This Guy Has Vaginal Eyes

The storyline is attractive. I am waiting for the update every day. I hope the author can update it soon. Stop by and check in.

Third Eunuch, Pi, if I don't deal with you for a few days, do you deserve another beating?

Although it is already very cold, I still adjust my mentality and will try my best to update! After all, I can't waste the recommendation votes of the cuties who voted for me.

Big support for the author! ! !

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Let me have some fun~ Hurry up and update!

Langlang is healthier😁

Vote for two chapters, come on↖(^ω^)↗

It feels like flying as soon as you take action, kneel down and lick it 🌹

If you have any suggestions, you are welcome to make them. The author accepts them humbly~

The author's plot design is good, but the pacing needs to be right. For example, in the first chapter, the nightmare is short and not profound, the movements after getting up are very light, and the feeling of thinking from chaos to reality to unreality is not fully written. The conversation with the senior brother was too relaxed, and it continued to be more relaxed in the first scene. It would be better to cut down the dialogue and increase the description of the scene, especially to highlight the feeling of fear when walking past. Mutual fans of my humble work "No More Regrets YF"~~

The article is good,. It's because the character's IQ often drops. It is easy to have small conflicts with the previous character plot settings. It makes reading this book a bit dull. And it leads to confusion in the plot clues of the characters. It may upset readers and affect the reading of the article. This effect is similar to the impact on reading caused by all the periods I mentioned above, but it is much smaller. The biggest advantage of this book is that the language dialogue is very expressive and can even be used as a dialogue novel. However, it also has some shortcomings. Compared with the voice descriptions of platinum authors, it lacks many details and foils. Overall it's good, a little support. I hope to see you become a great god in the future.