Amazing Immortal Cultivation Simulator

This book is absolutely fine when it comes to Creation. The poisonous point everyone is talking about is that there is a conflict between Goldfinger and the seemingly reincarnation. The conflict is very prominent. There is no explanation at all about whether the spiritual bodies are the protagonist's own or Goldfinger's. In fact, it can be explained a little bit. The spirits are reincarnated, and they cannot detect Goldfinger. Also, don't write that Goldfinger is left behind by the previous life. This is a big poisonous point.

Sorry ╯ω╰, I just started playing the maid part after the maid came out, and I couldn't hold on until the end of chapter 17. I opened and closed it many times, but I still didn't have the desire to continue reading. This is a novel that can make me, a person who reads books at a glance, confused. The last time this happened was in "The Flash Student in the Giant School of the Universe" (;;;;;°∇°). However, it can still be seen that the subject matter is good. I will wait for the author's writing style to mature and start paying attention to it after opening the second book! I hope the author will work hard ＾0＾~! By the way, I am a firm believer in single male protagonists without female protagonists and single female protagonists without male protagonists TʌT.                  ？ ?

It's been three days, and I've finally passed 500, so I can comment. I've been reading books on pirated websites before, and when I saw this book, I saw the author always apologizing, and then I came to this genuine website to spend money to watch it. Personally, I really like this novel, and I also know that the author is not rigorous in some places and makes mistakes. Other words, but if we think about it, this is the author's first book. Errors are inevitable, and no matter how bad the writing is, it is better than the eunuch. So no matter whether the author writes well or not, I hope the author can not forget the original intention, persevere, and finish writing, so that the amazing Simulator of Cultivation of Immortality has a complete beginning and end. This is also a success.

Xiao Baiwen can't be offended. . . . . Author, are you careful? For example, that kind of grading system, Pi Za, mortals, gods, Pi Za and low-grade are very happy, just like there are some cosmetics and other sets with different configurations in the mall. They will definitely not be named low-level suits, mid-level suits, and high-end suits! No matter how bad it is, it will be a regular version, and then there will be a Supreme Edition or something (although it is difficult to write like this, but it also means that it is difficult to conceive of the setting before writing the book). If you have good common sense knowledge of society, good worldview, and good world background, you can write the book. There will definitely be many people who subscribe to support you.

How should I put it? The idea is good and the writing is OK, but it is not rigorous and I won't mention many typos. For example, in Chapter 31, it is said that the Golden Crow Bone Forging Pill needs to be refined during the day. In Chapter 36, the protagonist stupidly practices it all night and then gives it to the spirit body to refine it. I guess the author must have forgotten his setting. . . It feels like the author dug holes and forgot to bury them. Now just a simple bunny, green light. .

I beg the author to make major changes to the previous part. I sincerely advise him to quit. I feel like it's a bit reluctant to fool a young reader. And pay attention to this kind of recommendation position. Almost all of them are old bookworms who are short of books. Spend money and get VIP. After all, you are not an old author with a fixed readership, and few readers are willing to patiently promote you If you don't want to change, you can only reach a very high level in the monthly ticket rankings. This proves that there is absolute fairy grass behind it, and only Shennong is willing to resist the poison in the front.

This novel is very well written, both in terms of creativity and writing style. I haven't found any major flaws yet, except for the maid. This was a routine a few years ago and is no longer popular. The author should not think that I am talking nonsense. You see, many comments think so.

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There are too many things going on at the beginning of the new year. In addition, I have to rewrite the previous chapters. It needs to be matched with the back. I am active in the group every day~ Don't worry, everyone

Some people say that the transformation of a maid into a heroine is a bit toxic, and the emotional line is too direct. Please explain. This will be added later. The heroine will also leave Han Xiaoshu's side recently. It's not advisable to spoil too much, I hope everyone will follow it. 😁 When I come back to fill in the holes, it will all make sense. It would be nice to have a million dollars with me. ✊

😢 I am such a pig. Lots of typos. There are so many chapters in the front, which will cause trouble for everyone.

Give the author some advice. Travel to the world of immortality where the strong are respected. The most important thing is to correct your mentality. The protagonist's attitude towards women is a complete waste of life! If it were me writing it, I would kill that woman, take off all her clothes, and put her on the bedside. Take a look when you have time. Until she was completely reduced to bones. Use it to hone your Taoist heart.

Chapter 38: What the heck, a maid suddenly turns into a demon lord, why not write about a pig's foot turning into the lord of the universe. 😡

This is the so-called eunuch, haha

If you really can't balance work and writing a book, you can just say it directly. Why do you have to be here without a beginning or end, just to respond to people, and just send an explanation? Isn't it difficult?

The poisonous point is the maid, she will do what kind of things with whatever status she has.

Maid training? It's really poisonous. See you again later.

In the past two days, I have played a single-player game called The Amazing Immortal Cultivation Simulator😂, this can't be a coincidence!

Invest in two books, lose two books 😅

Chapter 18, why are there so many scenes about the maid, and why are they still like this later? ! You can arrange a sister. I look embarrassed as a maid.

I have to say that the game with the same name as this book is really a big production worthy of its name. Taiwu asked Lao Ju to do a publicity and promotion. The success made domestic game people discover that in the small circle of domestic independent games, in addition to selling feelings, they can also use publicity and promotion to lead the way to make a lot of money. Invite a few well-known anchors and ups to play games and advertise, and then spend some money to hire someone to write a novel of the same name. It doesn't cost a lot of money, but it targets the core audience. Compared with the money earned in the end, it's a drop in the bucket. Completely ignore it, Taiwu's popularity is due to its hard-core game system and the sense of free play brought about by changeable randomness. This game is released on dual platforms, priced at 68, but it is a world-cultivating version of DLC. Obviously the main focus is on cultivating immortals, but the reincarnation system used is used to kneel and lick the anchors and up. No matter gods, ghosts, fairies or monsters, they are not among them. A casual game with no meaning at all. How to talk about intentions.

Where did the protagonist see that Feng Wunian has sinister and evil thoughts towards the protagonist? I really went back and read it and still didn't understand it. Could it be that he finally came out of the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion to check and register the exercises, so he had evil thoughts towards the protagonist? Please explain.