Traveling Merchant from Another World

Support, although there are a few flaws, but it is already very good. I hope the more I write, the better it will be.

The first three chapters at the beginning had a really amazing feeling 😍😍. They were different from those coquettish bitches outside. But then I felt that the writing got worse and worse. I didn't understand why I piled up bodies like crazy without adding hundreds or tens of millions to my cultivation level. (Maybe the author also had his own ideas in the later period), but I really couldn't stand it when I saw the monster slaying. I was a little speechless that you jumped down even though you knew the old man was trying to trick you 😐. I didn't watch the subsequent plots, so I don't know if there were other plans. Maybe this book is really not my cup of tea. Finally, I hope the author will cheer up

Good water! ! ! The skill introduction only lasts for half a chapter, and there are many times. The invincible cabin can be used as an invincible skill with low levels and high levels many times. If you say that you need to use spiritual stones, you can still accept it, but it is a pity that it is used too much in many chapters. Also, it's too off topic, and the key occupations have nothing to do with pig's feet! ! ! It doesn't matter, the main occupation is about the business of a Yuyuan, local customs and customs. This is the journey of a 16-and-a-half-year-old boy whose clan name and business name was traveled through time to fight monsters, upgrade and save the world.

The power system is at different levels, the characters are sketched and scribbled, the plot description is half-understood, the picture turns up and down, and the overall feeling is messy. The author seems to want to describe a novel world, but the book does collapse. The logic is terrible. Really Mundo. It's not easy to find a good book these days, and it's even harder to write a good book, but I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I turned left when I went out. Goodbye, fellow anti-drug warriors.

Throw away the essence and eat the chaff.

Still feeling misty, after dying once, do you want to die again?

I don't know why I wrote all the numerical values ​​in such big numbers in the early stage. I would definitely collapse if I wrote this kind of numerical values. I write them in big numbers without thinking.

I hope you won't be a eunuch. This book is really good.

The subject matter of this book is very good. I originally wanted to see the protagonist traveling around the world, but it ended up being more than 300 chapters and still wandering around my own home. Not to mention, the Ning Meng portrayed by the key author poisoned me. The protagonist had to give her a share of all the good things. Is that a world where children can indulge at will if they are cute? Ning Meng and her grandfather just put a child next to the protagonist without asking if he agrees with it. As a result, the protagonist just accepted it and actively said that he would try his best to protect her. What kind of relationship do you have with their family? You killed a demon together and brought a gift, a burden to the mortal realm? I really don't know what the author was thinking.

What does the protagonist get in Jiu Chi Cliff, and what do the two pets get? This section is a bit vague, is it foreshadowing? If so, the writing is a bit confusing. It seems like you got something but you feel like you got nothing. The person you saved said you owed a favor and then gave you the fruit. Is this repayment? Or is the price the protector?

What does the author mean by this? First, establish a complete training system, and then write a protagonist who crushes this system under his feet. 100 Yuan can be exchanged for 100 physical fitness. Writing like this is not as good as directly writing about physical sanctification. Why do you need so many martial arts? You can even do nothing and just draw every day. You can increase your physical fitness by 130,000 in ten days. Then if you draw for a month or a year, will you directly become a saint? What else should you practice? Just draw. It's okay to say that each person only draws once. Your physical body is strong enough to live in the forest, and you can just draw animals every day. The reason why some big-name books can become gods is because they have a complete system and a complete world. Writing like this reminds me of a joke: "If China has 1.3 Billion people and each person gives me a dollar, I will have 1.3 Billion." You are even scarier than this. You are directly robbing money, not just a dollar. Those who have more money will rob more, and those who have less money will rob less. But in the final analysis, it is robbing money. The same goes for conversion. If you directly convert 100 to 100, there is no middleman to earn the price difference. Other people's big book books have later attribute points that are more difficult to obtain. It's better for you, there is no middleman to directly upgrade. What's even more terrifying is that in other people's systems, it's difficult to become a saint through the physical body. It's better for you to just ignore everything and make your physical body stronger first. There is also the obsessive attitude towards physical fitness. You can only see your own physical fitness, but not others. Do you want us to compare? Also, the protagonist's physical fitness is 100 times strengthened by 1300 times at the beginning. Is this going straight to the sky? Later, it will be 4300 times higher. It is so ugly. In other systems, physical sanctification pursues the unity of the Dharma and the body, carrying thousands of worlds with the body. This is good for the protagonist. The Dharma is not needed, and the world is directly carried by the body. Are you going to follow the route of Pangu? Pangu is the person who incarnates the world and transforms millions of living beings. You plunder tens of millions of living beings to achieve yourself.

What the hell is this book about? It says at the beginning that Shang Qiu helped the protagonist for 10 years. Later, when Qiu Zhan died, he said that he could not repay his kindness even if he wanted to. It seemed to give people the impression that the protagonist killed his benefactor because he did not want to repay his kindness. After that, the protagonist just let it go because Qiu's daughter was too fat. Go and see if Qiu's daughter will die. This gives readers an image of the protagonist being ungrateful. In Chapter 69, the protagonist was cheated, sold, and deceived by Ning Yuan and went to hit the clock. After that, he was not angry. It was revealed in a wordless sentence, giving readers the feeling that the protagonist is mentally retarded. If Ning Yuan had made it clear to the protagonist from the beginning that the protagonist wanted to win, that would be the opportunity you, Ning Yuan, gave the protagonist. Now you don't say anything and you ask the protagonist to risk his life to hit the bell, and when you come back, you ask the protagonist to take the blame (make an enemy). The protagonist didn't get angry when he found out, he just said nothing. I am also speechless! I'm wondering, the author, if you want to write that the protagonist is an ungrateful retard, or if you think the readers are stupid. The logic doesn't make sense, how do you want readers to read on?

Haokan, I'll give you my first monthly ticket this month, no more eunuchs 🤓🤓🤓

😆I hope the author can stick to it. This book is as good as "The Great God's (Xiaoyao Menglu)"!

I like it, author, cheers (ಡωಡ)

Doesn't the author create a group?

The protagonist is a merchant, and traveling as a merchant is his job. I just want to see you write about the protagonist flying all over the sky to make deals and record various races, but after all this time, he is still fighting around the merchants.

It was fine before, but when it came to stealing the medicine, it became very poisonous.

When it was released, the cultivation level was still 0.5. When I saw the mad man with the sword, I couldn't stand it anymore. All kinds of suffocating operations.

Some suggestions 1. To be honest, it was very poisonous to steal the elixir earlier. Taking it without asking is stealing. A protagonist with a reasonable bottom line suddenly starts to steal things. It is very poisonous. After about 160 chapters, this problem has disappeared, but I still hope to pay attention to it in the future 2. Water The number of words is normal, but it's frustrating to keep talking about character data. There isn't much in the first place. Everyone probably remembers the skills of the main character. I'll give it a try before it's over. To be honest, I don't want to pay for reading. I may one day feel that it's not worth it, so I'll give up.

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The subject matter of this book is quite good, and the author's writing style is also good. However, the writing is off-kilter and there is too little content about traveling merchants. The macro world is so big, including Shangzhou, Zhouyu... And even the entire Tianxuan world, but now that I have read almost 300 chapters, the protagonist is still hanging out at the door of his home, and has gone to the Netherworld twice, not to mention looking for some natural treasures, or respecting his professionalism. Good guy, just looking for an outlet has filled me with water for more than ten chapters, and I am convinced!

Traveling businessman? Why didn't I see you write about De Shang? Isn't this just a novel about cultivating immortality disguised as a traveling businessman?

When will the cultivation level be improved? No matter how strong the physical body is, it is still useful against ferocious beasts. When encountering a powerful enemy, it is too suffocating to spurt blood again and again. Moreover, I found that the fantasy routines are based on the cultivation of the physical body in the early stage and the later stage. Can they be done at the same time?

It's up to him to decide whether it's good or not, and whether it's good or bad is up to him. Generally speaking, people who try their best to get into the dark after seeing a little bit are either liars or bastards. At least I think this book is okay! Come on, author, I support you!

This is updated randomly. I updated a chapter yesterday, and then stopped updating it today. I update it once every half month. Strong

There is swordsmanship, so does the "Five Shang Code" also include the "Six Shang Code" and "Seven Shang Code"?

Just reading this introduction, I thought the protagonist had turned into a horse (species: spirit animal. Name: Tahuang horse ) and a natural mount.

When I first started reading, I didn't quite understand the author's method of adding points. Forget about stacking up physical strength, you can stack up Yuan Neng as much as you want, but later on, you still need to stack the remaining Yuan Neng on some martial arts. I was surprised. According to the author's description, Shang Yingcai is at the first level of the spiritual realm, which already has great power. In the early stage, the mortal realm is only at the third level. According to the protagonist's Yuan Neng, it can be upgraded every minute. Why not build up cultivation? While you are describing how powerful the spiritual realm is, you add random points to the protagonist, making the cultivation level worthless. Those who have cultivation level cannot do anything compared to you who have no cultivation level. And how can martial arts be powerful without the support of cultivation? Just rely on physical fitness?

I have read Chapter 66 and found several big pitfalls. The overall feeling is just so-so. The biggest poisonous point is that physical fitness has been rising, but the state has remained the same and is still the lowest.