Chang'an Hanshi

The idea is very good, keep up the good work. I wrote earlier that I was longing for my wife, but at the same time I was interested in the landlady. It felt like there was a bit of conflict and I forgot to correct it.

This emotional drama is so bloody! ! As a modern person, you just like it if you like it, and you don't like it if you don't like it. If you are still married, if you can bring your wife over, fine, then you use modern morality to set standards for yourself. Why do so many protagonists in time-travel books become the same as saints in ancient times? What kind of monogamy can you do if you can't forget someone who can never be together again? You want others to respect you, and you have to give others respect. Don't always treat your own way as a treasure. Besides, you don't suffer, and you also like others. As a grown man, show some courage, and don't be a coward and make a simple emotional issue so complicated. People who read this kind of book like to see how the protagonist changes and strengthens the country's national strength, how he talks nonsense with historical celebrities, and can write about the love between children, but less!

It is not easy to write a book, the plot is too cliche, almost all the stories about the Tang Dynasty are based on the same routine. First there is a dazzle, which either attracts Li Shimin, or it is Cheng Yaojin or other ministers. Cheng Yaojin is always shameless, and then the protagonist is all kinds of shameless. I cannot say that the novel is not well written. I can only say that the routine is annoying and there is no desire to read. The heroine appears too early and is arrogant, and her appearance must make the protagonist stunned, and her eyes must be resentful.

The protagonist who is having a rough time travels back in time and lives a rough and tumble life with his children. How did this happen? I thought he was a bit clever and a bit of a virgin bitch. He is a silly protagonist.

If you are a bookworm, stop reading. Don't embarrass yourself.

It's only a few chapters and he's already poisoned. His son is a failure.

Newbies can take a look, but I can't stand it. It's so hard on my eyes.

I'm used to watching time-travel movies where people don't dare to say anything. It's rare to see a movie where the protagonist finally dares to say that he is a person from thousands of years in the future.

The shame was thrown to the Tang Dynasty. The balloon flew away and was shot down. . You deserve to be beaten for writing like this?

Suitable for newcomers but a little awkward for old bookworms

Although the author has done his homework, there are still some mistakes. There is an article "Research on Grain Prices in the Tang Dynasty" on Doudin. Com, which mentions that "at the beginning of Taizong's accession to the throne, famine was particularly severe in the capital, Hedong, Henan, and Youyou. A piece of silk cost only a dou of rice." The price of a piece of silk is about 450 Wen, and a dou of rice is 12.6 Kilograms. After conversion, a kilogram of rice is a little more than thirty-five Wen. In the third year of Zhenguan, "Frequently brought abundant wealth, and rice was worth three or four coins." At the beginning, Pig's Foot calls the person who takes him in Big Brother. "Brother" did not mean elder brother in the Tang Dynasty (at least Li Longji still called his father brother). Even if the pig's feet came from modern times and someone named Chen was called eldest brother, he should have asked "What does eldest brother mean?" Also in the first chapter, the Tang Dynasty implemented a curfew, but that meant only main roads. Now that the pig's feet have entered the district, the "policemen" in the district will never ruthlessly drag people to beat them up. In the second chapter, when introducing the layout of the yard, it is written that "the kitchen is on the left and the bedroom is on the right." There is an old Chinese saying that "go to the toilet and go to the kitchen." The layout of ancient buildings is that the toilet is to the north of the bedroom (the northeast or northwest corner of the yard), and the kitchen is to the south of the bedroom (usually when you enter the courtyard gate, turn left or right to find the kitchen). The kitchen and bedrooms will never be built side by side. As for the stone table under the tree, it is even more time-travelling. The table evolved from the case. Judging from the ancient paintings of the Song Dynasty, it was during the Song Dynasty that the wooden case gradually became taller and finally turned into a table. The appearance of the stone table in the Tang Dynasty was really ahead of its time. In the third chapter, "Fall in love with floors, fall in love with floors." "Lou" had three meanings in the Tang Dynasty: "brothel", which refers to a luxurious and exquisite elegant house rather than a high-rise building, "flying building", which refers to a two-story building with a solid lower floor, and "cloud building", a tower-like building that towers into the sky. The "building" in the true sense probably originated from the Calyx Xianghui Building in Xingqing Palace. However, the first floor of the Huae Xianghui Building is also uninhabitable, and the main hall of Xingqing Palace, the Qinzhengwu Building, is equivalent to the Tiananmen Gate Tower, and it is even more uninhabitable. In the Song Dynasty, buildings were generally double-story. Even for wealthy families, three-story buildings were rare. So. Can the landlady really understand the meaning of "falling in love with the upper floors" of pig's feet? Ancient people rarely used the word "I" to refer to themselves. Although the word "I" exists in oracle bone inscriptions, using this word to refer to oneself was considered by the ancients to be an extremely arrogant behavior, and the ancients who paid attention to etiquette would never accept it easily. In Chapter 4, the salt tax is mentioned. In China, from the third year of Emperor Yang Jian's founding to the implementation of the Two Taxes Law for more than 100 years, Chinese people have enjoyed salt without paying taxes.

The first few chapters were okay, but then what did it mean when my son was like that? Abandon books.

I can't stand it anymore, it's poisonous..., Let's go, come on, author

😅😅😅😅

The poison point is too high, not suitable for old bookworms

This book is a bit poisonous and not to my liking. The protagonist has a low IQ and a low IQ, and the supporting character has a high IQ.

The protagonist has a low IQ, and the good things have to be released little by little, and they will be squeezed dry, and what use will you have when the time comes.

When I saw Li Shimin talking about deposing the crown prince Li Chengqian, I never wanted to watch it again. Do you show the emperor Chinese historical records? Haha, if I were the emperor, I would kill you directly, so that only I think I know the history, and then pass this book on as imperial power, so that the empire can continue forever. This poison is so damn poisonous! ! !

The dialogue between father and son in Chapter 7 was so messed up that it was so painful to watch. A 3-year-old is just a 3-year-old. His character was already established in the previous chapters, but suddenly he took a 360° turn. The character structure completely collapsed. The previous writing was really good, but Chapter 7 was really unbearable.

Can you tell me if you can have a good time with two recommended videos every day? I'll give you the starting coins drawn from each circle every day.

Chapter 7: Dissuade more than half of the people

I gave up when I saw it was almost on the shelves. I also jumped through the chapters before it was released. How should I put it, it is not suitable for reading with a brain. One second is Wen Tianxiang, the next second is Wu Sangui. No personality at all? I didn't have diamonds, so I took on a lot of porcelain work. Knowing clearly that if you seek death, you will definitely die. In short, I have been poisoned to death, and I can only say that it is not suitable for me.

The protagonist actually told Li Shimin that he was a member of the Time Travel Party zeeeee...😅😅 His IQ is touching

Not suitable for old bookworms

This is so cold_(:з∠)_! ?