Treasure Chest in the Marvel World

It poisoned me to death. . Not to mention the nonsense, the protagonist can be said to be the wisest representative of Marvel fans. After eating the special abilities of the Hero's Banquet, Baji and Sora are gone! ? Do you have a backstory? And American father, why don't you come to Bai Yulin? ? I'm afraid you are not like those readers who are hopelessly patriotic. Do you have to have a Chinese name? No wonder the streets are so miserable. I can't stand it even if I want to.

It's really tiring to read Jill. After reading more than 40 chapters, I still didn't understand what was written. There are so many lines and such a big gap at the beginning. Can you fill in the holes in the later stage? ? ? Also, there is no logic at all, not to mention the timeline! There are too many flaws, let the people behind you tell me...

It feels like there is no outline and there are too many bad points.

The first few chapters are OK, but the following chapters are not OK 🤓 Abandon the book

Are you a bit obsessed with this novel? Why does it feel like a dungeon in the back?

I have already written American comics, but my thinking is still at the same place. Did you feel very hungry the first thing you did after watching Peter Parker's mutation??? No!! What about Captain America? Neither, let alone the Hulk!! Why do so many authors like to eat after they strengthen themselves? I fainted completely. If you are so good at eating, why don't you write a book about the God of Cookery?

Where does the father-son relationship between the protagonist and Hank Pym come from? I read it twice and didn't see it. It's like a background was inserted abruptly. It feels very strange.

It's a poisonous point for you to let others eat the hero's banquet when the protagonist doesn't know about it. Although I know there will definitely be a follow-up plot, it's a bit embarrassing. Of course, I'm just talking casually. You continue to write and get fat first.

Both parents are white, and the main character is named Bai Yulin. Come on, author, please explain to me how this name came about.

Sora was 8 years old and 16 years old. The protagonist's family is also awesome. They were secretly eating and drinking at home for a month without any notice. Two white parents gave their son a Chinese name, Bai Yulin, in the 1940s when everyone in the Republic of China looked down on China. The son of one of the earliest founders of S. H. I. E. L. D., A Chinese otaku in his previous life, couldn't even finish high school. . .

I have to say that the first few chapters are very unreasonable. The most important thing is that the woman stole 3,000 U. S. Dollars without finding out. What a concept, it is equivalent to about 20,000 yuan now, let alone the Second World War. The author must at least have common sense and be reasonable when writing a book.

I was relieved that I wasn't the only one who thought it looked very confusing, with unclear main lines and branch lines flying everywhere.

The protagonist's name is Bai Yulin, and his father is Ant-Man. How did he get his name? At first, I thought the protagonist had traveled through time and became Chinese. But it turns out that the protagonist's parents are both foreign races. You have a genetic mutation. I can't watch this anymore. And Bucky, do you have any information channels? You don't have special search capabilities. You found it as soon as you said you found it. There are too many complaints that I can't watch.

The name of the hard-core protagonist. Both parents are white, not Chinese. The protagonist is still named Bai Yulin, haha

From a reader's perspective, you are sure that this book has a protagonist, and the protagonist Goldfinger has come out, but you have not written around the protagonist. You will write about Sora for a while, Hydra for a while, and where your protagonist went. When readers read a novel, they want to see the protagonist show off, not to see an organization that flew off to an unknown location inexplicably after writing two chapters. The whole book is not written around the protagonist. Can you make a detailed outline and leave the protagonist? I don't want you to write some inexplicable organizations and characters after reading two or three pictures. Can it be developed from the perspective of the protagonist?

To be honest, it's hard to find Bai Yulin among a bunch of English names.

The previous discussion of stealing money is easy to explain and understandable. But in Chapter 5, there is no logic at all and the owner is still there to find leftovers on the table? (Although I passed out) I read the reviews and they said it was too poisonous, and it seems to be true!

Author, don't listen to the trolls below. Although your novel has many flaws, it is still better than some junk novels. It's just that the writing is not good. It's normal if you don't have time to modify it. People on the border also need to work and have food to eat. But the theme of Treasure Chest is a bit different. It's a bit bad, because the pig's feet are only whipped once a month, which seriously affects the protagonist's ability to become stronger. It is recommended to add: Weapon treasure chest Armor class Magic weapon class There are other categories Anything from other categories can be produced, except for the ones mentioned above. That's all for these suggestions. I wish the author will write better and better.

The author, a white boy, chose his domestic name intentionally 🤓

At the beginning, a student wanted to find a railway in the European Alps to save Baji, so he bought a motorcycle and set off. Could you please stop withdrawing like that? There must be some practicality in how to bring the two together, and Dr. Zola surrendered. The author had to cut off the timeline and make it up again.

Is this the virtue of being injected with the G virus? The G virus is much more powerful than the Super Soldier Serum. Both strength, speed and reflexes are at the inhuman level, not the limits of the human body, but the protagonist is still a noob.

After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that many details have not been dealt with. Sora ate that bowl of noodles, and the protagonist didn't notice it when he woke up. Also, I fainted when I used that piece of cloth to gain skills for the first time, and I was helped back to bed by Sora from the dining table. When I woke up, I didn't doubt that the protagonist was stupid? There's also the note that Bucky found Sora and Sora left behind. If you don't pay attention to these details, no wonder so many readers say it is poisonous. . . . No wonder so many books are on the market. . . .

It makes sense that this book has more than 1 million words and only has more than 900 recommendation votes.

There are too many flaws. It is said that it is not poisonous, but it is really tasteless. After reading a hundred chapters, I really don't see anything outstanding.

I was persuaded to quit after reading seven chapters. The author is a Chinese middle school student. He didn't mention that his parents were doing scientific research in the United States during World War II. He just said that he bought a motorcycle in the United States and went to find Bucky who fell off the cliff. Did you swallow the Atlantic Ocean? Moreover, the author of Baki has been using Baji. Even though it is a transliteration, you can't do it like this.

The author has not yet explained how the protagonist drove a motorcycle across the sea from America to Europe and took him away!

I resisted and read five chapters. The writing was messy, the perspectives jumped around a lot, there was no order at all, and it was hard to read smoothly.

I don't really want to say anything, but I think this book is disgusting.

I saw a chapter and said, "This is not the protagonist. This is obviously a pig."

I read the first 10 or so pictures, then flipped through the chapter names below, and finished it myself. The result I got was: What on earth are these things about!