The Magician in the World of Conan

I read this book today and only got to Chapter 11. I don't know what happens next. But as far as these 11 chapters are concerned, there are many problems. First of all, the protagonist is too frivolous. Such a protagonist has no sense of immersion at all. Then there are details. The author probably wrote this book without knowing it beforehand. There are many details that are not handled very well. For example, Xiaolan casually invites strangers to go to the art museum together, and how the protagonist survives with such little income. In fact, it is not bad. But the price issue of Japanese fruits should not be a problem. You should have heard of it more or less, of course, it may be that I take it for granted. There is also the place where the curator kills people. The curator loves art very much and will not allow art to be stained with blood, so he wears fake armor when he kills people and removes all the paintings from the murder scene. I was not sure about this at first. After all, I read it a long time ago, so I went to watch it again. It was a bit too slow to watch the anime. I read it through the manga, which is in the third chapter of the third volume. The first volume is about 10 chapters, and the electronic version should be about 32 or 33 chapters. Therefore, the armor used by the curator to kill people cannot be magical. It cannot be said that if the curator spent a lot of money to build a highly complete armor, which is also magical, the museum will not close down. Also, don't you think the protagonist's interpersonal relationships are progressing too fast? Don't you think you're a little too familiar with someone you've only met twice? If you talk about everything, and if you talk about magic to Conan, he should think that it's a deceptive thing used for performance instead of a magic trick. This is only the opinion of the first eleven chapters. I haven't read the rest yet, so I don't know whether the author has made any progress. Then there are the advantages of this book. It is obviously the setting of the protagonist's ability, which uses magic. The magic settings of Xingyue can be achieved by humans using existing technology within a certain period of time. The magic that is the highest and closest to magic is the inherent barrier, and the effect is based on the person's heart. Therefore, this ability is of the kind that is extraordinary in the daily world like Conan, but it is not unacceptable. Magicians must die in the face of modern technology, and they will not destroy the world at every turn. The second advantage is the name of the protagonist. He did not deliberately choose a Chinese name to express his patriotism, but in fact it was extremely embarrassing. There is no such thing as "He doesn't know..." The narration appears outside of the character's perspective in the book. The author's reputation was a little bad. As soon as I entered, I saw someone posting that the author had written several books about eunuchs. I clicked on the author's homepage, and sure enough, there were a bunch of eunuch works. This may be one of the reasons why so few people read this book. If the author really wants to write a book, he should write it well. Don't just throw it away casually. Even if it is thrown there, start a new book and update the old book once a month. It's better than not even wanting to die. Finally, I hope the author can finish this book seriously, otherwise the author should change the title.

If you don't know how to write a pretentious plot, just omit it, it looks so embarrassing. . .

I read it again today and found that the author also likes to enjoy himself in the text, which really ruins the reading experience. If I want to write an outsider story, a small theater, etc. And the main text is finished, wouldn't it be a good idea to PS it and insert it in the middle of the main text? I almost thought this chapter was finished

Seeing that everyone has so many ideas about the heroine, let's count the candidates who have appeared in Conan who are suitable to be the heroine. I will consider it slowly, but I will not set the QAQ for the heroine in the near future. Hehe, who made me a single nobleman~~~

I found that most people who wrote about Conan regarded Director Ochiai as a just and pitiful person. Have you been misled? 1: I am the boss, is it wrong for me to handle my own property? 2: Director Ochiai is just a museum director, and his relationship with the museum is just an employment relationship. You like art, and appreciating art is just a personal preference. 3: The boss sells fine art, and the renovation of the art gallery is just a business change. If the boss consults with you, that's a matter of friendship, but if he doesn't consult with you, it's a duty. You can't kill someone just because he doesn't do what you want. If bosses like Director Ochiai kill people without following their own wishes, how many people will die in one day? Who will dare to hire people in the future? Society will not be in chaos. While watching Conan Ochiai's Reason for Killing, he was really speechless... It gave me the impression that he was a paranoid artist. You say they are honest and pitiful, and I agree. After all, they are seeking revenge for their parents, but you, Director Ochiai, are remunerating you for the artwork? Please tell me if someone has destroyed the artwork and sold it because of business changes. You have to be really thoughtful and buy those artworks yourself.

I just watched it and watched a few pictures. I originally thought it was the protagonist magician who went on the path of Kaitou Kidd in order to absorb magic power. Let's call him the magician of Golden Wing. In order to develop the family and Sonoko, he used the influence of the Suzuki Group to get access to a large number of items and look for magic things. Then he pretended to be cool, took off, dueled with Kidd, teased Conan, and teased Gin. During the day, he was Sonoko's boyfriend, running a shop, and at night, he was a magician, flying over walls and summoning heroic spirits. Then, in the plot of the explosion of the Conan incident, he said lightly: Tokyo, today is another day of nuclear neutrality! ! I, the magician, protect Tokyo, the War of the Holy Grail is about to begin, make money! ! Unfortunately, the author does not seem to have written it like this,,,, make more money →_→ I will write this idea and share it, I hope someone will see it and improve it. . Hey hey😁

I heard that the heroine is Koizumi Anko, so I came here to have a look, but it turns out that I haven't figured out what the world is like, and I can't even make a fortune quietly, or be cautious in my words and deeds. I just made a little achievement, and it all shows on my face, haha, haha, I giggled on the street, I was so disappointed that I didn't even say sorry to come here without saying a word.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found that the author hates women and likes to add a lot of drama to the main text, allowing the protagonist and main plot characters to express their feelings of hating women. It makes people very irritated and dramatic. The explanation given by the author is because he is single. To be honest, isn't the single-dog FFF group something that I just want to make fun of? It's really boring to use this as an excuse to add drama to the article. What's the point of putting three-dimensional things into the second dimension to express the author's inner hatred... Of course, if the author thinks this is interesting, just pretend that I didn't say it PS: Japanese prices are different from Chinese prices. Can't you even understand Japanese prices when writing a Japanese anime fan fiction?

It is recommended that the author write more about the protagonist and Koizumi Anko, and at least let Koizumi Anko become familiar with the Mori family, the detective team, Agasa, Hattori, Ye, and Sonoko. After all, these people are the main body of the original work. If you never appear in the same scene as them, then Koizumi Anko's plot line will read like a branch plot, and the dignified heroine will almost become a branch plot.

Finally I saw a Koizumi Anko who belongs to the heroine, ugh

Shangxiang, there is also a rare novel about a red heroine. I read it a year ago and lost it. It's miserable. I still don't have a harem because of the snake spirit disease. It's uncomfortable.

I understand all the reasons why Conan is the female supporting character

It feels like the protagonist is like a transparent person! What's the point of existing when you spend all day chatting and spanking with the washing machine? Some cases are described ambiguously and the protagonists don't do much? Running account, dear

Can the protagonist survive on 10,000 yen a month? Isn't it really funny? Because 10,000 yuan for water, electricity, food, etc. Is not enough for some high school students. People can still work for tens of thousands a month, right? After all, more than 10,000 yen is only a few hundred RMB.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the protagonist is like a **, disgusting one, but now I can only hope that the rest of the book will be better.

Chapter 11 made a common-sense mistake. As we all know, Japanese fruits are extremely expensive. As for the reason, it seems that fruits are not suitable for growing in Japan. It is not easy to grow even in greenhouses, so fruits are packaged and imported.

Reading between the lines makes people feel that the world background of this book is the Japanese province of China, and the drama unfolds every minute.

After reading so many Conan fanfics, it's hard to find a female protagonist who is not an original Conan. Is she such a fucking eunuch?

Have you seen the people in the back? Please tell me if the main character in the back is still mentally retarded. The first few chapters were a bit unbearable.

Notice hereby! I hope that if you support me by placing your first order, I can eat less dirt and save more toothpaste and water QAQ Bingbing is grateful, besides! Again, if the first order is less than 88,000, you are operating in secret!

Finally found a story where Hongzi is the heroine. . . But the protagonist is too weak and doesn't feel like he has any special abilities.

Much worse than the wizard next door. The protagonist's brain is obviously insufficient. His brain is really a mess. How can he just show off his skills and not be licked by a group of presidents? Are you actually selling dumplings for rice? Is this how to develop a family? It's good if you don't starve to death

Magician, return magician, fake

Although Aoyama said that 's reasoning ability is on the same level as Yusaku's. But Xiao Goro's ability is on the same level as when he was a policeman. What happened in the theatrical version of "Fourteen Goals" made Uncle Kogoro a loser in the short story.

I didn't understand Xingyue, so I wrote random words, and the writing looked like a ghost.

Please tell me if the heroine of a Conan fanfic is Koizumi Anko

Let me tell you, if this book is on the shelves and it doesn't have this score, it must be because you don't do enough to collect and reward it! There's nothing wrong with it, it's definitely not my problem, quack quack!

Notice hereby! I hope everyone will support Bingbing more so that I can eat less dirt and save more toothpaste and water QAQ

Akita Reiko, Belmod, Anko, and Mine Fujiko are all fine. They are all royal sisters, with good figures and European styles 😍. Personally, I like Belmod and Akito Reiko and Akiko. I request you to give more opportunities to appear 🥺

Although it's not Qingming Festival, I came over to take a look