Land of Swords and Runes

This is a novel that seldom describes League of Legends seriously. It is good, but some places are really disgusting. It can be said that except for the protagonist who was normal in the earliest days of Shadow Island, there are some very silly places in Bilgewater, Piltover, Zaun, and Freljord. I won't talk about this, but in fact everyone can see that it doesn't matter and is pretending to be cool for some reason. Obviously because of this topic, this pretense for the sake of pretense, I don't know how many novels have died. It's like I told you clearly that Yixiang couldn't eat it, but you still had to eat it. Is it cool to show off? Cool. But pretending to be cool for the sake of showing off is not good, it's nerves. There are already more than 300 chapters. I think this novel is only as good as this. No matter how the author describes it later, as long as it remains stubborn, the level of development will be the same. And I conclude that the author is writing the entire novel, and will not be able to write the second one, and even if he writes it, he will be a eunuch. I have said so much nonsense, not for any reason, but because I hope that this theme and this novel can be continued and get better and better. After all, if the novel written by the author is not good enough, no one subscribes, and there is no money, then naturally there will be no motivation to write subsequent books.

1: The early stage was pretty good, but later on when I gained strength, I started to have a cliche plot of having a harem everywhere, even Jinx's mother could do it... I vomited 😅. Sure enough, a person like the protagonist who is addicted to women is a waste without the golden finger of cultivating immortals. It is so annoying to look at 2: The heroine has basically no effect, and there is basically no description of their independent behavior. It is purely the protagonist who is crushed by the fighting power and taken away. Then the heroine is all rbq... The charm of the heroine lies in the character and experience, not in the quality of life. I hope that the heroine in the later period will not be deceived by the protagonist's aura and fall in love with the protagonist. The writing style is basically like this. I just want to ask when *Ari😃 3: The plot follows the template of fantasy fairy novels, and looking at this trend, it can be predicted that the protagonist is looking for the void and the dark descendants everywhere, and the shadow is killed and becomes a demigod.

I have to come back and comment, but the system won't talk about it for now. . Let's not talk about the writing style yet. . . The harem stories can also be released first. . . But what you write is LoL world text, and your settings are so messed up. I just feel that it makes me very uncomfortable at night. I recommend the author not to write about lol, dc, etc. This kind of thing is more difficult to set up. You can try Teletubbies first.

There is something wrong with the panel settings (I think). It will reduce the mana that can only be obtained by upgrading and the life that can be obtained by upgrading. The power will continue to decrease unless you keep killing. To be honest, it is a bit confusing.

Let me tell you, I only saw Bilgewater. It feels very poisonous. The combat effectiveness of Shadow Island is very high in the official setting. Pig's Knuckle was already a lord level in Shadow Island, but when it was about to come out, the lord was suddenly adjusted to level 60. Bilgewater is the place with the lowest combat effectiveness in the official setting. Except for the Baru Islands, there is no place like this. Ordinary people, what have you become? Ordinary pirate leaders are level 40. Sarazi is an ordinary person. Her gun is made by herself. In the official Soul Eater Night background story, her gun jams. If it weren't for Lucian, she would have been dead. Are you kidding me when you say she has the potential to destroy the world? According to what you wrote, everyone can go to the Shadow Island for a swim. If so, do they still need Illaoi to help them resist the Soul-eating Night? Couldn't they form a group and go to Shadow Island to clear the dungeon?

I feel like the protagonist should spend more time in Shadow Island! You see the protagonist can level up, but it seems like he can make his own choices! Is it possible to save more experience at lower levels? In theory, the experience gained after upgrading will be reduced, and the protagonist's upgrade is completed instantly! Then you will find that in theory, only Shadow Island is suitable for the protagonist to upgrade, because the life on Shadow Island will be resurrected! ! How many people do you need to kill to level up in other places, and the book about killing people to level up should theoretically be broken.

I often read about authors, and when I visit the book review section, you can take what I say as a joke and ignore it, or you can choose to read it. The three big pitfalls of fan fiction are DC, Marvel, and lol. Since you have chosen this path, the setting must be rigorous. Ninety percent of the troubles are due to the setting. You are okay with this, but you know why there are so few monthly votes. I will tell you the truth from the bottom of my heart. These days, few people are willing to vote for harem novels. Aesthetic fatigue is one problem, and I can't say the other. Anyway, for me, recommendation votes are fine, and monthly votes are fine. For fan fiction, either you directly overturn the original plot and make a second creation, just remember the major events, or you make light changes and stick to the original plot. Overturning the original plot will test your outline settings. It is more troublesome, but slight changes will make it easier. Just copy the original settings, add some protagonist scenes, and fill in the holes to create a butterfly effect. Isn't this it? ! What can I say about your book? The writing is okay, but the feeling of self-excitement is too serious, and I am afraid that one day I will let myself fly too far and I will not be able to come back. The most important thing is that after writing so much, you definitely can't change it. You can use this book as a writing practice. You'd better be sure about the next one. Pay attention to three points. 1. The setting does not have to be too strict, especially the system text, but don't overdo it. 2. Stallion Harem, you go to the book waste area to post it. I posted a post to ask how many people like to watch the harem now. 3. Self-pleasure. The biggest fear is to write whatever you want when you get excited. Once it goes beyond the scope, you don't have time to accept it. My dear, it's not that I don't speak well. With your writing style... You will definitely not be able to accept it. A bad ending or a eunuch is your only way out. I can only rate this book as a mid-to-low level, especially the last hundred chapters. I hope to see your next book with more exciting writing.

When this book was set in Shadow Island, the writing was still attractive. The protagonist was fighting monsters and leveling up all the way, struggling to survive. Because there were no characters that required too much interaction, the author probably wrote it very smoothly. When we arrived at Bigilwater, things were a bit broken. The hero settings of Shadow Island, including Thresh, Centaur, and Horse were all only at level 60. As a result, every gang here had several heroes above level 40. But as a Shennong, I can still hold on here. The most vicious thing was when we arrived in Piltover and Zaun. We first stayed in a hotel in Piltover, one of the best hotels in Piltover. The waiter who opened the door looked down on the protagonist's country bumpkin, so the protagonist gave him a look in return. Then because the waiter was frightened by this look, he felt that he had been insulted by the bumpkin and couldn't accept it anymore, so he started trying to trick the protagonist into going to Zaan to seek wealth and death? Then the protagonist wanders to Zaun, meets a beautiful professor, and somehow ends up marrying a pair of sisters? I really haven't been so poisoned in a long time. Usually the poison is clearly stated at the beginning of the book, so I just give it a cross. This book started out well, then continued poorly, and then suddenly became very toxic. The author is first-rate in poisoning👍

The results are indeed not good. The author used his love to generate electricity, and I admire him. There are very few novels that travel through the world of League of Legends, not to mention that this one has over a million words, so why do you need a bicycle? Although there are many female protagonists, they do not account for a large proportion. The author's writing style is indeed average, and the power system in the early stage is quite chaotic. In the later stage, it can be clearly seen that the author is rushing to progress. Recommended for those who are in a book shortage or are interested in traveling through the world of Lol. All in all, I think the writing is pretty good. I hope the author can improve it a lot, thank you

To be honest, the writing is indeed good, but the division of combat power is a big problem. The combat power of that damn place on Shadow Island is not even a bit higher than Giltwolf. . .

What does the author want to do? Write a female gun that has the potential to destroy the world. She is almost as good as Thresh at the age of 16.

It took three chapters to get the bounty in bed. Author, you are such a devil.

As I watched it, I suddenly realized why the contract for more than 200 chapters has not been signed yet... Sigh... I am afraid that your writing techniques are not the same as those of 10 years ago.

How should I put it? I feel that there is actually a lot more that can be written, but if the author wants to choose to end it, we have nothing to say, after all, the results are not good. To be honest, it's well written. I liked it very much before, but we can't help it. One person doesn't have much power and can't let the author see the results. It's very helpless that a book I like is about to end. Alas. The author must write his next book well! I will definitely chase it to the end!

To be honest, I can't stand it. I can't stand it when I see the bounty hunter The routine is too old. . .

It's a good idea to differentiate power by level, but the author didn't handle it well. There are only the protagonist and the natives on the Shadow Island. This is not obvious yet, but after leaving the Shadow Island, the level of Thresh and others has changed from 40 to 50. That's okay. By Bilgewater, a pirate leader has a level of more than 40, and the protagonist's level at the time is only 40. How many levels does Gangplank have? If he calls two more people, can he go to the Shadow Island to gain a sense of presence.

Dream start, force yourself to death

I read the book reviews and then I was ready not to read it.

In fact, aside from the background story of League of Legends in this book, the writing is actually pretty good, but once those background stories are added, it feels messy. It is too messy. The strong ones are written as weak, and the weak ones are written as strong. This is more like an online game article. Shadow Island is the novice village, and Pidgeot is the second map.

The early stage is okay, and the invincible flow is no problem. The problem is to return to Zu'an to treat the little girl, and the poison will persuade her to retreat. You are clearly the one who is at fault, yet you threaten an unrelated demigod, why did you kill your Zu'an? You are such a clever little kid. You floated after understanding the Immortal Killing Sword Formation. Do you really think that the gods of Runeterra can't kill you, or do you think the Dragon King's monitors can't lift the sword? This routine was used only ten years ago.

The mana setting here doesn't feel like mana, but like fighting spirit.

This is the crappiest system I've ever seen

I don't know many powerful ones, just these few Star Dragon King Bard Qianyu World Destroyer Ice Crystal Phoenix Two Envoys of Demacia Galleo The protoss of Mount Targon (there seem to be quite a lot, so I won't list them here)

I think games can bring happiness, but I have to think about so many things. The last time I played Heroes was 16 years ago. I sold my game account to a classmate. Now I want to buy it back, but I can't find anyone (😭) But I have been paying attention to fan fiction, and I still can't figure out why Noxus betrayed Riven. The other thing is that I have been thinking about which world is more powerful, Azeroth or Valoran (the world settings are different, so it is impossible to compare) I prefer Azeroth. I have always wanted to write a book. Azeroth failed against Sargeras, and Azeroth became a broken world. Humanoids, orcs, and some other creatures who wanted to live, opened the Dark Portal, and this time the Dark Portal happened to be opened in Valoran. . . It must be interesting to fight again for the territory.

It was good when I was on the Shadow Island. When I landed on the shore, the female gun level 3/49 really disgusted me The female gun in the alliance world view was 10, and the captain was 19 Illaoi was no more than 39 before she asked the gods, and she was above 50 after she asked the gods. I have no desire to read the real moment you wrote.

It's well written, but why doesn't anyone read it?

This is the first time I read a book with this theme, I like it😊

Why does this introduction look so much like writing an essay, hahahaha

After reading more than ten chapters, I can't understand the word count and what I'm trying to express.

"The Book of Talismans" is very similar to the author's book. The magic talismans suppress ghosts and monsters. You can read it if you have nothing to do