Academy City's Noble Phantasm User

To be honest, the novel is well written. But! Author, try to put yourself into the protagonist. Forget about being a crossdresser, I can tolerate dressing up as a woman. But the protagonist is too cowardly, a man who is forced to wear a uniform. Although the writing is good, it doesn't suit my taste. Abandon the pit.

I just started watching it, and I want to talk about some issues. Let me make it clear first, I don't mean to criticize: I always felt that the part where the protagonist's abilities were revealed was a bit abrupt, with no foreshadowing or connection at all. It was like they were talking about what to eat tonight, and then the camera turned and a big cake was directly shot on the person's face, which made people look confused. In addition, there is a problem that many novices have - poor writing skills. Of course, this can be improved slowly. I feel that the author seems to be a little anxious about the development of the plot. It feels like a great plot has been conceived, but this plot needs to develop slowly, and at the author's update speed, it will probably take a long time, so it is a bit anxious. Because I once wrote a novel I conceived (although I didn't publish it), I had this feeling. However, the creativity of this book is quite good. In fact, I have also had fantasies about this, but I just found it troublesome, so I just thought about it. I am looking forward to the plot behind this book.

Magic Forbidden Quilt Type Moon Exploding Hammer, okay, is this how it is played now? I think it's not a problem for one Kanzaki to destroy all the heroic spirits below the ceiling. It is not a problem for one person on the right to destroy all the heroic spirits. I wonder how to fight?

I would like to ask you to figure out the concept. Do you figure it out and then learn the technology, or do you figure it out first and then do it again if you need to use it later? (Actually, what I want to know most is that after the protagonist uses his ability to create runes, will he always have the ability of the runes in the future or will he copy it next time?)

Hehe, isn't this a macho man?

Hello author, as a reader, your ideas and thoughts about this book are great. But it's a bit sad for me. Maybe you, the author, like women's clothing in reality or you are very happy with women's clothing. This will attract many readers who like this genre, and will also dissuade many readers. I myself am not very repulsive to women's clothing men or look at them with a strange eye. In this book, I wonder if the central importance is given to women's clothing? There are many times in dozens of chapters that cross-dressing seems to be forced by others, but as long as you have a normal mind and the protagonist's ability, it can be avoided. All the reasons why the protagonist wants to cross-dress are just excuses given by others. When I saw the cross-dressing scene in the anime, I laughed it off, but in the novel, it felt like the protagonist was licking it from beginning to end. . . Don't tell me that you do this because you like it! If you really like it, you can either make boyfriend and girlfriend directly and eventually get married (whether it's a harem or not, it depends on your ability). Either save the other party from misfortune, prevent tragedy from happening, and make the other party happy (no matter it is the official CP or you match them, as long as the other party feels happy) Or leave the main line and stay away from the hero and heroine throughout the whole process, do not disturb the original plot and let the other party's emotional line continue. The last thing to say is. Lick until there is nothing left, and the dog who licks will not die well.

I quit immediately when I saw women's clothing. As a straight man, I can't lead a protagonist who can dress in women's clothing. It would make me feel disgusting.

Anyway, I don't really like transvestites. Either I don't do this, or I just become a woman.

I suggest that the author takes on the role of the protagonist and thinks about what will happen in reality to increase the rationality.

The Moon and the Porcelain Demon Forbidden is the same as the martial arts and the Porcelain in the Ancient World. Of course there are many more powerful ones than the Demonic Forbidden, but the brainless blowjob is definitely not

TM Noble Phantasm User, the writing is so monotonous, I am speechless. Look at how others use Jin Shining Shining. You are using it like a waste.

When reading novels, I basically have a sense of immersion. Women's clothing and women's clothing are too poisonous. Secondly, the protagonist's time traveler is a man. Lei Ye will not force others to wear women's clothing without meeting the protagonist a few times. Moreover, the protagonist has clearly stated that he hates it. An incompetent person will force others to wear women's clothing when they are not familiar with it. Lei Ye's character is playful and he likes it sometimes. It's a prank, but it's all between same-sex people. Unfamiliar people of the opposite sex force others to wear women's clothes. That's not the character of Mr. Lei. How disgusting you are when you let readers into it. Not once, but many times. The protagonist of the character becomes a girl. You later commented that the protagonist has become a woman. The sense of substitution is completely confusing. I hope the author can improve it more and have a sense of substitution, otherwise it will be really poisonous.

I hate transvestites, I'm sick of you being this type of cross-dressing boss, invincible, hum.

In fact, just write that the protagonist is a woman. I can accept it. Lily is also okay. Or does the author have some quirks?

Can Xingyue pass the Right Protector again? The blower comes out again