Orange Lights Under Clear Sky

Reading the author's story reminds me of my own life, so let's share it together! 🐙

The author's writing style is thick and broad, and the unfolding rhythm is very gentle, especially the layers of the characters are well reflected. But I said in my book that I always need to smoothen my sentences. In fact, what can be optimized is not the statement problem, but the relationship between the previous and later artistic conceptions. For example, in the first chapter, from heavy rain to sunny day, there is no transitional artistic conception. Details such as square dancing and luxury cars should be moved away to avoid stealing the scene. The heroine does not need to monologue. The beauty walks through the gradually sunny city, like the orange lights lighting up the city, and is endlessly charming. The gradually unfolding worldly world is interspersed by her walking, which enhances the pure beauty of reading and tells readers the core relationship between the characters in the story. The rest of the chapters are similar, which is a side issue of thick writing and rich layers. Mutual fans of my humble work "No More Regrets YF"~~

Be brave and be yourself, I like this sentence.

I hope everyone can stick to their interests. Can I say that? I once fancied a novel, and I secretly recommended it myself. My family and friends didn't dare to tell me. The only time someone commented: Not bad, I was very excited! But then I fell into single-player mode all the time. I had to vote for myself and gave up ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ) Now I'm ready to make another move, so I made a new outline and wanted to write it. I saved more than a dozen chapters but didn't have the courage to publish it again! I'm afraid I'll just stick to it all the time, thinking about saving a hundred thousand words based on a little bit of fantasy that some people will like. Even if no one reads it, once the words are coded, you can still persist for a while. If one or two people are willing to read it, you can find the motivation to persist again! (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡) Soon I will join the sea of ​​books to accompany you ~ I hope that by then you will have successfully gained a group of readers (๑>؂<๑)

Is the author still writing a book? Please pay attention to me. After a year, I will vote again.

Finished reading! ❤️ Sometimes I read the advice of some experts, and many say that if the data is not good, just cut it off, open another book and try another subject But sometimes it is not that simple Firstly, I want to have a complete explanation of the story in my heart Secondly, I always feel that sometimes only after writing a book can I truly realize the meaning of code words to myself~ No matter what, keep working hard in the future~~ Let's work hard together! ! Mao bullet (remain)❤️