The Golden Dragon Breaks the Sea

Dude, I saw it at station B and came to take a look. You haven't signed a contract yet, so take my advice, don't write about traditional martial arts, and start a new book, whether it's science fiction or urban fairy tales. Your style of writing suggests writing about fairy tales. Let me talk about the problems: 1. Updates are a flaw. You must write at least two chapters of 5,000 words every day. 2. The pace must be fast. The first three chapters are very important. They must focus on depicting the protagonist and tell a story. It is immediately exciting. In the first ten chapters, a simple story must be told and a climax must occur. Don't get sidetracked as you write, don't delay the pace, don't write about things that have nothing to do with the protagonist, don't write about conversations between top experts, or martial arts competitions. You think it's a foreshadowing to expand the worldview, but it's actually of no use. 3. Goldfinger needs to be creative. The protagonist is so unique that he is indistinguishable from other talented supporting characters. Apart from practicing, it has no great effect, let alone promoting the development of the plot. In addition to improving the strength, Goldfinger also pushes the protagonist to take action and develop the plot. Let's talk about it roughly. To be honest, I am also a rookie author. The above is some of my experience in signing contracts and being a gunman. You can refer to it. Maybe it can help you sign a contract smoothly. Let's encourage each other.

If you come from station B, leave your footprints first.

Why not take revenge on the emperor's family in the end?

It's from Station B. The writing is really good. The author is very good and insists on his dream. You may scan the text line by line instead of reading it word for word, so you may need to read some parts one or two more times before you can read it smoothly. For example, this middle-aged man who is of the same race behind him wears the most arrogant clothes. I didn't understand this paragraph the first time I read it, so I had to go back and read it again. I don't know what other people think, but that's the case for me. After all, this is the first chapter. Many people may find it cumbersome and not want to read on. I have never written a novel and I don't know how to give opinions. I can only cheer for you. Big cheers for the author! Stick to your dreams! If you don't give up, you will always get good results.

If you are into martial arts, I recommend reading "Simple Martial Arts", which can be said to be the pinnacle of the martial arts genre. Hope it can inspire the author

Coming from station B, it's not easy to support, but I feel that traditional martial arts is really not popular anymore. Even if you write traditional martial arts, it may be more interesting to combine it with suspense criminal investigation, such as Lu Xiaofeng, Chu Liuxiang, and Yang Bei's Yun Ji Sang trilogy that I read a while ago. And in martial arts and martial arts, martial arts is an embellishment and a background. It would be better if there were more elements of chivalry. To put it bluntly, the level of force should be high.

Come on, I saw you talking about your past and this novel in a group a long time ago. Today I suddenly thought of reading it again. Hold on, and I wish you a bright future.

Um? After playing for a long time, it was not sent out?

If you don't have enough writing skills, it is recommended to start from Xiaobai Wenlian, as updates are too few and unstable. Even if you are a part-time writer, you should update at least once a day. It is recommended to use rare words and words sparingly. They look really tiring, and they do not make the article elegant. There is a market for easy-to-understand styles.

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The author's writing is very beautiful, but no one reads it. I have a way to get more people to read your book, Weiyaayaa335

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