The Flowers in Chang'an Are Not Finished Yet

​​ ​Writing a book is not easy, come on! Overall, it's pretty good. Readers with patience can follow it. Here are some personal suggestions. If you don't like it, just ignore it. If you want to read sincere suggestions, please be mentally prepared. 1. There are too many characters in the opening chapter, which distracts the reader's attention too much. Generally, the protagonist should be included in one shot, and there should be no more than three characters. Otherwise, there will be a hammer here and a stick here, which will make the reader very tired, affect the sense of immersion, and reduce the reading experience. 2. The presence of the protagonist is low. In the first chapter, it is okay for the protagonist to appear late, but in the following chapters it is still the same. The protagonist often comes out for a cutscene like a flash in the pan, and then the perspective camera immediately switches to other people, which challenges the reader's patience. 3. The theme is reluctant to unfold. Since the introduction emphasizes the destruction of the country and the family, this should be the beginning of the theme of the book. As a result, the author keeps describing the trivial matters of life, making the protagonist keep busy, seriously dragging the pace, and gradually eroding the reader's desire to read on. If this continues, the book will have no results. That's it. If I offend you, I apologize!

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