The Melancholy Guest of Floating Life

Can I update twice a day? I feel like I haven't seen enough

The writing is good, I like it very much, and I look forward to the next development.

Female videos may be different from male videos. I am a fan and I have some experience with male videos and I can tell you. First, the first chapter sounds good because of the grand scene, but in fact it just throws away a page of setting. (This is the point of failure in male videos) Secondly, do I feel a little obsessed with the protagonist? I always feel like the conflict in the first chapter was staged. Just imagine, at the beginning of the first chapter, it is written that Weisan is a little fox, and then the world view is presented in the plot from her perspective. That way, the sense of immersion will be better. The above is what I said after reading the first chapter. Thirdly, time is limited, I only read Chapter 9. It feels like these nine chapters are all about the world view. Did the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist develop too fast? What readers see is the process and the plot. Your simple sentence, how many years, skip and omit the plot. Although it makes sense to readers, it always feels a bit abrupt. This is my opinion and no reference is needed. If you want to sign a contract, you should read the beginning of similar books. I once wrote a movie of more than 100,000 words, but like you, I didn't sign a contract. Then rewrite the internal investment and see how to write the beginning of the popular book on the ranking list. It's not difficult to learn a few basics about signing a contract. The last sentence, if you don't know female videos, just read this book review.

Is the author female? It contains too strong personal emotions, and there are too many repetitive psychological activities. Although it feels like I can follow the guidance, it does not have the shocking feeling of being written step by step through the plot. This book should be placed in the female channel. It is useless to put it in the fantasy category. It does not reflect the characteristics of fantasy. Even if it is placed in the fairy tale category, it is better than fantasy.

Although the plot is mediocre, the writing is good, and you get one for every recommendation vote, so I'll watch it if I want to gain weight.

Just looking at the chapter title, I think it's interesting 🌹

Author of the book: Lin Suhe Status of the work: Fantasy romance, not signed • Book title This is a very attractive place for me, because anyone with a discerning eye can see what this is trying to say, but I am just curious about how the author will write it. It is very eye-catching (at least for me). •Introduction This section is clear, full of suspense, and tense enough to highlight the depth of the writing. •Words The writing style is good. Writing back from suspense is a big highlight, but it must be handled well. If it is too short, it will be meaningless, and if it is too long, people will lose the courage to read. •Punctuation This is my biggest doubt about the author's book at the moment. Why are there so many dashes and dots in the first few chapters? I understand the tone that the author wants to express, but it's okay. I can delete it a little, because at first glance, there are too many punctuation points and it seems a bit abrupt. Deleting it will make it more readable. Overall Generally speaking, it is a book that can be read and read. The writing is thick and smooth. I hope it can capture the hearts of readers even more in the later stages of the book. It is always very fulfilling to accompany the growth of a new book. The first book review, dedicated to this author! I hope the author's book will become popular and keep updating! Reviewer: Jinghua Floating Lantern Festival

The writing is really good, and the plot development is relatively slow, but overall it's interesting!

Not bad, it makes me feel like I'm actually there...

Collection recommendation, author, come on!

I must continue to write! I will keep chasing it!

Well written, keep up the good work and look forward to updates on your work

It's a pity that the number of words is a bit short😭

Thank you very much!

I suggest you get a cover, otherwise not many people will read it.

Nice writing. I have collected it. Please keep updating!

Dear readers, I have published a new book and will sign the contract in a few days! Please invest and invest!

During this time, I really appreciate your attention and reading! 🌸Because I have recently started a new book, I will finish this unsigned one. To be honest, when I pressed the button to finish the book, I had really mixed feelings. And it's funny, I regret it now😂😂. Actually, I haven't signed a contract for this book, so it's hard for me to write it. This is what I mean. And I know clearly that it is impossible for me to update two books at the same time. I would like to apologize to everyone who reads my book. 🙏🙏🙏 PS: My new book has been released and has been signed. You are welcome to read it.

Here I come, author😊

The writing style shocked me! With the attitude of learning writing, I read the first few chapters. To be honest, emmm... The plot is too scattered. I don't know if I read less online articles, but it's just like a lyrical composition. The world view of this article is grand, the setting is novel, and it is eye-catching. The story within one chapter is too weak and the commercial atmosphere is dying. I wrote a short beginning, let's see? —— Wei San is a fox. It is the nine-tailed fox of xxxxxx in the world of mountains and seas, inheriting the ancient and noble bloodline (wait for the bragging). But one day, the world of mountains and seas disappeared. —— A few simple sentences brought out the suspense. Gone? Why is it gone? As a member of the noble bloodline, where will her fate be? Are you working hard to rebuild the Shanhai Realm? Or something else... In this way, the main plot is also revealed. If you can't sign the contract, don't be discouraged, change the contract, change your vest, and fight again, because you are still free.

Let me see you! Come on! Already collected!

Okay, I think the writing is very good The writing is clear (due to my limited level, I can only praise it here)

There are so many book reviews, I really like the people. Good books come on

I read the book review of Zhile Dada and came here to take a look 🙂 With a score of 78, it is rare to see unsigned works. I simply read a few chapters and expressed my personal views. 1. There is no problem with the author's writing style. 🙂 2. Failure to sign the contract should be the main problem of the story. (Too vague and passive) In the first few chapters, it seems that events are pushing the heroine forward, and the heroine is like a passerby, forced to accept all this, and has a feeling of drifting with the flow (doesn't it feel like writing a diary, recording things?) Written in this way, it is difficult for readers to have a sense of involvement. Because I can't imagine what will happen next🙂 3. The subject matter of this article is good and the background of the story is large enough. It needs to be polished🙂

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