Xiaoaozhi Asked the Peak

The author's writing style is very good. Personally, I prefer fantasy. I am optimistic about the author. The book will be a masterpiece! 🌹

Stop arguing, most people under the age of 30 like Linghu Chong, and most people over 30 understand Yue Buqun. This has to do with experience! There are also some people who live a miserable life and yearn for Linghu Chong's bohemian love of freedom. But the reality is that as a whole, Linghu Chong can say that all decisions are self-centered. The Huashan sect only thinks of it when he is hurt outside. Generally speaking, it will happen as it happens! In Xiao Ao's plot background, Linghu Chong didn't do anything beneficial to Huashan. No matter whether Yue Buqun is a true gentleman or a hypocrite, he worked hard to earn a reputation for the Huashan sect in the first half of his life. He raised and taught Linghu Chong, and his daughter was raised by Linghu Chong by default. As a result, Linghu Chong was dazzled when he came into contact with the outside world. He tried to trick his teammates in various ways. Lao Yue's heart felt more painful than a knife. The Huashan faction was about to be finished after being handed over to Linghu Chong. There are many external enemies, as well as Shaolin and Wudang schemes. Internally, the young ones are incompetent, and the old ones are either watching the show or creating a split. He could only roll up his sleeves and try again, but he used too much force and capsized the boat. The eldest disciple was tricked into rebelling. He was probably about to collapse. He could only be cruel to himself and even more cruel to others! Generally speaking, Yue Buqun really gave everything for Huashan. He was under too much pressure and had no successor. It was pitiful and pitiful! Linghu Shang is a wild boy who loves freedom and has no stance or sense of responsibility! Such an heir and such a son-in-law would really cost Lao Yue his life.

I remember there was a book called Nine Yins and Nine Yangs, in which it was written that Feng Qingyang's Dugu Nine Swords was taught by Duan Ziyu, but that book must be 404 🤭 now.

In an era when women were as chaste as life, Linghu Chong actually called Tian Boguang brothers. From this, it can be seen that Linghu Chong did not distinguish between right and wrong. Yue Buqun was ruthless enough for daring to wield his sword from the palace, but the starting point was a good one, in order to strengthen the sect. Not talking about the so-called good and evil, Linghu Chong wasted his upbringing for Ren Yingying; he was almost unkind, disloyal, and unfilial. If it weren't for the pig's feet, I guess the grass on the grave would be two feet high in the first two episodes.

Many people, after watching Swordsman, think people like Linghu Chong are real heroes. I thought he wasn't, he was just a prodigal son. If any guest officer thinks that he is, please tell me that he is your son. He drinks and has fun at home every day, associates with a gang of gangsters, and has no sense of responsibility for his family. How would you feel? In Swordsman, there is no true hero, just a group of gangsters fighting and killing each other.

This book is not strong enough and is reduced to a piece of writing.

？ Can you let everyone in Huashan practice magical skills? The martial arts of Shaolin and Tianshan can only be used as a reference at most, and it is impossible to practice them completely. Why are Shaolin and Wudang so prosperous? Is it because there are so many magical secrets? No, it's because people's martial arts have become a system. From the initial body polishing to the step-by-step advancement, there are matching martial arts. If you don't organize your own martial arts well, you will think about going out and packing other people's magical secrets all day long, and stack them in the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion, but you don't want to practice. Hundreds of years ago, no one taught you how to practice martial arts for ordinary people, so hundreds of magical secrets are too exaggerated.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I am still attracted to read it, but there are a few places where I feel inconsistent (or maybe I don't understand it well). 1. The protagonist only practiced Chinese martial arts in his previous life. Chinese martial arts does not have any internal strength. After time travel, he can summarize and create his own martial arts just by reading Tao Zang, and then he doesn't know horse steps. I don't understand Chinese martial arts. Can Chinese martial arts be good without horse steps? 2. When practicing swordsmanship, Yue Buqun saw that he was only practicing the basic thirteen movements, so he used basic swordsmanship to target the protagonist. The protagonist actually agreed that it was wrong to only practice the basic thirteen movements. First of all, the protagonist had only practiced for a long time... What a good talent, it also needs time to grow, and what, Fei Fei, and Fu Hongxue's disease are all successful cases? 3. Yue Lingshan started talking nonsense, acting coquettishly, and asking for hugs at the age of 2. Are all children of that era so precocious...

Until his death, Lao Yue had no selfish desires, but seemed obsessed with obsession. Although he didn't agree with it, it was very admirable. On the contrary, Linghu Chong blindly followed his own desires without principles or bottom line!

The author's thinking is a bit too simplistic. He doesn't talk about other sects, but only talks about the Songshan sect who deliberately wants to be the boss and become one of the three pillars of righteousness. How can he not care about the Huashan sect, and even sends a traitor to infiltrate the Huashan sect. After the Huashan sect obtained the secret book, they started reforming and distributing martial arts on a large scale. Smart people will definitely guess what happened. Don't treat others like fools.

If the author positions this book as fantasy, what he needs to do in the world of martial arts is to first use his own wisdom to improve the vision and upper limit of martial arts warriors in the world of martial arts, and then through years of development, finally harvest the wisdom of all living beings, thereby improving the protagonist himself. Instead of blindly writing some imaginary characters and constantly increasing the upper limit of the world by climbing levels, the inexplicable characters and the constant appearance of strange masters feel too fake.

If you are attached to the so-called right, evil will naturally follow. Confucianism claims to be the study of saints, but it has imprisoned and enslaved China for thousands of years. The West claims to be civilized, but it has almost killed all the native Americans. Human beings are born first from heaven and earth, and then from parents, relatives and friends, nation and country. Yue Buqun, Zuo Lengchan, Let Me Go, and Fang Zheng are either clinging to power or to the mountain gate, religion, and always want to manipulate others and ride the wind and waves. It's just a different way of doing things. Right and wrong, evil and evil, gentleman and villain, divided into gentlemen and villains, no matter true gentleman or hypocrite, the harm is even greater than the so-called villain. What is right becomes strange, and what is good becomes monster. There is no rightness in it. The highest virtue is lost to the Tao, the highest benevolence is lost to the virtue, and the highest etiquette is the source of chaos. Therefore, the robbers will continue until the saints die. Benevolence, justice, etiquette, law, and religion are all businesses. Stealing the world and enslaving the world are definitely better than a flower picker. In this book, only Linghu Chong transcends the so-called good and evil, and sects, and shows his "human nature". Unfortunately, he cannot wash away the corruption of this world, so it is better to go back and be alone. A eunuch book stirs up the world. Alluding to the Ming Dynasty, the core of the Ming Dynasty is not eunuchs, nor good and evil, but profit and desire. The politics and parties are fighting, and they are fighting for the common people. The world is naturally at peace.

I feel that Linghu Chong's role is not to let you see how scumbag or arrogant he is. He is a child without any scheming, that is to say, there is no conflict of interest in his worldview, only right and wrong. Children will feel uncomfortable and immoral when they see adults jumping in line and bargaining, but adults will not. The so-called Linghu Chong is an incarnation of freedom and freedom, without worldly constraints. Even if you say that he is a young man and is sorry for Huashan, he is worthy of himself, and he is worthy of his own right and wrong, good and evil. He knew why he did what he did. He had no external constraints due to fame, and didn't care about conflicts of interest. He only wanted one thing: living by his nature. He symbolizes freedom. You keep saying that you understand Yue Buqun, but in fact you understand middle-aged people who have been polished by society. You understand that this society will not have so many freedoms that harm others and yourself. Freedom is what it is, and it is bound to hurt something, just as Guo Moruo wrote in "Tiangu": I swallowed the whole universe. I am who I am! Pantheism is very comprehensively reflected in this poem. Everything is God, and I am God, so everyone is me and I am everyone. I am me. A strong sense of self pervades. When everyone is free, then they themselves are themselves! Yue Buqun is not free. He is constrained by Huashan. You can say this is a responsibility, obligation or something else, but in fact, he is constrained and even dragged to the point of distortion. Many people say that Yue Buqun is a hypocrite. In fact, this is not entirely true. He may be a gentleman himself, but because of these constraints, he is no longer himself, or even a man. Looking back at Linghu Chong, he lived his true self, and he would not be changed by these constraints. This is freedom. I think this is what the author envies, freedom without scruples, unrestrained indulgence - a real "I". Smiling and arrogant, I smile and look down upon the world. I am in the world, but I am not trapped in the world, so I can look down on everyone in the world - not because of my martial arts or status, but because - I am who I am.

Hey, good martial arts novels should be read as games. Treasure boxes are opened everywhere in the world 🤫🤫🤫🤫

Come on, it's well written. If you understand all these secrets, can you create more powerful magical skills?

Even Ma Bu didn't understand yet he created martial arts and was completely poisoned

Why do I think of the introduction at first glance as, "Wang Ba Zong Heng" 🥵

The great hypocrisy of Confucianism can be proved by the world: in the eyes of Confucianism, everyone is a villain, but I am a gentleman; all skills are despicable, but I am the only one who is supreme; learning is all wrong, but I am the authentic one. Mozi loves everyone, but you call him a fatherless and a descendant. If you praise Zhu Yanli, you will scold him like a beast. Legalism strengthens the country and enriches the people, but you call it a tyrannical rule by tigers and wolves. Lao Zhuang is detached, and you accuse him of running away. Soldiers, farmers, doctors, and workers, you accuse them of not learning their skills carefully. Strategists, you call them concubines. You are arrogant and mean, and you speak rudely, causing harm to all the families in the world! But he speaks loudly and openly considers himself to be royal and orthodox. Frankly speaking, what does Confucianism have to offer? What do you, a Confucian scholar, have? In a word, you are nothing more than a group of industrious and indifferent nerds, drowning in the disappearing dream all day long, only knowing that their big words are empty and they are just deceiving the world and stealing your reputation! When the country was in dire straits and the state was in chaos, how could Confucianism ever come up with a useful idea? You guys talk so much about civil and military ways and relieve the people's poverty, but in fact they advocate the restoration of the ancient system of well fields, leaving thousands of people homeless and without any land to cultivate! You swear categorically that "the people are the most important thing, the country is the second most important thing, and the king is the most important thing." But in fact, you uphold the Zhou rites and denigrate the legal system. You want to punish the officials but not the common people. Such words and deeds are inconsistent, and what is said is not meant to be deceiving the world, but is it upright? The great hypocrisy of Confucianism is even worse: you have deep interests in mind, but you describe yourself as sacrificing your life for charity and sacrificing your life for righteousness. But looking at his behavior, he is tirelessly seeking officials and titles, but if he fails, he will panic like a lost dog! If he does not see the king for three days, he will feel anxious; if he does not enter the official residence for one month, he will not know where he is going. In fact, no one in the world has a greater sense of self-interest than Confucianism! It is human nature to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages. You guys ignore human nature, don't take advantage of the situation, and instead try to strangle us like eunuchs! He eats without speaking, sleeps without speaking, sits without confusion in his arms, and constantly praises Liu Xiahui, a wood who doesn't know what life is, as a gentleman with the same name as a saint! Turning people into living zombies, bloodless eunuchs! There are thousands of Confucian disciples, but how many of them are as lively and lively as the Mohist disciples? How many people are not just weak and useless people? If you want something, you should be a gentle and humble gentleman. If you don't get what you want, you will scold the world! What's more, you Confucians blatantly regard hypocrisy as a virtue and blatantly seduce people to tell lies: hiding for saints, hiding for great people, hiding for sages; teaching people to self-abuse, teaching people to be submissive and obedient, teaching people to be ignorant and selfish, and teaching people to wait and see; ultimately, the people dare not discover ugliness, dare not face the rule of law, and become ignorant and confused fools, so that the nobles will always deceive them, and you, the wise, will always fool them! So sinister and so hypocritical, yet you are talking shamelessly and extravagantly to help the people? I dare to ask you: In the five hundred years since the Spring and Autumn Period, has there been such absurd and shameless learning? Have! That is Confucianism! It's Confucius and Meng Ke! Since the advent of Confucianism, you have never brought vitality to the world. You have always urged people to follow suit and be rigid. Whoever uses Confucianism will perish!

Swordsman is from the Ming Dynasty, and the Ming Dynasty has the world's earliest established firearms force. The Shenji Battalion has 5,000 soldiers per battalion, including 3,600 riflemen, 1,000 pistol cavalry, and 400 gunners. Firearms troops accounted for 10% of the Ming army. At its peak, the Ming Dynasty had a population of 100 million and a standing army of 2.6 Million. It was the most powerful country in the world. A chivalrous person uses martial arts to break the law. You are a group of unruly people who fight and kill all day long. If you anger the government, you will be killed. No matter how high your martial arts skills are, you can still defeat guns and cannons. It's better to submit to the imperial court, I will give you the position of chief steward. 😁

It's obviously a martial arts novel, but it's written with the rhythm of a fantasy drama. The pig's feet are really getting bigger and bigger.

The writing is okay, and the protagonist's behavior is okay. It's just not good at all. Those unconfident performances at the beginning, a time traveler knows the plot, and has a golden finger, and his talent is not inferior to others. Could it be that such an awesome person can't run rampant in the world more than ten years later? There are easily hundreds of masters and tens of thousands of people in Songshan Mountain. What are you afraid of? Dongfang Bubai can overwhelm the world by himself. Are you not as good as Dongfang? Moreover, he also teaches martial arts to those disciples. The teaching is too casual. The apprentices are divided into three, six or nine grades, and their martial arts are also divided. How can we teach them equally?

I just read the first chapter, but the protagonist's views on Yue Buqun made me decide to follow it to the end.

The river falls over the moon, if you are in the late stage of your secondary disease, stop going around and go back to study hard and read some novels. Everyone just treats him as airy. If his worldview is immature, why bother talking to him? He uses his own logic to argue with others and completely ignores other people's opinions, but he can only see a small part of it. He ignored all the social background of the plot and the logical relationship between the development of the story, and was immersed in his own world and couldn't extricate himself! There is no need to talk to this kind of person, let the people related to him educate him, it has nothing to do with us, and he can't trick us anyway! !

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Erect a monument. Three chapters! In the past, we worked hard to create a protagonist who is so awesome, who is a master of Chinese martial arts, who has unparalleled understanding and creative skills. Hey! I was exposed at the beginning of my martial arts training! His personality has collapsed, and he is a master of Chinese martial arts who can't even walk on horseback! The king of strong mouth. Nothing!

It seems that there are 20 chapters, you can read it

I have only seen two trips to the Western Regions, but I have some opinions on the author's setting. The author's early world background in the book should follow Jin Yong's novels from Tianlong, Shooting Condor, Divine Condor, and Yitian. Then the so-called ten major forces are Huashan is indispensable. Among the six major sects in Yitian, Shaolin, Wudang and Emei Kongtong are all present. You can say that Huashan fell out of the top ten because of the sword energy dispute, and the Palace of Hell and Tianwang can be decomposed after the Ming sect was suppressed by the Ming Dynasty. And the level of force The highest is the ultimate, then Feng Qingyang is the ultimate. The highest is peerless. Feng Qingyang should be peerless. After all, Feng Qingyang is the existence that dominates a generation

I want to talk to the author about what makes a reasonable plot. First of all, you have found most of the most powerful martial arts in Jin Yong's novels! The only ones left are the unique skills of Wudang and Shaolin! The Palace of Hell is a branch of Mingjiao! But how did the Mingjiao's highest martial arts, Qiankun Shift, develop to be better than Shaolin and Wudang? What kind of peerless martial arts will be available on the Internet one day? Emei is nothing without Yitian Sword! Kongtong's Seven Injury Fist doesn't work either! Author, please tell me whether the world view you wrote is reasonable? ?

Every generation born in the 1980s has their own martial arts feelings. The author's concept at the beginning was very similar to mine. Unfortunately, later on, he forcibly added secret forces to Xiaoao, which gave people a nondescript feeling. Why is it that the Tianlong Era is not so awesome?

The protagonist's brain is not very good. He looks down on others when he is only a few years old, but he understands Taoist scriptures when he is only a few years old.