The Text of Rebirth to Change One's Life

If this paragraph is not written well, it will completely collapse. No matter how well written it is later, it will collapse.

To be honest, it would be better to not have any routines, it would be more exciting. It focuses on classmates, family members, sisters, etc., With less conspiracy routines, and a fresh style. The front is to persuade people to retreat, and the back is exciting, especially the novel's imagination, it is still very interesting 😎, come on

The plot is too bad, the writing is pretty good, and the system has no sense of presence. Just a moment later, a plagiarism came out. The plagiarism was released earlier than the protagonist. I can't imagine how a trashy protagonist who wants to have fans to help him turn around. Add in the fact that his father owes 200,000, and all added up, this book feels a bit frustrating.

Why are the grades poor? Let me tell you my thoughts after reading half of it. The first plot is cliche. Although the writing is passable, the cliché plot lowers the score a lot. The second protagonist's IQ is not about hard IQ, but as an adult before time travel, he shouldn't become childish when he goes back. This is the biggest draw point. The novel originally had a score of 70, but the old-fashioned plot was lowered to 60, and the novel was forced to be childish, which lowered it to 40.

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Have you started rebirthing for 12 years? Wow, it seems that I am really old. . .

The writing is quite good, but the plot when I saw the defendant copying the book was too poisonous.

Because the author's account is not up to the level, I borrowed someone's account to post it. Because the author is a novice, the new book will have many shortcomings, such as plot problems, poisonous points... Such as update problems, but I just won't change it, so come and hit me! Ahem, the above is a joke. Actually, when I wrote it, I didn't know that my writing was bad, and I didn't know how to correct it. I was still a little sad when I saw those negative reviews. In short... I will slowly improve it, and I hope to get some suggestions from readers. 😥 Finally, please collect, recommend, and invest. I'm a grown man and I won't give you my due consideration. …… ❤❤❤ [██▓▒░]2019 Good Luck Loading

The writing was pretty good in the early stages. Although I have late-stage naming difficulties, it was acceptable. However, he was poisoned in Chapter 18. I felt that this person had no social experience. The villain's deception was too serious and he was slapped in the face.

Not bad, I hope the protagonist's father can find his way back from his lost ways

To be honest, the more industries you work on, the less real the characters become.

I have been hanging out at Qidian for so many years. Found a problem. As long as you use any system when writing a book, it will basically be a second- or third-rate novel. Definitely not top-notch. 99% Of books with systems are dead. Not a subscription and very little. Creativity in writing is really crucial when writing a book

Would it be better to change the name to "Wenyi Revolution", such as getting a new rose gold bracelet for free, free housing, three free meals a day, and bodyguards to watch at all times? I get excited just thinking about it 😃

Traveling through parallel worlds is better than 2012, and there is basically no chance of traveling past 2000.

I feel that the protagonist is nothing like a time traveler. Other time travelers are children who make choices, but I want them all. That An Tianxuan and that Bai Yu are in love, just make yourself sick, don't write about it.

This plot is really... Your routine is too old, right?

I feel like Guo Changge is not awesome yet

The new book "Treasure Hunters in the Heavens" has unlimited horror trends. If you are interested, you can support the author. Thank you very much.

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Name: Lin Dong Gender: Male Occupation: Contracted author And protagonist (exploited (River Crab Passing By) Ju): "City of the Colossus" (low-end version of "Infinity Blade" (strange) + low-end version of "Wanda and the Colossus" (plot) + low-end version of "A Song of Ice and Fire" (map) + low-end version of "The Witcher" (Protagonist)) (Actually, there is no need to be so detailed about the plot of the novel, and the book written by the supporting actor does not need to be so detailed, unless) Unless the author gives the male N the position (I am so excited just thinking about it) Ending: Repentance, start over Family background and life experience: Phoenix Man's journey as a writer

Congratulations on the launch, full order support (*＾ワ＾*)

I'll automatically subscribe after it comes out. I've been very busy recently and haven't watched it for a long time 🤓

Good guy, these professions written in the author's preface, even if you copy each one, it can only be formed in units of months! Is the protagonist busy here? Even if there is help from the system, it will only be a script novel at most, like making a movie, drawing a comic, and doing special effects. Which one doesn't last for many years? The author might as well let the protagonist write a song, it is short, concise, convenient and quick

I spent so long writing Brother Chun that I thought she was the heroine, but then you made Ai Xiaoyu the real heroine, which is a bit confusing!

I passed by the city category this week and recommended it. This comment section is too miserable. Oh, by the way, who am I... I am Qing Yi 😏😏😏

Wow, the author who has been raising you for a long time, your update speed is really great! ! ! !

Finished with flowers (*＾ワ＾*)

You can start thinking about what to write in your next book. This one is pretty cool.