothers, but she destroyed his country and his family with a single strike of her fragrant skirt." Such a masterpiece of revenge, but this is not the case. The driving force behind the scenes is Chu Zhan, and I feel that he will be tortured when the truth comes out. Jiang Que·City of Sin Slaves "Because of my cowardice, I dare not open my arms to you. When spring comes, I embrace my death and die in the dust." Beautiful military concubine, strong female slave, Liang Quan's undercover agent, and Xu Wu's favorite. He died tragically due to poisoning and was buried in the sea of ​​​​fire with his lover. [Lanza changed his name to Chu Jiu and entered the military camp for the first time, and made a splash in the city of sin slaves] [The eldest prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls"] Xu Wu, who advocated world harmony, did not deserve to die. The part about the recruit camp is really wonderfully written. There is lightness and humor in the seriousness. The character of Ji Ziyi was created quite successfully, I really like it. "Is that you, Xiu'er?" And then there's Ji's women's clothing, ha. Lou Lan·The Game of Autumn Water "A collection of Langya paper, the book is full of lovesickness." The daughter of Lou Xiang, famous all over Kyoto. He admired Liang Quan and was imprisoned for his infatuation. She cut her wrists and was rescued. She was granted the title of concubine and stayed with her. [Lan Tzu enters the court, becomes the minister of the Ministry of War of the fourth rank, and solves the Qiushui case] [The building collapses] The solution of the Qiushui case gave me a sense of immediacy like "The Record in the Hairpin". Sister Yu'er has good writing style and detailed descriptions. But Chu Zhan doesn't appear much, so I want to call the missing male protagonist. Lanjiang·Fengyunjihui (Marriage Selection Meeting) The Que Ling Palace pretends to be a canary, I am resigned to being a caged bird, Princess Yan is pitiful and pathetic. [Lan Zai abolished the cruel and powerful entertainment activities, Lan Jiang used the city as a dowry to marry Zhou] Sister Yu'er's pattern is actually quite big, unlike ordinary female video authors. But for some reason, I was so embarrassed at the marriage selection meeting. The picture is too embarrassing to imagine. Manji·Dream in the Garden "It rains in the spring, but there is a cloud in Wushan when I go to sleep." A famous actress and actress, a witch who brings disaster to the country. Drunk and warm in the gentle countryside, taking poison and going to hell together. [The second prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls", Liang Quan ascends to the throne, Lan Zai regains her daughter's body and becomes General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom] Lan Zai and Chu Zhan finally have more interactions. Moreover, the relationship is a bit inexplicable. The two of them feel that they fell asleep. The plot is a bit rushed. Sister Yu'er writes about passion and obsession. "Love doesn't know where it started, it goes deeper and deeper." Bai Lu·Bianjing Plum Epidemic "The jianjia is green, and the white dew is like frost. The so-called love is on the side of the water." After all, you can't get it. Bai Jianjia is the daughter of Bai Cang, a great scholar of the Eastern Qi Dynasty. I am a childhood sweetheart with my twins. Cause the chaos in Bianjing, and draw blood to make medicine and fragrance. [Chaos in Liang, the twenty-four solar terms, and Yunhui's plan is beginning to appear. Farewell, the two countries are at war, leaving Yinchuan. Emotions are really terrible things, and chaos arises from emotions. It is estimated that there will be more drama behind the twenty-four solar terms. Sister Yu'er's plot design is very clever, thumbs up. Yifei Jinghong Female General Not many appearances so far. "Although I can't take you out of the imperial city, I can tell you what the outside world is like." This sentence suddenly reminded me of the story of Wang Quan and Qingtong. [Questions & Writing Suggestions] Sister Yu'er's plot is ingenious and exciting. The twins gathered together in the clouds at the beginning, which is eye-catching. Later, Po Yanjunji, The Game of Autumn Waters, and The Twenty-Four Solar Terms were really impressive. The description is exquisite. After reading the whole novel, I feel happy physically and mentally. The talented man and beautiful woman are pleasing to the eye and very seductive to the eye. His literary skills are really good, and I will never accept any refutation of this. Lanza Chuzhan's interaction was really sweet again. Compared with the supporting characters, the protagonist's feelings are less unforgettable. But there are problems. 1. Most of the love affairs in the book are caused by love, but the relationship between countries will never be so pure. This is a flaw, I don't know what advice I can give, I can forgive it. 2. There is too much infatuation, which is a little unnatural and not very thorough. Xu Wu Chi "Ah Que, you are no longer here, do I still have the meaning of a harmonious world?" When these words came out, people were shocked. It is no wonder that such a scholar cannot realize a harmonious society. Dare I ask if the unity of the world is only for the love of children? ? I don't think Xu Wu deserves to die because his character has collapsed. This is the first reason. In addition to Xu Wu, there are also Lou Lan, Man Ji, and the second prince. It feels like I really don't know where my feelings come from, giving people the feeling that I am overly affectionate all of a sudden. Winning is here, success is here, and failure is here. What a pity. Sister Yu'er's writing is a bit thin in these parts, but she actually advances too quickly. "By the way, I heard that you have been exhausted recently?/Smirk/ How about writing a few extras to enrich it? Return to the state where your ideas are flowing?" 3. The other aspect is advancing too fast; the pattern is too big. Overthrowing the Six Kingdoms, currently more than 500,000 words have caused chaos in Yan, Liang, and Zhou. Qi is starting to become a bit messy. I have written too much about the affairs of the court, and I feel that Sister Yu'er is a little unable to do what she wants. The pattern is too big and difficult to write in the later stage. It is almost impossible to transform into palace fighting and immortal cultivation all at once. Would you like to write about Jianghu? But it doesn't feel good either. It feels like the main mission is still in the court. It feels like it is a pity that the emotional stories of the female protagonists are not described in detail. 4. The male protagonist and the female protagonist After reading the whole article, I feel that Lan Zai and Chu Zhan have a very high level of life, and it is difficult to "stumbling" them. The aura of the protagonist is too strong, which does not reflect the difficulty of the plot tasks, and looks relatively bland. Do you have a big heart? The princess who was defeated by the Yan Kingdom quickly transformed into a soldier, official and general of the two enemy countries. The author obviously lacked description of the ideological change and it was a little unnatural. Just a few words from Chu Zhan are not enough. "A patch needs to be made here. I think the best patch is "the world is unified", and we must have the mind of "equalizing everything, equalizing the world". If Lan Zao is immersed in the idea of ​​​​university, her subsequent attitudes towards various countries and changes in identity will naturally be much more reasonable." Later I learned that Chu Zhan wanted to overthrow the world in order to abolish the slavery system, but it is not logically possible to set up a plan to abolish slavery on his own. The abolition of slavery is a historical choice and the power of the people. The possibility of it being achieved by just one person in one generation is not very high. Slavery in history was mostly abolished by law. "Sister Yu'er can learn from the history of various countries, such as China, ancient Rome, Britain, etc." And the supporters and beneficiaries of slavery completely forgot to describe them, or the author made them kind and gentle, and couldn't write bad guys, and they weren't cruel enough. The royal aristocracy and the ruling class are the biggest slave owners, but apart from love and love, they don't seem to care much about anything else. "A brutal and powerful slave owner, a great villain, should you consider owning one?" Chu Zhan only wants to overthrow the world, but does not want to compete in it. I personally think it is a bit illogical. The male protagonist's realm is too high. Why is he so confident that the chosen leader of the world will do what he wants. Shouldn't you be the one who believes in this kind of thing the most? [Art is a fragment of human nature] I feel that Sister Yu'er must be a very gentle and kind person in real life (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎) And the male and female protagonist's outlook on life and that indifferent state must be extremely similar to Sister Yu'er's own worldview and values. Yan Yan flew far away and was sent to the south, The love that she didn't know started deepened. Sister Yuer, you have good intentions.

[Number of words read]: 51w [Commentator]: Shi Hua Xia [Introduction] "There are many talents in the Spring and Autumn Period, and it is unknown who will rise and fall." As a female figure, she competed with the men in the world and embarked on the road to success. [Note]: The background of this book is fictional and does not require a sense of historical substitution. ———————————————————— (I searched for the title of the book and found this one. It also appears in the work, and Sister Yu'er seems to have said it herself. But I still highlighted it with a symbol, ehhehe~) "Yan Yan" [Pre-Qin] Anonymous Yan Yan is flying, and her feathers are different. The son returned home and was sent far away into the wild. LookingLooking beyond reach, weeping like rain. The swallows are flying, and they are flying. When his son returns home, he is far away from his general. LookingLooking beyond reach, standing and crying. Yan Yan is flying, and its sound is rising from below. The son returned home and was sent far to the south. LookIt is beyond my reach, but it really works my heart. Zhong's heart is blocked if he is left alone. At the end of the day, he is warm and helpful, and he is careful about himself. The thoughts of the first emperor are used to win over others. ［Translation］ Swallows fly in the sky, spreading their wings unevenly. The girl is getting married today, and we are seeing each other by the roadside in the countryside. LookingNo one could be seen, and tears were falling like rain. Swallows are flying in the sky, their postures are falling and rising. My sister is getting married far away today, so it won't be too long to see each other off. [Looking] No one could be seen, standing there with tears streaming down his face. Swallows fly in the sky, singing low and low. The girl is getting married today and sending each other off to the south. [Looking] I can't see anyone, which is really sad and sad. Second SisterIntegrity and stability, practical and profound thinking. Gentle and respectful, cautious and kind-hearted. I often think about my father, and his warnings ring in my ears. [Brief Analysis of the Protagonist's Image] Lanza "Although I don't know what the world of Datong in your minds looks like. I have never thought about saving the world with one person's power. But I will try my best to destroy the injustice in this world." The most noble girl in the world, the most beautiful woman in the six countries, with peerless beauty. The second princess of the defeated Yan Kingdom She changed her name to Chu Jiu and entered the new military camp. Enter the cavalry camp and become the champion in martial arts. Secretary of the Ministry of War, General Yulin Zhonglang, and General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom. Be kind, strong, and open-minded. The cooking skills are very poor, but the realm is very high. Chu Zhan "I just want to reorganize the world's political power. As for who is the master of the world, it has nothing to do with me." He has provoked disputes in the world, and he will not participate in this drama of competing for the world. Songjian, the best young master in the world, is as noble and tall as jade and pine green. The prince of Chu State with noble blood Sin slave, warrior, extraordinary strategist, courage and talent, Mysterious, scheming, and played a big game of chess. Overthrow the world and abolish slavery [Brief description of characters + brief analysis of plot] Marrying far away in the south [Lan Zai marries far away, runs away as a newlywed, and Chu Zhan makes his debut. I thought it would be "He used his swords to pile up piles of corpses and separated her from her parents and brothers, but she destroyed his country and his family with a single strike of her fragrant skirt." Such a masterpiece of revenge, but this is not the case. The driving force behind the scenes is Chu Zhan, and I feel that he will be tortured when the truth comes out. Jiang Que·City of Sin Slaves "Because of my cowardice, I dare not open my arms to you. When spring comes, I embrace my death and die in the dust." Beautiful military concubine, strong female slave, Liang Quan's undercover agent, and Xu Wu's favorite. He died tragically due to poisoning and was buried in the sea of ​​​​fire with his lover. [Lanza changed his name to Chu Jiu and entered the military camp for the first time, and made a splash in the city of sin slaves] [The eldest prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls"] Xu Wu, who advocated world harmony, did not deserve to die. The part about the recruit camp is really wonderfully written. There is lightness and humor in the seriousness. The character of Ji Ziyi was created quite successfully, I really like it. "Is that you, Xiu'er?" And then there's Ji's women's clothing, ha. Lou Lan·The Game of Autumn Water "A collection of Langya paper, the book is full of lovesickness." The daughter of Lou Xiang, famous all over Kyoto. He admired Liang Quan and was imprisoned for his infatuation. She cut her wrists and was rescued. She was granted the title of concubine and stayed with her. [Lan Tzu enters the court, becomes the minister of the Ministry of War of the fourth rank, and solves the Qiushui case] [The building collapses] The solution of the Qiushui case gave me a sense of immediacy like "The Record in the Hairpin". Sister Yu'er has good writing style and detailed descriptions. But Chu Zhan doesn't appear much, so I want to call the missing male protagonist. Lanjiang·Fengyunjihui (Marriage Selection Meeting) The Que Ling Palace pretends to be a canary, I am resigned to being a caged bird, Princess Yan is pitiful and pathetic. [Lan Zai abolished the cruel and powerful entertainment activities, Lan Jiang used the city as a dowry to marry Zhou] Sister Yu'er's pattern is actually quite big, unlike ordinary female video authors. But for some reason, I was so embarrassed at the marriage selection meeting. The picture is too embarrassing to imagine. Manji·Dream in the Garden "It rains in the spring, but there is a cloud in Wushan when I go to sleep." A famous actress and actress, a witch who brings disaster to the country. Drunk and warm in the gentle countryside, taking poison and going to hell together. [The second prince of the Liang Kingdom "falls", Liang Quan ascends to the throne, Lan Zai regains her daughter's body and becomes General Fuyuan of the Liang Kingdom] Lan Zai and Chu Zhan finally have more interactions. Moreover, the relationship is a bit inexplicable. The two of them feel that they fell asleep. The plot is a bit rushed. Sister Yu'er writes about passion and obsession. "Love doesn't know where it started, it goes deeper and deeper." Bai Lu·Bianjing Plum Epidemic "The jianjia is green, and the white dew is like frost. The so-called love is on the side of the water." After all, you can't get it. Bai Jianjia is the daughter of Bai Cang, a great scholar of the Eastern Qi Dynasty. I am a childhood sweetheart with my twins. Cause the chaos in Bianjing, and draw blood to make medicine and fragrance. [Chaos in Liang, the twenty-four solar terms, and Yunhui's plan is beginning to appear. Farewell, the two countries are at war, leaving Yinchuan. Emotions are really terrible things, and chaos arises from emotions. It is estimated that there will be more drama behind the twenty-four solar terms. Sister Yu'er's plot design is very clever, thumbs up. Yifei Jinghong Female General Not many appearances so far. "Although I can't take you out of the imperial city, I can tell you what the outside world is like." This sentence suddenly reminded me of the story of Wang Quan and Qingtong. [Questions & Writing Suggestions] Sister Yu'er's plot concept is ingenious and exciting. The twins gathering together in the clouds at the beginning are eye-catching. Later, Po Yanjunji, The Game of Autumn Waters, and The Twenty-Four Solar Terms were really impressive. The description is exquisite. After reading the whole novel, I feel happy physically and mentally. The talented man and beautiful woman are pleasing to the eye and very seductive to the eye. His literary skills are really good, and I will never accept any refutation of this. Lanza Chuzhan's interaction was really sweet again. Compared with the supporting characters, the protagonist's feelings are less unforgettable. But there are problems. 1. Most of the love affairs in the book are caused by love, but the relationship between countries will never be so pure. This is a flaw, I don't know what advice I can give, I can forgive it. 2. There is too much infatuation, which is a little unnatural and not very thorough. Xu Wu Chi "Ah Que, you are no longer here, do I still have the meaning of a harmonious world?" When these words came out, people were shocked. It is no wonder that such a scholar cannot realize a harmonious society. Dare I ask if the unity of the world is only for the love of children? ? I don't think Xu Wu deserves to die because his character has collapsed. This is the first reason. In addition to Xu Wu, there are also Lou Lan, Man Ji, and the second prince. It feels like I really don't know where my feelings come from, giving people the feeling that I am overly affectionate all of a sudden. Winning is here, success is here, and failure is here. What a pity. Sister Yu'er's writing is a bit thin in these parts, but she actually advances too quickly. "By the way, I heard that you have been exhausted recently?/Smirk/ Why don't you write a few extra stories to enrich yourself? Return to the state where your ideas are flowing?"

Why do I like reading this book? It's beautiful! The plot setting of this book really makes me feel amazing. It can be said that it is the best in female pornographic writing. Although I didn't say that I couldn't stop watching it, I still had the desire to watch it. Although the author says she is a newcomer, in my opinion she is a very mature author, and her writing is better than that of some veterans who have written many books. I'm not very good at commenting. I think everyone has said both the good and the bad. I don't know what to say. Then I saw that everyone was discussing a question, that is, should the author write to cater to the readers' preferences? Let me share my opinion on this point. As a reader, I think the answer is definite, certain and affirmative. Authors who do not consider readers must be a fool. In fact, it is inaccurate to use the word "pander" here, as if the authors have gone through fire and sword in order to write books that readers like. Actually, if the author may not like it, I quite hate it when authors say they don't create for readers, and then complain that there are no readers or subscriptions. This mentality is irritating. Internet writing is not about artistic creation, and there is no need to promote it so highly. I'm not talking about fishing here, I just remembered that one day I joined a reader group, and there were no readers in the group, almost all of whom were female authors. They discussed that their books were not read, and then said things like not catering to the market. I felt that these women had a lot of drama, so I went to read their books... Emmmm... What the hell are they writing? I couldn't stand it at all... And there are so many reasons to rush out... As a reader, what kind of books do I want to see? Since the author writes about ancient words, I will just talk about ancient words. 1. Writing style Writing style is something difficult to control. It does not mean that the more refined the writing, the better. For example, some authors would spend long paragraphs describing clothes, vase, and the appearance of the person in the article. This kind of writing style is very redundant and is usually skipped. In fact, there are some that are even more ridiculous. They are probably trying to imitate "A Dream of Red Mansions", so the clothing matching is described in an extravagant way, which seems to be very impressive. Then I thought about it seriously, and I actually dressed in colorful clothes. Is this still a human being? What does she want to do, celebrate Christmas? In this book, although the author's writing style is good, the first three chapters are not as good as the first three chapters. I can't even pronounce the words, so why should I read them? The later chapters are much better. 2. Personality Reject facial expressions. Common ancient sayings about facial makeup characters (for men as an example): (1) A handsome man like a fox is more beautiful than a woman. (2). The gentle central air-conditioning male partner, (used as a spare tire, very nice to the heroine, but will never become the protagonist) (3). The prodigal son in love, had numerous affairs, and was finally defeated by the heroine's pomegranate skirt. He only loves this person. (4). The scumbag of the original wife appears in the rebirth novel. He is engaged to the original protagonist, but he may have an affair with the heroine's sister or younger sister, then break off the engagement, and finally fall in love with the reborn heroine and regret it. (5). The man on Mo is like jade, and the young master is unparalleled in the world. Lang Yan is unique and unique in the world (Although these two sentences are very good, if you read too much, you will not want to see them.) In fact, the defeated princess and the fairy male protagonist in this book are facial makeup characters, but they are not so novice, so they are acceptable. In my opinion, the heroine's character is contrastingly cute, cool and cute yet cute, and she can be both wolf-like and breast-like. But my favorite is Gemini, then the second male lead, and then Ji Ziyi. 3. Dramatic (1). It is recommended to have a proper Mary Sue or make it more enjoyable. This is the highlight of the article, it is so real. Of course, it won't do to be too exaggerated. (2). The reasons that make readers abandon the article are usually not too many typos, poor choice of words and sentences, a good-looking book cover, or some language that is not fluent, but that the plot is not good, the plot is bland and uninteresting, the female protagonist is Bai Lianhua, the male protagonist is a scumbag, the romance is very complicated, the villain is clever, etc. If the plot is exciting, you can accept it occasionally. (3). There are various aspects of fighting, conspiracy, and solving crimes in the article. It is actually untenable after careful consideration (in fact, most articles are untenable, so there is no need to discuss it). But, I'm not fighting for the throne, and I'm not going to the battlefield, so why bother thinking about whether this can really achieve this goal? One thing that must be mentioned is that it is really well written and very few people can read it. What you read is actually the brain-burning suspense, the tension of the struggle for power, the sense of love in the romantic plot, and the pleasure of fighting for hegemony and commanding the country. Therefore, it is very important to create a sense of atmosphere. The story that can put the reader into that situation is the story that the reader likes. Just like in "Story of Yanxi Palace", there will be a curse: "Xitalar Qing, when will you die." I will also be excited because of the protagonist's brilliant performance: "Today she is not Yan Lanzao, but Yehenala Lanzao." Any book that can arouse such a strong resonance is already a good book. 4. Don't revise articles in large quantities When I see the author revising the article, I specifically mention it, although I haven't seen it yet. Small changes are okay, but don't deviate too much from the main line. When readers read it for the first time, they will have a preconceived idea of ​​the plot. If it is changed drastically, it will be a critical blow to subsequent readers. 5. You must learn to create suspense (1). Chapter logo Although the author's chapter logo has four neat words, with all due respect, I don't like such a chapter logo. Actually, this is not bad, but the chapter labels with poems as titles are even more exaggerated, and it is completely impossible to guess what the next chapter will be. I still prefer the direct ones, these have more of a sense of anticipation. Although this is a good opportunity to show your literary talent, when readers don't understand, it's just making things up. (2). Chapter fragmentation is also very important. Although I hate authors who break chapters and get stuck in exciting parts every time, this can really deceive a fool like me into subscribing one after another. (3). Plot reversal and suspense The author does a good job in this regard.

Ding, Jiangjiang's recommendation ticket has been received, and an incredible activity has been discovered, 🤓

The name of the novel Yan Yan Yu Fei is very good, and I also went to Baidu to look up its meaning. As a new reader this summer, I may not have read much, but this novel has already attracted my interest. The novel depicts characters with full personalities and unpredictable plots. Of course, there are many touching plots that make people cry. Although I don't have much time in life, I often read a few chapters in my spare time. I hope that the author's literary thoughts will flourish, he will be in good health, and he will bring more wonderful things to readers.

When I look at Wei Ying, I always think of Wei Wuxian, the ancestor of Yiling. You are definitely not just trying to gain popularity 😎

Why do I like reading this book? It's beautiful. The plot setting of this book really makes me feel amazing. It can be said that it is the best in female pornographic writing. Although I didn't say that I couldn't stop watching it, I still had the desire to watch it. Although the author says she is a newcomer, in my opinion she is a very mature author, and her writing is better than that of some veterans who have written many books. I'm not very good at commenting. I think everyone has said both the good and the bad. I don't know what to say. Then I saw that everyone was discussing a question, that is, should the author write to cater to the readers' preferences? Let me share my opinion on this point. As a reader, I think the answer is definite, certain and affirmative. Authors who do not consider readers must be a fool. In fact, it is inaccurate to use the word "pander" here, as if the authors have gone through fire and sword in order to write books that readers like. Actually, if the author may not like it, I quite hate it when authors say they don't create for readers, and then complain that there are no readers or subscriptions. This mentality is irritating. Internet writing is not about artistic creation, and there is no need to promote it so highly. I'm not talking about fishing here, I just remembered that one day I joined a reader group, and there were no readers in the group, almost all of whom were female authors. They discussed that no one read their books, and then said things like not catering to the market. I felt that these women had a lot of drama, so I went to read their books... Emmmmm... What the hell are they writing? I can't stand it at all... I found so many reasons to rush out...

[Yanyan Book Review] I'm here to praise the big guy Number of words to read: twenty-five chapters (I'm really here to be funny) Writing suggestions: The last time I wrote a long review, I really didn't read the article very well (quietly, don't let the fishing kids know). But this time in order to write this suggestion, I read more than 20 chapters seriously (I also know it's a bit less, in fact, I'm here to fish). When I read it for the first time, I thought it was just an ordinary romance story, but when I read it the second time, I realized that the author put his own thoughts on many things into it. As for the specific suggestions, first of all, in terms of names, it is really difficult to read, and some allusions may not be known to everyone, so that everyone has trouble reading and does not know the big intention. Secondly, I think Dada's writing style is very stable and very good. I also saw the shadow of the Book of Songs and Chu Ci in the article. The use of these poems makes me think Dada's writing is very beautiful. It just feels like sometimes one or two modern words pop up, which feels a bit disharmonious. Furthermore, I personally think that some of the foreshadowing settings are still a little abrupt, but the rhythm of the entire article is very good, and the plot has twists and turns, which is very fascinating. Finally, I feel that the layout is very large, and I can clearly feel the heroine's feelings about her family and country. I really want to see the heroine make a decision that takes the overall situation into consideration at the end (don't criticize me). Generally speaking, after reading this book by Moyu Dao Dao again, my eyes really shined. The heroine not only has a little love, but also has feelings for family and country. I think this is very rare. And I also saw the growth of the heroine during the process of joining the army. From being pampered and pampered to being weathered, she still never forgets her original intention while growing up, which is even more admirable. Finally, I would like to say something to the boss, hold on, really hold on, I am reading these twenty-five chapters from beginning to end, emmmmmmm, come on, boss.

What kind of books do I want to see as a reader? Since the author writes about ancient words, I will just talk about ancient words. 1. Writing style Writing style is something difficult to control. It does not mean that the more refined the writing, the better. For example, some authors would spend long paragraphs describing clothes, a vase, and the appearance of the person in the article. This kind of writing style is very redundant and is usually skipped. Actually, there is something even more ridiculous. It is probably to imitate "A Dream of Red Mansions", so the clothing matching is described in an extravagant way, which seems to be very impressive. Then I thought about it seriously, and I actually dressed in colorful clothes. Is this still a human being? What does she want to do, celebrate Christmas? In this book, although the author's writing style is good, the first three chapters are not as good as the first three chapters. I can't even pronounce the words, so why should I read them? The later chapters are much better. 2. Personality Reject facial expressions. Common ancient sayings about facial makeup characters (for men as an example): (1) A handsome man like a fox is more beautiful than a woman. (2). Gentle central air-conditioning male partner, (used as a spare tire, he is very nice to the heroine, but will never become the protagonist) (3). A prodigal son in love, who hunts countless beauties, but is ultimately defeated by the heroine's pomegranate skirt, and only loves this one person. (4). The scumbag of the original wife appears in the rebirth novel. He is engaged to the original protagonist, but he may have an affair with the heroine's sister or younger sister, then break off the engagement, and finally fall in love with the reborn heroine and regret it. (5). The man on Mo is like jade, and the young master is unparalleled in the world. Lang Yan is unique and unique in the world (Although these two sentences are very good, if you read too much, you will not want to see them.) In fact, the defeated princess and the fairy male protagonist in this book are facial makeup characters, but they are not so novice, so they are acceptable. In my opinion, the heroine's character is contrastingly cute, cool and cute yet cute, and she can be both wolf-like and breast-like. But my favorite is Gemini, then the second male lead, and then Ji Ziyi. 3. Dramatic (1). It is recommended to be a Mary Sue or to create something cool. This is the highlight of the article, it is so real. Of course, being too exaggerated will definitely not work, and old routines must be eliminated (2). The reasons that make readers abandon the article are usually not too many typos, poor wording and sentence construction, good-looking book covers, or some language is not fluent, but the plot is not good, the plot is bland and uninteresting, the heroine Bai Lianhua, the hero is a scumbag, the love affair is very complicated, the villain is clever, etc. If the plot is exciting, you can accept it occasionally. (3). There are various aspects of fighting, plotting, and solving crimes in the article. It is actually untenable after careful consideration (in fact, most articles are untenable, so there is no need to discuss it). But, I'm not fighting for the throne, and I'm not going to the battlefield, so why bother thinking about whether this can really achieve this goal? One thing that must be mentioned is that it is really well written and very few people can read it. What you read is actually the brain-burning suspense, the tension of the struggle for power, the sense of love in the romantic plot, and the pleasure of fighting for hegemony and commanding the country. Therefore, it is very important to create a sense of atmosphere. The story that can put the reader into that situation is the story that the reader likes. Just like in "Story of Yanxi Palace", there will be a curse: "Xitalar Qing, when will you die." I will also be excited because of the protagonist's brilliant performance: "Today she is not Yan Lanzao, but Yehenala Lanzao." Any book that can arouse such a strong resonance is already a good book. 4. Don't revise articles in large quantities I would like to mention it when I see the author revising the article, although I haven't seen it yet. Small changes are okay, but don't deviate too much from the main line. When readers read it for the first time, they will have a preconceived idea of ​​the plot. If it is changed drastically, it will be a critical blow to subsequent readers. 5. You must learn to create suspense (1). Chapter label Although the author's chapter label has four neat words, with all due respect, I don't like this chapter label. Actually, this is not bad, but the chapter labels with poems as titles are even more exaggerated, and it is completely impossible to guess what the next chapter will be. I still prefer the direct ones, these have more of a sense of anticipation. Although this is a good opportunity to show your literary talent, when readers don't understand, it's just making things up. (2). Chapter fragmentation is also very important. Although I hate authors who break chapters and get stuck in exciting parts every time, this can really deceive a fool like me into subscribing one after another. (3). Plot reversal and suspense The author did a pretty good job at this point.

All the reviewers are very good, but after reading your book reviews, I still have a different point of view, that is about the military camp. At the beginning, I was put off by too many characters at the beginning, various foreshadowings, uncommon words and a depressing atmosphere. It was very tiring to watch. In fact, for readers, it is not recommended to make the opening so complicated, because when people are reading, they are not so receptive to a book and are easily persuaded to give up. Later, I saw this book again on a recommended book list and picked it up again. What really got me into reading mode was when I entered the military camp. When I read it, I would unconsciously raise the corners of my mouth, and even laugh out loud because of Ji Ziyi. (I like this kind of plot that can arouse my emotions.) Transitioning from the military camp to the somewhat heavy city of sin slaves, this feeling of going from shallow to deep will be much easier to accept. In addition, there are a lot of cps in the article, and the addition of various love stories and power-based hegemony routes is like coffee with sugar and milk, which makes the tone of this article softer. It is very suitable for girls to read, unlike the ambitious and obscure historical articles of male videos. Rather than saying it is a book about tactics in troubled times mixed with various elements of love, it is better to say that this is a romance novel with the background of tactics in troubled times. 🙋Reflecting the fate of the times with the fate of characters. It can be regarded as an alternative group portrait novel. It seems to have a protagonist, but it can also be considered that there is no protagonist. The heroine is just an introduction. There is no villain in this book. The entire troubled world is caused by everyone's purpose. Each story also has its own heroines - Lan Jiang, the daughter of a powerful official, Jiang Que, the Northern Yan soldier, Man Ji, a famous actress in the Red Chamber, and Bai Lu, the concubine of the Liang Palace. They have various identities, from slaves to nobles of different classes. Everyone has their own purpose and scheming. It is only through the side effects that the troubled times described by the author are created. "In an avalanche, no snowflake is innocent." 💁The overall picture is great, and it can be seen that the author is a good storyteller. After reading the rest of the story, I think the [Beiyan Junji] incident in the first 20 chapters can be regarded as a short story. The following "Autumn Water" and "Song of Solar Terms" really show the author's generosity. In addition to these two, there are also two versions of [Marriage Selection Ceremony], [Gemini Coup], and [Song of Solar Terms] [Clouds and Mist Gathering]. This extra is also very interesting. (It would be better if these stories could be divided into volumes) Several book friends have commented on these stories before, so I won't go into details about each one. My favorite is [Song of Solar Terms], and then [The Game of Autumn Water], so I will mainly talk about this. 🙋Song of Solar Terms ①——Mei Plague Rebellion "The jianjia is green, and the white dew is frost." This is the first time I have seen an organization code-named with solar terms. It not only has a traditional cultural charm, but also cleverly combines the concept of plague to form a timeline, which is very special. Another highlight of this story is that it combines the emotional lines of the twins Yunhui and Yunwei. The slave girl named Bailu was originally Bai Jianjia, the daughter of a bachelor in the Eastern Qi Dynasty, and she fell in love with the twins who shared the same name. 🙋Song of Solar Terms ② - Time of Avalanche "When there is an avalanche, no snowflake is innocent." These women code-named solar terms are all testers in the City of Sin Slaves. When one dies, someone else will take his place, so there are many people behind every solar term. For example, the male protagonist's mother (the former queen of Western Chu) is also Daxue. This story is not over yet. I haven't read it carefully yet. I probably scanned it and found that it happened in a military camp. When I read it, I felt that the author of this story about the twenty solar terms should be very capable. To be honest, the first time I read it, I didn't have time to explore whether the author had any logical errors. The author's description of the atmosphere made people enjoy the feeling of reading a book, and they were immediately brought into the feeling of the book When I reviewed it for the second time to write a book review, I discovered many problems. I felt that the exquisite writing style exposed the author's extremely rough... (I won't complain, the author should know better). 🙋Suggestion: If this book could be refined, it would be a great book. Most of the problems are details and illogical aspects. However, I didn't go too deep into it when I read it for the first time. What I read was the impression this story gave me. Of course, for this pattern, the writing style lacks some heaviness. There are also many tender and kind feelings of young women in the article, which are not sophisticated enough. But, as I said at the beginning, if the writing is heavy, I won't read it (I'm so conflicted). I know that some History Channel books read like epic masterpieces, but I gave up when I thought about how tired they looked. If there is no high-intensity output at the beginning, I feel that this book will be more popular with young women. Compared to boring and sophisticated books, I prefer to read unrealistic books, such as love stories with ups and downs but not in reality, fantasy novels that cheat and slap the face all the way, sweet stories in which the male protagonist dotes on the female protagonist to the point of being lawless, and the incredible powerful god in the game... This is probably the charm of novels. Rare elements of reality can make people feel happy. I am a reader whose reading experience comes first, and this is a book that can please me.

(^･ｪ･^): For this reason, I have to convince myself to keep updating...

Today someone told me to be reserved, saying that boys who are not reserved are not cute. I just came here to ask, am I cute?