Iron Fist All Heavens Travel

The excessive fast travel is too annoying. After the first dungeon, the volumes are not divided into volumes, which is too messy. There is no description when entering the dungeon. The niche audience in the dungeon has no idea what you are writing? It is recommended to delete redundant descriptions. For non-main copies, just write which world obtained what, without writing in detail. I don't even know where to start. The order of sentences is too confusing and the plot is confusing. It can only be regarded as food (can only be regarded as gruel).

The Strongest Human Shield Tour Group passing by

It's well written, why isn't it popular? I think the title of the book is too vulgar as the author. You can change the title to something like Li Tough Han's Martial Arts Journey (Funny 😏)

One Piece World is just nonsense! Why does Kizaru have such a personality? And the protagonist even said that he would kill Marineford for Ace? ? I don't know what the protagonist thinks, but I still know that most of the navy are good people, and most of the pirates are bad people!

A bit boring. It was said to be an iron fist, but there was no fighting spirit at all, and all I could see was waves of embarrassment.

Is the second copy still the night ward? I can't understand this copy.

In fact, each copy can be divided into sections instead of calling them all text volumes. For some people, this is very discouraging.

It's good to say that you hate gold and jade at the beginning, but you admire Zhou Huai'an. This is really jarring.

How should I put it? I like the style, but I really don't like the copies. So I watched Longmen Nine Resentments.

"Martial God Tsunami" and Hong Kong Manhai Tiger and Martial God and Martial God Ultimate and Dragon Tiger V Part 1 and 2, the electric current push and the magnetic field rotation, the Sea Tiger Explosive Fist and the Six Jue Shocking Techniques and the Hades Technique and the Holy Sword and the Infinite Reincarnation and Tianwu Killing Dao, Whale Killing Fist, Hell Dao, Brain Development, Burning Heaven Extreme Fire Power, Titanium Extreme Body, Six God Art, Innate Qiankun Kung Fu and Big Thunderbolt are very suitable for the protagonist to learn from and integrate into his own mysterious skills.

The world is too niche, so it cannot become popular. What readers want when reading a book is the comfortable feeling of being from God's perspective, and what they want is a sense of immersion.

Oh! I didn't know about that hell star until now! It turns out to be the [Judgment Star] with the long tongue and big eyes in Junji Ito's comics! ! You, the author, don't even explain it. I only found out about it recently after watching Junji Ito's commentary.

It is recommended that the protagonist or his incarnation go to the world of [TV series: The Legend of the New White Snake] to marry Bai Suzhen and Xiaoqing and marry them into the house. Heaven and earth are formed from vitality, and all things are formed from heaven and earth! [Qi] is the root of all things! In urban areas, all writing about Chinese martial arts is just to brag about how awesome Chinese martial arts is. In fact, Chinese martial arts cannot compare to the ancient martial arts and internal strength. Chinese martial arts is only mundane power and is limited to physical strength. Internal strength is indeed an otherworldly way to break through the limits of the physical body, refine and transform qi, cultivate the "qi" that comes from the natural source of the heaven, earth, universe, and nature, and then seek the origin to understand the essence, energy, and spirit of fellow practitioners. Just like what was said at the beginning of "The Path of the Infinite Dao Warrior", there is an end to national martial arts. They are just techniques and not Tao. Only by breaking through the limits and cultivating a sense of Qi from the outside to the inside can there be a way forward for practicing internal skills. In fact, all worlds have the vitality of heaven and earth. According to the law of conservation of energy, all worlds have the vitality of heaven and earth. However, some worlds have more spiritual energy than turbid energy and are more active and are more suitable for some Buddhist and Taoist practices that directly cultivate spiritual energy. Some worlds have less spiritual energy. Turbid air is more inert, making it more difficult for practitioners to sense and refining with lower efficiency. There is also a risk of backlash in refining, or it may be transformed into turbid air due to technological pollution (turbid air includes resentment, murderous air, evil spirit, poisonous air, miasma, exhaust gas, radiation energy, worldly desires, etc.). The world of scientific and technological civilization is often more turbid. Turbid qi is more suitable for cultivating turbid qi, the demonic and evil witchcraft and body-training techniques. Buddhist and Taoist practitioners who absorb spiritual energy need to spend time and risk backlash to convert turbid energy into spiritual energy, or absorb the essence of the sun, moon, stars, cosmic energy, flame, thunder and lightning, ice and snow, wind energy, tidal energy, thermal energy, nuclear energy, etc., Which are more difficult to sense and refine and are violent and dangerous. ! Every world has the essence of the cosmic energy of the sun, moon and stars, but the energy of the stars and the universe is not as easy to sense and absorb as the vitality of heaven and earth. Unless you go to the universe to practice or go to the ancient heaven of the earthly immortal world, the source of the infinite universe (close to the ancient stars and all star universes), and the essence of the universe of the sun, moon and stars is more violent, unstable and dangerous than the vitality of heaven and earth. It is more difficult to refine and use it for your own use! Therefore, in a world without scientific and technological civilization, it is impossible to practice ancient martial arts and self-cultivation methods. It is only in the initial stage that it is more difficult to practice, more difficult to generate a sense of qi, and the practice efficiency is slow, and it is easier to be back-bitten by the turbid qi and become possessed by fire. At best, you will become a cripple, or at worst, you will die. However, when you reach the realm of unity between heaven and man, where you can easily absorb the essence of the cosmic energy of the sun, moon and stars, flames, thunder and lightning, ice and snow, wind energy, tidal energy, heat energy, nuclear energy and other energy that is more difficult to sense and refine as well as violent and dangerous, your cultivation speed will become faster and the risks of cultivation will be greatly reduced. So don't restrict the protagonist from using and cultivating the inner strength and true energy of the human body's original essence, spirit, and true energy in each different plane on the grounds that the rules of planes are different or that the world of technological civilization is in the end of the Dharma era and there is no spiritual energy. This is a tired old-fashioned rubbish reason that is full of contradictions and cannot be justified.

Some interesting plots have been skipped, such as the purple rose chapter. Too dry.

How many people are there? I just want to see the night shift ward. I just have no pursuit in life 🥺🥺

Didn't he say there was a new book? Where are the new books?

This book can be said to be somewhere between good grass and fairy grass. The pig's trotters have a good outlook on life, don't procrastinate, and don't force feed poisons. It's very good. I like it. Just a little description of the battle behind the dragon gate is extremely simple and feels like a running account. I hope it will be better in the future

Poison, poison, highly poisonous, ah, poisonous to death

Where is your new book? 🙂

Are you finished, or are you a eunuch?

What should I do if I want to see a fan? Where can I find it?

It's 2020, is there a new book?

Paragraphs are too long. Many books nowadays are basically one sentence per paragraph, or two or three words per paragraph, which looks comfortable.

Only narration, no description, can't stand it

This is nothing, a plot that I have basically never seen

What's the author's next book? ? ?

No destruction of heaven and earth, bye.

Was someone fed a bat? New book?