
Douluo's Innate Level 20
斗罗之先天二十级
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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758Chapters
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I'll give you the author's recommendation vote, here's an exciting update.
I have never heard of Xiantian Level 20, and I have never seen this setting in San Shao's novels. I am changing the original framework at will. Is this fanfic?
A good Douluo fanfic. I hope that the protagonist's strength will grow at the same level as his age. The current age growth rate is relatively slow, but his strength is already very high. The protagonist can grow a few years older, and it will be more reasonable to be 12 years old. It is not recommended to break the CP set in the original work. The protagonist's behavior can be made more mature. After all, a person in his sixties in his previous life should not belittle and provoke others just because he is strong. You can be more tolerant and steady towards people, make more friends, instead of stepping on each one when you encounter one, to save face for the other person, and to find multiple ways for yourself. Finally, Titled Douluo can see through the soul beast's body, and Soul Douluo will affect the soul beast's shielding aura in human form. In addition, there are some grammatical errors and typos in the paragraph, which can be slightly revised. For example: The little girl is very cute, but you don't have to pinch her cheeks at first impression. It's very rude. You can usually touch her head or pinch your hands. It is ugly for women to use wide eyes. You can use wide eyes and sudden contraction of pupils... There are also words commonly used by the protagonist, such as forced smile, sluggishness, and stunned. It is recommended to use them as little as possible. Also, don't show too much "shock" or "swallowing". You can use slightly surprised, surprised, change of color, twitching of brows, twitching of fingers... I hope the author's writing will get better and better, come on!
I feel like it's pretty good among Douluo fans, it's pretty good-looking.
I want to write a book where the first martial spirit is the sky, the second martial spirit is the earth, and the third martial spirit is the universe and the galaxy. The god emperor descends to earth and has a soul power of eight million levels. Who sees it? Just write back
Compared to other Douluo fans, this book has few problems and is considered a relatively good book. It's quite good. I'm looking forward to the following stories.
The protagonist can feel the murderous intention of his stepmother, but no one present feels it at all. Damn, I'm so drunk.
How could a Contra not sense murderous aura?
Just read the introduction: Level 20 Xiantian doesn't want to dominate the world, but still wants 7v7? Low is dead
The author has quite a few loopholes. Wang Sheng, can you take a look at Notting Academy in Dou 1?
I couldn't stand the first few chapters. The clan leader's wife actually missed the murderous intention in public. This family does not have a titled Douluo, so the clan leader's wife is just a Contra. But the level 81 person didn't notice it, so I just laughed. The male protagonist has noticed it, but the level 81 guy didn't even notice it. Even if the male protagonist's soul is a bit powerful, it can't be stronger than Contra's. You killed someone in that previous life and you noticed it. You said it as if the 81-level one has never killed anyone at this point. What's even more poisonous is the fact that the family knows the male protagonist's talent and only sends an 81-level one. I'm so fucking disgusted. Moreover, the male protagonist has not absorbed the soul ring, but he can withstand the second soul skill of a soul master and the blessing of the third soul skill. After resisting the first wave of poison, a second wave was added, each wave was more poisonous than the last, awesome.
Isn't Wang Sheng a bit player that Third Brother played when he was in elementary school?
Don't you think it's a bit awkward when the heroine appears? Slipping away 😅
Died by poison, forcibly reduced to wisdom, Holy Mother, her combat power collapsed
This is a very good book among Douluo fans. Please keep writing, author.
Why doesn't the protagonist go to Wuhun Palace? Even though he offered very good conditions and even tried to persuade her with sincerity, he almost fell on his knees and licked her, and the protagonist even fucked her to death.
The three views collapsed to pieces, Tang San and Qian Renxue! The protagonist and Bibi Dong! Speechless
Is it extremely poisonous? It's kind of nice...
It's ridiculous, very ridiculous, and I won't talk about the talent of the protagonist in the plot at the beginning. Then can you make his supporting characters more human-like? There is no hatred and nothing will hinder you. If the protagonist has a high talent, he will be killed. It's really ridiculous to forcefully add a plot to him.
It's so stupid. The name doesn't change, it's still 6 years old and level 20, and the appearance remains the same. How do you know that you must meet that grandmother a few years later? The second ring at 6 years old is a big event that will cause a stir in time. If the information is accidentally leaked, it doesn't matter whether your martial arts are the same or not. Let's kill it. This setting is unreasonable. You leave your fate to luck.
I just can't help but complain.
Douluo Dalu is one of my favorite novels. I can't stand the subsequent ones. Sometimes I search for Douluo Dalu fans to read. To be honest, I haven't found one that I like so far. There are a lot of bad books. What I don't understand the most is whether it's because Tang San is a double. The main characters in the subsequent fanfics are twin martial souls, and I can't write that kind of effect. Now when I read the Douluo fanfic, I read the chapter about the awakening of the martial soul first, and then gave up on the twin martial souls. Really, I haven't read the book yet, but I just looked at the table of contents and saw the second martial soul. I couldn't help but complain.
Qian Renxue's level 20 is the full tenth level of innate talent plus the tenth level of divine gift. How dare you think about it, you are born at level 20.
If you update more, I will give you recommendation votes.
Let the protagonist rest for a few times. No, no matter where you go, people will find it troublesome. Possessed by a degenerate god, there are people who give you experience everywhere. I'm tired of watching it.
Co-writing the heroine is a big deal. I watched it directly after the heroine came out. I forgot about the hundreds of pictures.
Don't enter the palace. It's a good book. I'll save the recommendation votes for you.
Not to mention the many poison points, the number of times the Kung Fu and martial arts points were used in the previous life was almost twice as much as the soul skills. Is this still Douluo Continent? Only use exercises and martial arts?
I took a look at the character list and decided not to chase him. There is also a son named Wang Dandan? Can Bibi Dong agree?
The protagonist's sword spirit feels so backward
You don't have the inheritance of a grand marshal, so giving you a dragon-slaying knife is useless. What Sword Spirit requires is talent, not giving you an artifact will make you awesome. This was also the case when Tang San gave up the Clear Sky Hammer and played with the harpoon in the later period.
The author needs to keep updating. It's best to have a explosive update. Don't go into the palace.