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There is no need for a modern army. The organization of the army can reach the level of college students' military training reports and performances. Coupled with the weapons from the American Civil War, it can dominate the world😁

I've wanted to complain about the author for a long time. Isn't the update speed too slow? Oh my God, three thousand words a day? ? ? ?

It's a pretty good divine book. I like to read divine books, just like my dad likes to watch divine dramas.

In general, this is a work that is slightly above average in all aspects and is not a novice and has no brains. Judging from the selection of materials, this is an imaginary historical work, or to be more precise, it is a military novel in an imaginary historical background. That is to say, the focus is on various battle scenes and strategic advancement, and the fictional history is just a background board. I have to say that the author's military settings are pretty good, especially in terms of the performance of gunpowder weapons and their impact on tactical strategies. But other equipment (such as hot air balloons, telescopes, cold weapons, military uniforms, etc.) Are ignored too much. In addition, the early battle descriptions are quite interesting, and there are some strategic deductions between the enemy and ourselves, but the enemy is still too weak in strategic response, and the enemy has never thought of collecting intelligence and changing tactics, which makes people feel very awkward. In addition, the novel focuses too much on describing war, and there is less plot construction on domestic affairs, diplomacy, and invisible struggles (of course, it cannot be said that there is none), and it lacks a sense of three-dimensionality. Another point is that in novels that focus on war, apart from the protagonist, there are often many secondary characters throughout the novel. At this time, it is necessary to spend pen and ink on shaping the characters. There are still characters in this work, and they are not the same kind of masked people, nor are they tools that are thrown away after use. However, I still feel that the characters are not in-depth enough, and there is still a slight lack of characteristic expressions of the characters themselves (such as signature sentences, characteristic actions, unique hobbies, etc.), And I hope it can be improved in the future. In short, this work is not a brainless piece of writing. The author did check the information and did use some writing skills. It is a pity that he was not able to use them skillfully. It shows a little ingenuity. I hope the author will work harder.

I think this book is pretty good. In fact, after reunification, it would also be good to write a story about a small team, not necessarily all about the overall situation.

Could the author have the protagonist's father kicked away or assassinated? Forget about hurrying up! His dad is so disgusting, he still wants to be the emperor, what is he capable of! The main character (the Holy Mother) thinks about his father everything, and even loses his reputation to his father! There is a conflict within the family, but the soldier does not firmly support the protagonist and even asks the protagonist to ask his father! Are you saying that his father is impatient with the protagonist and poisons him directly? Will he be able to perfectly control the protagonist's army without any resistance? The imperial power has no father or son!

The writing is pretty good, although some of it may be unrealistic, but at least it's not brainless, and the plot is enjoyable to watch, so that's it. Those with more serious requirements can read the official history.

It's a novel that gets better and better as you go to the end, so why is it so limited?

I don't know if you have seen the news, please help to inform me that Shuo Shu, the author of this book, unfortunately passed away in a traffic accident on October 17, 2022. He has published an obituary on his website. I hope Shuo Shu can travel to the world he described.

Why do so many historical novels develop modern military systems without considering the environment and production conditions? Do you think you can build an arsenal if you know a few principles about the military industry system? Then why should you introduce it? ? And some people still want to change the system. Are people's ideological consciousness that high? Pig's feet are all great people. A person who is selfless for others is really angry. If you say that you are drawing on some training or other reasonable things, it is sure. But many people just forcefully depress readers and then use mindless settings. It is really angry. A good-quality novel does not need to be blindly cool. In that case, it is better to write about the city and let you pretend to be 13 indefinitely. Please, be a human being!

From a reader's point of view, you will feel that the protagonist Sabi is supporting her father and younger brother, and giving away famous utensils. From the perspective of the author and the plot, most of the development period of the word count has passed, and then it is time for A to push the number of words, so how to count the words (money)? Let's have a brotherly battle with the big house, and a brotherly war with the same roommate, which is conservatively estimated to be worth 600,000 words. The book has 2 million words of beauty.

Brother, I just looked at the works you posted, and I found that on the issue of women's rights, I feel like you are really close friends. Feminism Feminism What is feminism? Women's rights. But political books have long taught us that power and obligation are related. No one can only enjoy rights without paying obligations to me, and no one can only pay obligations without enjoying rights. So in my opinion, what is real feminism? You must be able to create social value and pay obligations, so that you can be qualified to enjoy power. Those pastoral feminists scold men every day, but have they ever thought about how much we men have paid to get these rights? In various professional positions, on construction sites, and on battlefields, most of them are men. This is achieved with our own labor and sweat, and even with the sacrifice of our lives. To be honest here, if women can really do the same as us and replace us from various construction site positions, all kinds of hard work, and military battlefields, then I don't think there is anything wrong with women enjoying the main status in society. Of course, the same is true for some pastoral feminists in China. They feel that as a woman, I have to enjoy the power and I don't have to pay any obligations. I just want to say here: Don't insult dogs anymore!

It's probably like playing house seriously.

I don't know what other people are like, but as long as the fictional historical novels I read introduce the modern military rank system, I will give up the book immediately.

I really don't understand what the protagonist's family does? Despite the whole lagging rhythm, the protagonist still stupidly thought it was good. The protagonist tells readers all day long that they should take a long-term view and target the stars in the universe. But you can't even recognize the problem in front of you clearly, so how far can you look? Typical fantasy with high ambitions and low ambitions. The portrayal of the younger brother and father is downright disgusting, but the protagonist is blind and unable to see. I couldn't stand watching the Rizhao Pirates fight. The Pirates collapsed inexplicably. Two to three thousand pirates are thousands of miles away from the first wave of pirates that the protagonist fights. How could it be possible that just because the first wave of pirates fled, the rest of the pirates would collapse all the way. If they were too close and were washed away by the first wave, it would still be clear. Moreover, the protagonist only has more than 100 enemies to fight, so subtract 50 to reduce the number of corpses. The remaining 50 people were chased and scattered. I don't believe that there are not a few hundred-man pirates among the two or three thousand pirates who can torture these 50 people to death. The pirates can easily organize themselves to kill the protagonist's team. This war is simply too miraculous. Especially the main character's younger brother is really awesome, a student going to the battlefield. Killed more than 20 people in two or three strokes, although it was a pursuit. But don't go too far. Does your brother have such good physical strength and ability? Although the more than 20 pirates were defeated, they couldn't be stupid enough not to resist. Just one or two turn around and fight back. Can a novice like the protagonist's brother handle it? The cheating has gone too far. With a distance of 10 steps, this primitive filling musket can still fire two shots? Others charge like a snail? Ten steps and ten seconds to run? And not even throwing the weapon forward to kill the musketeer?

First of all, we can have a consensus that women may have stronger physical strength than men, and there are many in history, so I won't give examples, but generally they are not as good as men. Secondly, a very important point on the battlefield is to keep the battle line intact and not collapse. Once the battle line collapses, it is basically the result of the entire army retreating. So, aren't female soldiers waiting to be broken through on the battlefield? In addition, when female soldiers go to the battlefield, don't they have to separate men and women, and fight according to their menstrual periods? War does not require political correctness. Women's rights can gain a say by letting them work in factories and manage logistics. Letting them go into battle is the most irresponsible way.

There are not many good people in the entire Water Margin. In modern times, they are all shot for 5 minutes. Among them, Li Kui kills innocent people indiscriminately, Wang Ying draws swords for women and brothers, and Zhang Qing and Sun Erniang not only kill people and sell goods, but also select human flesh to neighboring villages and distribute it to the civilians who will not eat it. They also say that Wu Song is not to kill. Such people can be called heroes. I really can't understand the values ​​​​of the ancients.

The title of the book should be changed to "Dedicate myself to my father"

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It's like child's play. . . In the beginning, a group of farmers killed a group of heavily armed off-the-job soldiers. . .

The protagonist of this book is his father

The novel is an imaginary historical novel. The main background of the story is the early Southern Song Dynasty, but it also adds a fictional mixed world background of various barbarians invading the Central Plains from the Southern and Northern Dynasties Wuhu to the Song and Ming Dynasties. At the same time, the story is also mixed with many historical and romantic figures. The protagonist travels through time and becomes the son of the Lord of Wubao in the northern Shandong region. He grows up from farming, establishes a strong team and base area, and is determined to expel the Tartars and restore China. The main highlight of this book is probably the thrill of developing grassroots farming and killing enemies. ---Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Book Desolation" Come to us for the Book Desolation!!!

I recommend The Immortal of Aztec, which is very beautiful and well written.

You promised to come back and start a new book?

Where did the gun come from? Please ask. I have the lowest IQ, I only read a few pages before giving up, I'm brainless.

I thought it was from the Han Dynasty when I looked at the title of the book, but after looking at the catalog I found Li Kui 🤫

The most annoying thing about historical time travel novels is using hot weapons to fight cold weapons

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Borrowing precious treasures, I recommend a book with three vulgarities and many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

I have been waiting for you for more than a year. When will you publish a new book? 😡😡😡