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I think authors need to take their works and work more seriously. Your novels all have a very big shortcoming. The characters are extremely vague, and the emotional expressions are unrecognizable... The details that should be in place are handled very immaturely. After 500 chapters of the previous novel, it is basically as bland as water, without climax. Of course, this is also your characteristic of being more realistic. But if a novel with this style of writing is to become popular, it will only be possible if your writing skills are at its peak...

The author has a tendency to look down on women, and the beauties in the article are all playthings without intelligence.

Do you think this book has a future?

Coming from Laoshu, is this going to be double-edited?

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The content of the book is readable, but the title of the book was not chosen well, and I was persuaded to read it several times.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The language characters are not very down-to-earth😠😠😠

Read more of other people's books and learn from them. Another book also has this problem. It was fine in the early stage, but it gets a little shaky in the later stages. The characters are too wavy. Also, is it possible that the characters you wrote expressed too much about their own thoughts?