The System of Cultivating Divine Pets

I contracted a bear with no characteristics or advantages. I know you can train it, but training does not require resources. Give up.

It's tasteless, but it's a pity to abandon it. This is the evaluation of your book. The idea is quite good. The outline is okay, and the writing is not too problematic. The details are not acceptable. There is a problem with the golden finger. I can't understand how you divide the potential. You don't specifically give the limits of the potential. You have been writing about how to improve the potential, so what is their original potential. The character level improvement is too simple. You lack of writing is so outstanding. It feels unsuitable. The most important thing is that the pets you wrote have no intelligence. What the hell is commanding combat? In reality, some dogs are very smart. You told me that alien dogs need to command and fight: they also need to call skills. You are not writing for children, you are not allowed to be so secondary. Pet training is too simple. Is there no way to increase characteristics?

Brother, you can add a book list.

The last book has not been updated for 6 months. It has already been considered as entering the palace. I hope the author will not enter the palace for the second time.

Come on, come on, this book is well written. The author needs a little patience to finish it. I can promise the author to reward him once a day for this book.

To be honest, this novel is a bit dull, and it can be seen that the author is not good at describing the emotions of characters, but as a pet novel, it is indeed a very good novel. It has a different feel than other pet stories. But it looks like a eunuch, which is a pity.

The idea is good, the writing is great. . .

The plot is boring and not very interesting.

There are a lot of typos. Please read it carefully before sending it out.

Why don't you check the author after he's finished writing? Many of them were written incorrectly.

I just wanted to ask. The pet is great, but the owner has no skills. Then why don't you just kill the owner when fighting?

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A novel that strengthens the evolutionary ability of Pokemon?

A eunuch? ? If there is no update tomorrow, I will return the bookshelf

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The setting is good The writing is terrible. The battle scene made me feel embarrassed. . .

I originally wanted to watch it, but then I saw it was discontinued and didn't want to watch it anymore.

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Refining it yourself, so that you can ensure that others will refine the potions needed for each evolution? Even if you know how to refine potions, you can guarantee that you will wholeheartedly help you refine potions, especially rare and precious materials. How can you guarantee that you can refine them? Having said all that, there is a system, but it turns out that I don't know how to refine the evolution potion. It's quite funny. According to the way this world is, when you go out, you must have wilderness survival experience. I didn't see how much the protagonist has? It's all done directly. Do you think an amusement park in the wild is safe? Materials from the wild need to be collected. Any animal or plant materials need matching collection methods. In fact, there are a lot of things that I could write about, so I'd better think about it carefully.