A Fake D&D Story: I'm the Village Chief
伪DND之我是村长
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 87k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Epic Fantasy
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
43Chapters
0Votes
137Recs
1Fans
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Reader comments 13
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Gods passing by, please leave a collection with your little hands trembling. You may not know that even one collection can determine my fate as a street artist.
I understand the truth, so what cover can I be a member of the Demon Realm?
I felt like I was deceived. I originally wanted to keep it based on the name, but when I came in, I found a strange cheat, a strange way of talking, no sense of immersion, and almost no Dnd elements. Isn't the most interesting thing about Dnd the various specialties?
So why push it this week?
. . . Although this is called pseudo-DND, you should at least have some DND. . . Your behavior determines your alignment, not your alignment determines your behavior. I was a little expecting to see that the protagonist is chaotic neutral. I'm married to you. . . Not to mention chaos, I don't even feel neutral at all.
When I see your cover, let me give you a little support.
Your profile goes with your avatar. Are you working as a village chief in another world and writing a book at the same time?😃
Didn't you say you were going to write the next book? I also want to read it.
Use blood and shadow to make a contract with me
I can finally see where the problem lies. The dialogue between the characters is too streamlined, and the style is too Chinese, making it look like a drama. The place names are also too Japanese. For example, the village where the protagonist is located is called Adventure Village. It is still in the style of Dragon Quest more than ten years ago. There is also the dnd in the title. After looking at the monsters and attributes, it is obvious that it is influenced by dnf's loud sound and dnd's non-stick edges. The customs and architectural styles of the villagers are obviously influenced by the Three Kingdoms games and books. I will not mention the system. It is understandable that the protagonist's father has a Chinese style. Looking at all this makes people feel unimmersed. Those are the problems for the time being, the writing is pretty good.