The Peerless Qin Clan

The author takes the route of a serious drama. This kind of serious writing is rare. Many people like to read this type of writing. Come on, people, support you!

This is a good book, the writing is smooth, the structure is rich and branching, and I also like the pace, which is relatively fast. The structure of this book has the feel of Jin Yong. The layout is grand, and the emotional descriptions are delicate, real, and resonant. It is my favorite type. As a girl, I prefer the romance part of the book. I have also read other parts. I believe boys will like it more, so this is a good book for both men and women of all ages.

(๑‾ ꇴ ‾๑) The scene at the beginning of the author's article is very similar to the idea a classmate of mine told me in junior high school. It's so kind. It's a pity that the classmate was too lazy to tell me the follow-up idea, so this book feels like a pity dream came true (๑‾ ꇴ ‾๑) I will read the later part when I have time.

I have read Chapter 40 so far. The writing is very good, the fighting scenes are also well written, and the brotherhood between soldiers is very clear, but I feel that there is a slight problem with the characterization. The protagonist is only eleven or twelve years old, not a reborn person, nor a time traveler. Is the killing too decisive and overdone? And is the relationship between the two heroines or the female supporting character rising too quickly? The female supporting character is not portrayed enough. She falls in love with the protagonist purely to promote the plot within a few days? Isn't it a bit too much? You can extend the timeline a little bit. And I feel that the character of the senior sister is portrayed as a delicate and savage girl who does not distinguish between right and wrong. It is not like the righteous path of cultivating immortals since childhood without a father and mother, but more like a spoiled daughter of a wealthy family. The conflicting language between the protagonist and his father in the first part felt too much, and it felt unreasonable to have no respect for the language spoken by his master and Cao Shishu later. After all, your father considers him his brother, so what qualifications do you have to say those words, especially when you don't even know the whole story. (I'm not a fan, I just want to express my feelings after reading it)

Is there a heroine in it? Is the heroine good-looking? Will she survive to the end, or will she die within a few chapters after it comes out?

When I saw the four continents, I thought of Journey to the West. Speaking of Journey to the West in the second half of this year... 23333

Different from the current mainstream Internet articles, it is impossible to say who is good or who is bad, each has his own strengths.

I checked before and found out about the usage of speaking and speaking. Some friends also pointed out this problem. Now I am correcting the wording errors in the previous chapters. Regarding the issue of three periods as ellipsis, it is also being revised. It is expected to be completed on the 24th. Please remember to refresh it.

Come on, Orange is here to see you.

Qin Runan was worried because of the black feather fire on her son's forehead, because the Qin family's family seals were all purple. In order to solve this mystery, on the day when his son Qin Ze turned one year old, he invited two friends. A well-informed Cao Tianding, and a Chen Daoling who is proficient in Taoism. When both of them sensed Qin Ze's forehead with their index fingers, they both thought that the Yu Huo was the Ghost Sect's true energy, and incidentally the Dao Sect's true energy. Later, as they talked, they suspected that it was the Four Continents' true energy that they were hostile to. The book contains not only the foreshadowing of the Black Feather Fire, but also a story hidden by them, which may also be related to this. Ten years later, Qin Ze did not learn any immortality skills due to his father's special taboo, and he was not allowed to touch the things in the military building. What worries Cao Tianding is that he is afraid that Qin Ze's temperament will be affected by the black feather fire, but he does not want to think that Qin Ze himself wants to embark on this path of cultivating immortality. In fact, the black feather fire is not a destructive thing, but a hidden golden finger, which makes Qin Ze, who wants to be strong, even more attentive. Even if he has a golden finger, Qin Ze's own efforts are inseparable from this slow life of road cultivation. The pain of bone erosion is no worse than any pain. Overall comments: The plot of this article is smooth, the writing is natural, and one step at a time allows people to see a different path to cultivating immortality.