The Best Defender in Football

I looked at the table of contents and found that the two games against Bayern Munich in the Europa League took 34 chapters to write. The author is pretty good at this level.

Let me tell you about the author, I have many books on my bookshelf called Football Seedlings! ! You should understand the result...(๑‾ ꇴ ‾๑)

I think it is good for the author to find another way, but it should be noted that defenders are really not attractive, so they have to find another way and use more exaggeration to exaggerate off-field matters, such as salary and endorsements, and defenders cannot make people fall in love with one or two outbursts. They have basically no mistakes in the season, because of the mistakes If you make a mistake as a defender, you will be scolded to death. I hope to show an indispensable role of being defensively stable, setting the ball, and heading the ball sharply to help the team score goals. The defender does not need to be against the sky, stability is enough. Don't think about how to defy the sky. This is because your audience is old people, and novices will not look at you as a defender! ! !

New author? I feel like I want to cover all the background right from the beginning. . . . . How to continue next? ? ? Isn't the charm of competitive novels the process of upgrading from scratch? . . .

This ID looks like a crazy fan of my scumbag team. 23333 It seems that in the novel, my scumbag team's defense is promising... In fact, the scumbag team invests quite a lot in central defenders, but they usually buy lottery tickets in advance, which is not very conspicuous...

When I first started writing about the competition, it was pretty good. After I returned home, I just introduced the knowledge, which was a bit embarrassing.

The biggest question when reading this book is, that pig's feet? Where are the pig's feet? After two or three chapters, Pig's Foot's name appeared less than five times. Just like in the semi-finals with Bayern, Bayern mainly attacked, and as a defensive defender, he had to perform well. In the end, it didn't appear as many times as Lahm.

The description of the whole game is a commentary type. One point is described in great length. Even the game where the protagonist does not appear will have to be written in ten chapters in detail. With this level of indoctrination, all of them will be eunuchs before chapter 10,000.

This is the first time I read a novel, but the protagonist is a passerby🤭🤭

I'm speechless if I don't go to the non-English Premier League. If I don't go to Inter Milan, I feel ashamed for those who have traveled across time. It's more conducive to development and training there.

A passes to B, B passes to C... The ball goes in! +Offsite 4/5 length /Split apart.../ The protagonist defends well! The protagonist predicted the landing point and pushed the ball out of the penalty area. The protagonist blocked the opponent's ball route... <1/5 The protagonist played an important role. After the game, oh! ? He actually received the same applause as the football hero. . . . . It's not that I'm not allowed to write about central defenders, but judging from this article, I can't write any highlights. How can I write about this? I can only write two sentences after writing. The writing is also very fragmented, with a lot of writing in the middle and front, because they are not the protagonists and there is no focus.

Too watery, the author is a good swimmer

This is a novel with Yang Feng as the protagonist. We should write more about the performance of the protagonist instead of describing the entire game process. The previous content is okay, but starting from being promoted to the first team is too boring. As a reader, what I want to see is the protagonist's performance on the court, whether it is wonderful or mistakes, rather than what other players do. Then there is the way of describing the game, in the form of commentary? All in double quotes. But there are some sentences that the commentator cannot say at all, or there is simply no time to explain all the situations of the game. ? ! …:;~.-@ I hope this aspect can be changed I read it once in March this year and couldn't stand it after about thirty chapters. I picked it up again today and found that there were still so many descriptions about other people and too little about the protagonist!

This is a self-pleasure book by the author

It's too watery. It's all explanations and lectures, with no content at all.

How to say it? It's normal to have less guard scenes, but it can't be absent all the time. After all, it's a novel. It's really hard to write and watch the game for most of the day without the main character appearing. . . .

To be honest, you are the most verbose after reading so many competitive novels. There is no one who has not finished more than ten chapters of a game. Who cares about so many details in novels? Not all of them come to see the protagonist play football. There are only a few protagonists in more than ten chapters. Although the writing is very good, I really can't stand it.

No matter how powerful a defender is, I think he can only have a team in the transfer market and the fans will pay attention to him. No matter how good his performance is, he can only be applauded by the fans at the scene. It's hard to have any breaking points. What I fear the most is that defending an ordinary pass is more important than the person who scored the goal.

I think this position is not suitable for writing novels. Compared with forwards and midfielders, defenders have fewer opportunities to create miracles, and there is no passion for writing them.

What's going on with the chapters that have been published recently? It's better not to publish them at all.

It doesn't matter if these games are long. Can we use narrative techniques to explain some important points? Otherwise, you won't even know who is talking, and they will keep talking throughout the whole article and then there will be exclamation marks everywhere. You can write who is talking, or you can write commentary and ridicule to liven up the atmosphere. Your writing is too boring, otherwise your writing skills wouldn't be so bad.

I like to listen to books and do things at the same time. There are so many "ah"s and "ahs" in this book, which is really annoying to hear. This is the first book in so many years that made me irritable while listening to it, and the reason was not because of the story content! ! ! !

After seeing only a few words, I felt really choked and panicked. There was too much water and the plot of the competition was not exciting enough.

That development is quite good, but the inexplicable time travel back to youth is not interesting at all. How about just writing it like the beginning, as a boss, occasionally playing games, and then cultivating a few more, how good?

What is this about? It's very difficult to write about defenders well, and it's completely boring to tell them in a straightforward way, so you need to write more about off-field and more psychological activities on-field, all kinds of trash talk, and all kinds of battles of wits and courage. Only then will it be interesting to read. It is best for the protagonist to have some highlights and score goals through headers or free kicks, otherwise the defender is really boring and no one wants to watch the defender.

The author's writing is good, but the back part is a bit boring. I've read football novels about defenders that also write about defenders with knives. It's less boring than this one.

A lot of chaos

The Jinyuan Football Team of the Real Estate Team was actually just drinking poison to quench thirst, and with some ulterior motives, they dug a hole and buried the football!

How many readers do you think will be able to read it?

At the beginning, it is written that you are already 18 years old, and then you take a girl to start your football career? The question is, go to Da Mao to start? Is the setting really smart? What kind of impressive IQ can start like this? With a girl, you can tell that she is not the kind of person who will try her best regardless of everything... The key is that you are not systematic either... Starting at the age of 18? You can't even sacrifice your whole family, right?