The Ultimate Emperor

Name: The Ultimate Emperor
Author: Sheep That Loves Oranges

终极大帝主

by Sheep That Loves Oranges (爱吃橙子的羊)

Status: Completed
Length: 113k Words
Genre: Eastern Fantasy
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Eastern Xuanhuan
Updated: 6y ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

Basic information: Yang Fan, male, 32 years old, 180CM, 74KG. Occupation: Chinese mercenary. Nicknames: Alligator, Desert Wolf, Fanzi. Time: 2018.11.11. Location: X Avenue, S City, Lanji Bar. Event: An adult man fell from a building, causing one death and two injuries. The perpetrator and a passerby were seriously injured. The deceased Yang Fan has contacted his relatives and recorded the incident... Wandering without the concept of time, Yang joined the time-traveling army. Unfortunately, the world and family that Yang Fan came to was very strange and very aggrieved. After his rebirth, at the age of 13, he expressed his helplessness, so he had to take off his mask of indifference and make a fool of himself. However, his encounter with the Fire Scale Tree became a turning point in his fate. He was determined to establish the Chinese Dynasty and dominate the world with a bucket of country blood. The era of hot weapons is coming... At this time, a door that had been sealed for several epochs was slowly opening for him.

Reader comments

After being slapped, the emphasis was placed on being an outsider, and the sense of immersion suddenly disappeared. The protagonist's character was too confusing, and the main plot was unclear. The writing and plot are too young. The protagonist is moody and has too many leaps. In the third chapter, I suggest you, the author, go back and remake it. The first two chapters are very attractive, but by the third chapter it completely collapses. A sense of immersion is what most authors pursue. Without a sense of immersion, it will not be attractive. The Yang family, the army, Glory, brothers and sisters, etc. Can all enhance the sense of substitution. It can be seen from the plot that the author did not write a detailed outline and wrote as he pleased, resulting in a messy writing. This kind of relaxed article is still very suitable to my taste. Otherwise, I would not comment. Come on, author.
7y ago