
Douluo Dalu: Innate Level Twenty
斗罗之先天二十级
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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A good Douluo fanfic. I hope that the protagonist's strength will grow at the same level as his age. The current age growth rate is relatively slow, but his strength is already very high. The protagonist can grow a few years older, and it will be more reasonable to be 12 years old. It is not recommended to break the CP set in the original work. The protagonist's behavior can be made more mature. After all, a person in his sixties in his previous life should not belittle and provoke others just because he is strong. You can be more tolerant and steady towards people, make more friends, instead of stepping on each one when you encounter one, to save face for the other person, and to find multiple ways for yourself. Finally, Titled Douluo can see through the soul beast's body, and Soul Douluo will affect the soul beast's shielding aura in human form. In addition, there are some grammatical errors and typos in the paragraph, which can be slightly revised. For example: The little girl is very cute, but you don't have to pinch her cheeks at first impression. It's very rude. You can usually touch her head or pinch your hands. It is ugly for women to use wide eyes. You can use wide eyes and sudden contraction of pupils... There are also words commonly used by the protagonist, such as forced smile, sluggishness, and stunned. It is recommended to use them as little as possible. Also, don't show too much "shock" or "swallowing". You can use slightly surprised, surprised, change of color, twitching of brows, twitching of fingers... I hope the author's writing will get better and better, come on!
I want to write a book where the first martial spirit is the sky, the second martial spirit is the earth, and the third martial spirit is the universe and the galaxy. The god emperor descends to earth and has a soul power of eight million levels. Who sees it? Just write back
I feel like it's pretty good among Douluo fans, it's pretty good-looking.
Compared to other Douluo fans, this book has few problems and is considered a relatively good book. It's quite good. I'm looking forward to the following stories.
The protagonist can feel the murderous intention of his stepmother, but no one present feels it at all. Damn, I'm so drunk.
How could a Contra not sense murderous aura?
Just read the introduction: Level 20 Xiantian doesn't want to dominate the world, but still wants 7v7? Low is dead
The author has quite a few loopholes. Wang Sheng, can you take a look at Notting Academy in Dou 1?
I couldn't stand the first few chapters. The clan leader's wife actually missed the murderous intention in public. This family does not have a titled Douluo, so the clan leader's wife is just a Contra. But the level 81 person didn't notice it, so I just laughed. The male protagonist has noticed it, but the level 81 guy didn't even notice it. Even if the male protagonist's soul is a bit powerful, it can't be stronger than Contra's. You killed someone in that previous life and you noticed it. You said it as if the 81-level one has never killed anyone at this point. What's even more poisonous is the fact that the family knows the male protagonist's talent and only sends an 81-level one. I'm so fucking disgusted. Moreover, the male protagonist has not absorbed the soul ring, but he can withstand the second soul skill of a soul master and the blessing of the third soul skill. After resisting the first wave of poison, a second wave was added, each wave was more poisonous than the last, awesome.
Isn't Wang Sheng a bit player that Third Brother played when he was in elementary school?