Rebirth of the Queen of the Undead

The writing is very good, but I just feel that the foreshadowing is too long. There are more than forty chapters of a plot about rescuing slaves. I am really tired from reading it. I am really tired. It seems that I can't finish it. After all, this is the same thing.

The writing of this Queen of the Undead is pretty good, and it caught my attention in the early stages. Lin Yun was resurrected from another world and turned into Celeiya. There was a system to assist her in the early stage. At the beginning, there were shrimp soldiers and crabs from the enemy country who wanted to harm Queen Celaya, but she had awakened her bloodline. As the blood queen, she had a blood altar, which became her initial power to conquer the world. Lin Yun's family heirloom, Dragon Tooth, brought him to this world and turned him into her, Celia. There are four altars of blood, death, soul, and abyss. The blood queen is the ability given to Selaya by the blood altar. Her first undead soldier is Xiao Hei, but he is very strong. In the future, he will grow into a skeleton hunter, a warrior who can sneak, but actually an assassin, the unparalleled type, which is very interesting. Celaya is the second princess of the Kingdom of Alto. She is born with the blood of the dragon clan (the Black Dragon King), but it will take many chapters to use that power. The Shadow Dragon King is so domineering. The vampire breeds offspring through blood. Even girls can have one offspring. Celia has three children, the first is Alyssa (Celia and Reina), the second is Loliya (Celia and Lola), and the third is Elko (Celia). The first person Celia met was Celia. Celia was very strong. She was the alternate bishop of the Judgment Cross Church. She was a paladin, the kind of hero. Because Lin Yun's soul was transferred to the dead Celia, and Celia was Celia's royal guard and childhood playmate, so after realizing that Celia's soul had become Lin Yun, she was very angry and fought against "Celia". However, the original Celia still had a remnant soul, and she made a deal with Lin Yun-borrowing her body for the last time, in order to save Celia. After it was completed, it turned into a soul crystal and was treasured by Celia, giving it a chance to be resurrected. ..., Celia's companions also include the parasitic demon Douglas, the Elf Queen Lola, the Dark Moon Clan and others. Celia sets out from the corrupted jungle - becomes the king of the Dark Moon Clan - defeats Addis - the shadow of death (the demon king, newly revived, with incomplete power) - fights the battle - migrates, establishes the Dark Moon City... That's it for the book review I wrote, the rest is up to you little cuties to read for yourself.

Overall, it seems to lack a bit of daily life (the previous part, the recent plot is certainly not suitable for daily life), and I still don't have a general image of the queen's camp in my mind. You can describe the base from the perspective of a supporting player (the farming style is very important for the description of the base). A little perspective from a personal perspective.

How can I put it, I was very attracted to Celia at the beginning, but when I got to Celia's place, I started to feel uncomfortable. Celia gave up her status as a bishop candidate and was willing to be a guard for the one she loved. When Celia was about to marry the prince of an enemy country, she took the holy sword that could kill a person without being sanctioned by the laws of various countries and went with Celia, just to be with the person she liked. But what's the ending? Celia died, and even her body was occupied by a strange soul. She had mixed emotions.

It's very unpleasant to watch. The author's character design is quite cool, but the actual situation is very tight. It doesn't matter if you just fight a shrimp with a pig's foot and you will have to write so many chapters. You have to step on an ant to death and it actually takes a long time And the main character in the whole story is a special brother. At first glance, it is not strong enough. The actual look and feel is very pulpy. Why do you lay out so many foreshadowings for a crushing battle and a tool man? Why do you give that tool man so much psychological description? There are just a few same sentences in the psychological description over and over again? The most terrible thing is that this kind of foreshadowing basically has nothing to do with the main plot and cannot give any special feeling. It is as plain as water In general, the plot is dragging and the power system is confusing Suggestion: You can either hurry up and sweep across the entire continent to other dimensional waves (this way of writing There are many examples that basically prove that it can be done, but additional settings are needed) You can also take the easy route, which is a very imaginative type (for example, a portal is suddenly opened and the national army comes, and then the protagonist represents the other world to conduct various negotiations and cooperation) The experience of Wolf and Spice tells us that it does not matter whether the world view is grand or not, exquisite design is the core of the story The heart, foreshadowing, main line and even emotion should all serve the exquisite design (exquisite design is the inspiration. Suddenly when I wrote this, I thought of a very good plot, so I wrote it down and found a way to add it to the story) There is also a more serious problem to point out. The author does not have a good grasp of the type of his readers and has a certain bias towards his own audience. Smart The villain setting is good, but it adds more trouble to readers and leads to loss of readers (Mr. Author, if you are reading this, please ask yourself - alien world, system, farming, war, what is the mentality of the people who like each of these entries, what kind of plots do they like? What kind of plots do they hate?) It would be an honor if I could give you some inspiration.

I feel pretty good. I've fully subscribed. Although there are bonus coins, I'm really too lazy to find a book first and spend all the bonus coins before subscribing. Good luck to the author.

Come on, the author! I hope there won't be any eunuchs.

Come on author, it's not easy to find a good book. Come on and update for you and me! Pikachu, one hundred thousand volts... No! It's the author Jun who broke out in ten chapters

The Elf Queen's career has not developed much

The content of your book, author, is a bit strange. Full of persuasion. It seems difficult. Watch it smoothly. Let's take the first 100 or so chapters. It feels too impatient.

It doesn't matter if you're weak, but if you're stupid, it doesn't matter if you're stupid, but you can't be a teammate.

Take some time to improve your character bar.

Ahem, the difference between genuine and pirated versions lies in real-time updates. 1. I personally have a problem. After I finish writing a chapter, I will check for typos and revise it. After publishing, I will read it again, check for typos and then revise it. However, piracy will only steal the beginning, so there will be more typos without the second revision. 2. The author is not a sage, so mistakes are inevitable. Sometimes there are problems with the plot, and readers react very strongly. I will urgently modify the "uncomfortable" plot content within an hour after publishing. However, the pirated version only pirates the original version and will not display my modified content, so you may see the wrong content. (PS: Any changes to the plot will be noted in the title of Chapter 2, but the main plot will not be changed) There is no way, I have to correct the content and typos for the sake of genuine readers, but the pirated version will not be updated in real time, and the reading experience will be... A little bad... Just like someone asked me before, why is Carmilla a rebel? Actually, she is not. That is because the wrong plot was stolen. The original plot, Carmilla, is an absolutely loyal subordinate, absolutely loyal, so don't be misled.

Subscriptions are getting lower and lower. If you think the books are good and are reading books, it would be great to open an automatic subscription if conditions permit. . .

It will be released on February 15th. Please order for the first time. 4 Chapters will be updated at that time, and 6 chapters will be updated on the second day after it is released. Additional updates will be started after it is released. There is only one requirement for stable addition of updates, that is, if the order amount exceeds 800, then three updates per day will be required. Another condition for adding updates is rewards, but the specific requirements have not yet been determined. Ps: What follows is nonsense, so you don't need to read it. Emm... Why should I write a book? For the sake of money, I can see the profit this book can bring to me on the first day it is put on the shelf, so the first order determines my profit estimate for this book. The better the result, the more interested I will be in the book, and the speed and quality of updates will also increase. But the opposite is also true. There is no way this is the reality. A book: on the shelf = death/rebirth This is not a joke. How many people have died on this threshold? Why... Emm... There are many reasons... Therefore, in order to keep up with the updates after it is released, it is common to stay up late every day coding. During the New Year, I have to use my mobile phone to code in the middle of the night to revise the manuscript, and I don't even celebrate my birthday. (I originally planned to celebrate my birthday today, February 6th, but my computer was in the city, so I saved the manuscript and published it automatically and posted six chapters. In order to keep updating tomorrow, I had to rush back to publish the book) I haven't had a good New Year, I haven't celebrated my birthday, just to put it on the shelves after the New Year and get a few more first orders for comfort. You can only see this sentence on the major genuine websites, so if you see it, give it a first order if you can. After all, I have seen it put on the shelves. It is impossible for me to stop reading it as soon as it is put on the shelves. Of course, I would be extremely grateful for the full reservation. So putting it on the shelf is the final verdict on this book, but no matter what, the book will continue to be written, after all, you still have to eat, and that's all I want to say.

Two updates a day is the minimum, and it will never be lower than this limit in the future. Sometimes you see it is one update. Don't be surprised. That's because I combined the word count of the two updates into one update. In terms of word count, it is still two updates, but they are not separated. That's it. So don't doubt that the author didn't update twice. He missed one update and you came to me to ask for it...

The release time is uncertain, so it is currently updated twice a day, with frequent updates.

That... Friends who use mobile phones should be able to see the characters at the bottom of the book. If you help the characters compare their hearts, the characters will be able to speak at the end of each chapter. Then the characters can interact with everyone, so everyone can help the characters compare their hearts. You can compare your hearts once a day. Thank you all! (Want to see the heroine receive benefits? Why not hurry up and compare your feelings!)

You ask me if I support it? I just slap my backhand, of course I support it!

The protagonist is a killer, and he is a killer with his own organization. They will attack the enemy with thunderous force and kill them completely in cold blood. But when dealing with the companions who act together, they need to entrust their trust, their backs and even their lives. Anything that can be accomplished in this world cannot be easily accomplished by one person relying on personal heroism. So, Lin Yun (Celaya) is a killer who will cherish his companions, protect them and trust them, and even take risks to save them. So, a killer can be cold-blooded, but not ruthless. A killer can be thoughtful, but also impulsive for the sake of emotion. One person, in modern times, can challenge thousands of troops and take the enemy's head from them? Unrealistic. . . ? ? ? : What is reality when writing a book for fun! Assassins, pick a hundred and kill whoever you meet! As a killer, you must be ruthless. If you save anyone, you will die if you die. There are many of them! The killer is not foolproof, how can he take action? You are too stupid! Probably. . . What I wrote was a weak chicken. . . Celaya needs companions, but she doesn't know how to be a Holy Mother. She will only be cold-blooded towards her enemies if she cherishes her companions, that's it. . .

As mentioned, the system prompt sound is 'ding', but some people responded with 'ding', 'ding' and 'ding' which is very awkward. I'm wondering if I should change 'ding' to 'system:' to represent the system. If you have any opinions, you can express your opinion. I will unify the results and modify them at the end.

About strength. Attributes are F~EX. The higher the value, the higher the growth potential (not the higher the value, the higher the strength!). The higher the potential, the higher the evaluation. (Bronze Elite ~ Hero) The strength of a character mainly depends on the level. The higher the level, the higher the strength. Characters with too high potential attributes can slightly break this limit, that is, they can be defeated by leapfrogging. (For example, if a level 10 hero fights against a level 15 ordinary, although the level is lagging behind, with the super high attribute growth potential, the level 10 hero may win, but this winning rate will become smaller or even disappear as the level gap widens. For example If a level 10 hero fights against a level 30 normal, it can be said that 99.9% Of the time he will die.) So, don't use fate settings to bring it in. I see a lot of complaints from you, about unknown ex, and why there is no + in A. . . This work is a special strength setting (although the prototype of the protagonist is Airei's version of Rin Tosaka, strength has nothing to do with fate...) That's it, you can complain if you want, but don't criticize me, because I have only been exposed to fate in anime and books, and that's just... I'm half a fan of the fate series (although it's a bit hard to say, but it's true...) I don't know much about fate, but I also like the fate series of anime. If you want to watch it, just follow the introduction of the above strength. If you don't understand, just look at the level. Generally, whoever has a higher level is more awesome. That's it, so. . . Since I am so tired from typing on my mobile phone, I would like to recommend it.

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Ahem, actually, you said in the comment area that you support full subscription and hope you don't want eunuchs. If it wasn't hidden, I could see whether you subscribed or not...

As the title says, the so-called information panel is: Role: Cerea (Queen of Blood) Level: 12 Status: Weak Spirit: A+ Strength: B Agility: B+ Endurance: D Physique: C Charm: EX Lucky: B Skills: Blood Draining (Level One), Resurrection of the Undead (Level One), Summoning from the Abyss (Level One) Introduction: The Lord of Darkness! Because it counts as half of the game's alien world, such panels often appear, sometimes twice in one chapter. On average, they appear once every three chapters. Many people may think that I am exaggerating about the word count. But I want to say that this must appear, and I can only say to simplify it as much as possible, and usually only the characters that must be introduced will be introduced. But some people may think that these words are a meaningless waste, so I basically limit each chapter to about 2,100 words. The extra words are used to make up for the number of words occupied by the introduction. (I'm not saying that these word counts are an issue, I just want to say that the plot will not be delayed due to the introduction, and the speed of the plot will not be affected) It can be said that this introduction is watery, but as a part of the setting, it is impossible to completely eliminate its appearance. I can only say that each chapter will add more to make up for these 'meaningless' introductions, that's it. So you can discuss it yourself about whether the 'Information Panel' is water... Emm...

I have read more than forty chapters, and speaking of my senses, I generally feel pretty good. As an old bookworm, I can basically read it. I haven't found anything that I can't accept yet. For now, I recommend ignoring the setting that the protagonist was a killer in his previous life. After all, judging from the various words, deeds, and emotions of the protagonist, From a logical point of view, he is more like an ordinary otaku. It is okay to ignore the fact that he was a killer in his previous life. Otherwise, it may be awkward to assume the identity of a killer. At present, I feel that the setting of being a killer in his previous life is redundant if it is not a foreshadowing. It is better to set it as an ordinary otaku.

Disgusting, I have nothing else to say, no writing, no plot, not even the most basic logic.

Dear author, can you create a fan group?

I won't say anything when I see the word "lily", because I'm afraid of being criticized 😢