The Sword Master of Shushan in American Comics

I have a feeling it will be popular, please leave your name and cheers for the author.

This is the first serious novel that I have started to write. I have made a few pitfalls before, but I have not written a few chapters before being eunuch. Therefore, I still need to explore the writing style and subsequent structure. Therefore, I can only let myself go and do my best with this book. If you find any problems, you are welcome to make suggestions. If it is reasonable, I will make corrections as appropriate to give everyone a comfortable and beautiful story...

I hope the author will refer to "The Way of the Rising Dragon"

It's well written, but it doesn't read smoothly in some places. Keep updating, I believe the author's results will be very good!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

After reading the first chapter, I knew that this EMm was another wordsmith who talked so much about equipment. If you really don't agree with me, I will obey you 😅

Will the Divine Spear Bureau be released from the factory? Although the American oriental fairy is very strange

Oh my god, the author is a fastidious person, and the long sections of popular science settings make me dizzy and confused.

When I first read it, the first friend of the Punisher was mentioned in the first chapter. I remember that he and Lu Dan were comrades in arms. He was called by Lu Dan the pinnacle of human combat power, a level 10 agent, etc. He was one of Lu Dan's few friends and someone he could trust.

This introduction. . I suggest the author revise it. . This introduction is a bit misleading. The evil clan invades and the protagonist runs away to other universes to save the common people? ? ?

Another possessed addict who refuses to quit... What about addiction? The possession is gone?

Almost all those who write about Marvel are either broken or eunuchs. I have never seen many completed books with more than a million words, let alone the author you write like this.