The Best Era of Tennis

I read the whole book and also read the book reviews. I have some ideas for you to listen to. Whether they are right or not depends entirely on your personal preferences. There are many reasons for poor book performance. The subject matter, tennis, is not very attractive to begin with, and this is one reason. The plot is bland and there are no ups and downs, and this is also why the writing is bland. This book is about the protagonist who loves tennis and travels to the West to study at his own expense. However, due to personal talent problems, after three years of study, his overall strength is still scumbag. Suddenly a system hits the protagonist, and then he begins to get rid of the talent scumbag, and then gradually reaches the top of the tennis world. Based on these settings, the problem with this book arises. The protagonist has been studying professionally for three years and does not even understand some of the most basic tennis skills. He still needs to rely on guidance from a club that is nothing after returning to China. This is a matter of detail. The protagonist loves tennis so much. What did he learn in three years of school? The author's book review reply said that schools for foreigners also rely on people to teach. This is correct, it is an elite education. However, the basic theory and basic skills teaching must be consistent. The protagonist has been studying for three years, but even the basic theory and basic skills are poor. Is this a problem of talent? Then the protagonist was hit by the system and a serve was produced. The protagonist suddenly had a world-class serve. Then... No more, then what should I do to write this system? What is the performance of the protagonist at this time? The serve has not become a trump card. During the game, I keep thinking about random things in my mind. Is this a game? Due to random thoughts during the game, the protagonist was overturned more than once. This kind of second-stroke performance is far different from that of a qualified athlete. You can say that the protagonist is young and has poor psychological quality. But if the protagonist encounters this situation again and again, then it is not a matter of psychological quality, but an issue of attitude toward the game. Moreover, the protagonist never receives targeted training in normal times, nor does he have any adjustment plan for psychological problems. When not competing, the author's protagonist is narcissistic and says he is handsome all day long? What is this? To sum up, as a reader of this book, you will either see the protagonist thinking wildly during the game, or you will see the protagonist being narcissistic all day long when he is not competing. So I would like to ask, will this content be attractive? Personal suggestion is that the game situation and the protagonist's psychological activities regarding the game can be described during the game. After the game, you can write about the protagonist's efforts to target weaknesses or specializations. In addition, add some social and sophistication, and this is a complete competitive article. If the author's writing skills are good, he can make some emotional dramas between men and women, friendship dramas between men and men, or even some ambiguous side scenes, then it will be a good sports article.

Signed in, it looks really good, but it's a bit sparse and not enough to look at.

I finally found a novel that is not about tennis. I will stand in the way and hope the author will write well.

It's best for the protagonist not to have anything to do with the system. Just compete for the country in the Olympics and don't worry about anything else 🤓 If you want to promote the development of Chinese tennis, you can open a tennis school after retirement to help train talents

Does the author have a book club? I would like to join it.

Luo Ning is tall, short, fat and thin, so I didn't notice it. Some key data suggestions for writing the system are richer. Currently, it is a bit simple to divide some technologies into four levels. For example, the serve includes landing point, speed, topspin, sidespin, and American style. These details can be discussed in detail. Not to mention complete digitization, they are all explained in detail. Picking out a few also seems to have some changes and is not monotonous. In addition, you can fill in physical fitness, will quality, including venue adaptability, weather and temperature metaphysical bonuses, etc., To give readers more impressions, and expand their imagination. In the future, when the protagonist grows up, it will be interesting to get fan bonuses, interact on-site, and add drama plans to yourself.

In addition to competitions, you can also write about daily training, improvement of your own technical mastery, summary of your own failure experiences, etc., So that readers can see the protagonist's own progress instead of just looking at data such as the system. . . . .

After reading about the characters in the novel, I went to the official website to check and found that they had actually participated in these events and were really attentive. I would like to give them a thumbs up 👍👍👍

What the hell? The author didn't want to write and secretly deleted chapters? It's still the starting point or my problem here. There will be fewer chapters every once in a while.

Many of the chapters are not connected daily, and it feels like there is nothing except the competition, so the article seems very dry. Unlike other novels, it reads very smoothly. In the exchange of dialogue between characters, or in one incident, the stories come out one by one. Now, apart from the competition, the protagonist of this book has no one else to talk to Zhu Bin, Zhu Ruonan, and his father, so the plot seems very thin. I hope that more daily plots can be added in the later period 😎