I Have a Game Editor

The author is the anchor of station B! ! !

First of all, there are already more than 600 people in the skirt, mostly girls. It used to be a gaming group for Overwatch and LoL. You can come in and find girls to play games and eat chicken! If you have any questions or comments, you can write them down below or come to me in the skirt. I'm a newbie and I just started writing recently. Please give me your support.

I said, like others, that it was too fast-paced, lacked description, and had too much state involvement for me to watch. (Also, you said that the state only intervened in a paragraph. It's a pity that there was so much intervention. You look down on it. The protagonist is timid. I don't know what your author was thinking. The writing was very good in the early stage, but it started to fall apart in the middle stage.)

Too messy, the idea is good, but the writing is not enough

As I watched, the voice of the old chief Qilin was telling novels in my mind. It was as magical as the old chief was telling novels on a live broadcast - your loyal tribesman Xiaobaliu.

The eunuch stamp also charges a special fee

Author, let me give you a suggestion. Never want eunuchs, never want eunuchs, don't want eunuchs, want eunuchs, eunuchs, eunuchs.

The halo of reducing intelligence is a bit large. Even if the 100 million is not directly entered into the account of the pig's feet, the country can still easily find it if it is more troublesome. First, check the account information, and then compare the previous bills and work. If it does not match the income, and if there is no large income in the past, the circle will be very small. The National Security Agency does not need to wait for the bank's report. The bank will take care of this. If a person with no money suddenly receives 100 million, it will be difficult not to trigger the bank's unknown fund monitoring and anti-money laundering warning. Don't think it is impossible. As long as you have more money in your account, the bank will know. This can be made very clear by people from the bank often promoting various investments of the bank, so this is a huge poisonous point.

After death, people can enter the game and live another life. If one's negative karma in this life is high enough, one will refuse to live another life. Those with low bad karma who want to live another life must enter the game hell to wash away their sins. If they cannot accept it, they will not be able to live another life.

Too many typos. Looking uncomfortable

It hurts my brain to see it divided into sections. Learn how others divide it into sections.

Fortunately, this thing provides server production, but purchasing the most basic server production materials made Wang Chen almost vomit blood; Looking at the messy things in his apartment, Wang Chen shook his head; But the problem that comes with it is that Wang Chen survived the game, but he could only enter it by himself;

I just b-lao Qilin 😰

First of all, isn't the pregnant rat the younger brother, while the hidden cat is the older sister, as mentioned above. Then the elder sister is not a warrior, but the younger brother is the priest. In chapter 32, your two professions are confused; then the elder sister is the captain and commander of the team, and in chapter 32, you become the younger brother and the commander again. I was really confused...

Um, what level are the current players? Can they participate in this plot? It's all about being killed by NPCs. Players will definitely not want to play after a long time. Also, in the previous arcade, you only wrote the image of a wretched man without highlighting the arcade. The plot was very abrupt.

I'm a eunuch and I charge a fee. The chapters are rubbish.

I read some posts Someone among the billions of people spent a few years buying some steel electrical panels and other resources to create a game using alien technology that surpasses human technology. The country can find out within eight hours that the protagonist made it 🥵

My fault here is that I didn't make it clear. I have modified the beginning of Chapter 44. An explanation is given inside. All of Wang Chen's funds are protected by bracelets and hidden in virtual accounts. Transactions cannot be found in the country where the virtual account is used.

I'm sorry, eunuch. There are so many problems with this book. It was already exposed in more than forty chapters I have been writing until now and I have tried many methods but it is not easy to write. I'm sorry to my readers who support me. I'm really sorry Plus I really don't have enough time so I can only cut it off. The new book Age of Discovery is almost 100,000 words long and is much better than the old book. The framework is the same. You can read the new book. This book will never be finished I will rewrite it after the voyage is over Although I'm very embarrassed, I'm still shameless. Dear bosses, please post a new book. New book If I were a eunuch, I would eat the toilet

Look good, look good ￣ ￣)σ￣ ￣)σ￣ ￣)σ Come on, come on, come on

This book is finished. The protagonist, as a game developer, should remain mysterious. I run out every day to make announcements. Have you ever seen a game planner interact with players like this? Fortunately, it wasn't that exciting in the front, but later it often appeared in the game and interacted with players? I'm afraid it's not poison. And with the country, you can have an artificial virtual person talk to other parties in the country. Just like DNF's Celia, Ma Huateng said behind him that he would be given another 500 😁. The author's writing is very good in other aspects and is really good to read, but the reason for your poor grades is the above problem. There is no force. Just like durian, it tastes delicious but smells bad

I originally wanted to fatten him up before killing him, but he didn't expect to find a eunuch.

I was speechless when I saw contact with the state, it's not for me. Let's split 88.

Let the author start a new book again. I support you. The details in your book range from great to very poor. Two extremes in one book. The results are not good,,,. You don't have the motivation to write either. My favorite part of this game is the chicken part.

It's very strong and beautiful. You can take a look.

After reading the comments, I feel that patriotic education needs to be improved.

The eunuch is happy for a while. The eunuch is happy all the time.

Mmmp Just added investment.

And is it true that you wrote about a woman in the back😊? Are you afraid that you don't want the results? You, the protagonist, are destined not to have women in the early stage. It would be best not to have a female protagonist. Or try to downplay women?

He's still in the palace, I can't afford to offend the boss at Station B