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Please correct your attitude towards writing first and then talk about the plot.
Author, no matter what you write, you must first have a correct attitude. Is this a paragraph or a chapter? Or have you never thought about segmentation at all? Let's take a look at the effect after sending it out.
Bet fifty cents that there is no outline! The author writes too casually, the plot is too fluid, there is a lack of interaction between characters (there are not many actions and words and it is dry), there are too many psychological descriptions and unnecessary explanations! The logic is inconsistent, I hope the author can change it
The order of this chapter is so confusing
It's all nonsense
It's all nonsense, it's all water, and it's annoying to watch it endlessly.
Being an emperor is so nonsense.
I feel like the writing is pretty good!
I vote eight recommendation votes every day when there are updates, but I don't know how many more days I can vote for (updates)?
I really like it, so keep writing. The tickets are all for you.
The introduction of the article is full of secondary errors and has no common sense in life.
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Don't be a eunuch, I can give you 20 recommendation votes every day.
What is the protagonist doing? You dare to go to your enemy's house when you are clearly doing things to harm others. Is there any benefit left to talk about?
The plot stacked up too quickly, and the interpersonal relationships did not bring out the joyful and positive energy.