Smart Livestreaming in the Underground World

I took a wave of poison The author has a poor grasp of writing Old bookworms, don't fall into this trap

This book is good. The IQs of the supporting characters are all online. There are no malicious people who stir up trouble. They are just good readers 🙂

It's a pity that what I wrote later was wasted. I was attracted by the title of this book, but it's a pity that I didn't write down the outstanding points in the title. What is important is the sense of surprise and adventure of wandering into a different world. What is the point of walking aimlessly and eating earthworms? Eating once is considered a transition, but you also describe in detail how many times you eat? More than a dozen chapters do not get into the main theme of "underground adventure", which makes the sense of expectation exhausted. What's more, the author is not a good writer who can write about ordinary wilderness and be immersed in it. Please use your strengths and avoid weaknesses and write elements that are different from other live broadcast survival stories! I won't go into details. It's all trivial matters like walking for more than ten days just eating earthworms and not being able to see people without taking care of their hair and beards. The protagonist's behavior is also inexplicable. What is he doing when he suddenly jumps into the water to swim? Eating earthworms is a pointless exercise because I don't have enough physical strength to begin with. There is also one exciting point mentioned in the introduction that is completely missing. The protagonist has entered an unprecedented different world. How much impact will it have on people in the real world? As a result, those viewers were just like ordinary live broadcast viewers. They were completely inexplicable and ridiculing. It was neither true nor the foil to the onlookers, and it also slowed down the rhythm of the writing. Using the shock of the onlookers to set off the extraordinaryness of the protagonist and giving readers a sense of superiority is an important point of enjoyment. You can say that the protagonist is not pretending to be cool, but just provides a browser from a perspective, but the protagonist himself is satisfied and the reader is satisfied are two different things. The protagonist can be mediocre and let the world setting make up for it. The reason why the audience is shocked by the other world and the behavior of the protagonist is the same. Those audiences who are shocked and "come out and see God" can make the readers feel that they are God. This is the essence of fun. This cool point was wasted by the author, which is a pity. Director Liu seemed to be joking, unhappy and unrealistic. If you think about it carefully, an uncontrolled live broadcast room with black technology can live broadcast smoothly for more than ten days in the daytime with signals that cannot be contacted by the outside world. How weird is this? How much attention should it attract? There is no need to wait for the ancient creatures to appear, it should have caused a chain reaction long ago. Isn't it important and fun to mobilize the leading figures in academia and even the state machinery for every move of the protagonist to surround the protagonist alone? This is obviously a real thing that happens. It is reasonable and enjoyable when written, but the author has not discovered it at all. It is understandable that some articles sacrifice fun for the sake of real logic, but the author ignores a logical and enjoyable point. It is a pity. Of course, what I'm talking about are all routines. If the author can be original and find a new approach, abandon these "conventional" highlights, and only focus on writing his own highlights. One highlight will shine brightly, and there is no need for other highlights to distract from it. Of course, that's fine, then it depends on whether the author is a real god. Anyway, I'm not convinced that the author has such a level.

By the way, don't you want to discuss the plot, story, mistakes, typos, and sense of existence with me? This is what I asked to talk to you on my own initiative. Although the number of words is short, without communication I feel like my typing is rusty! Regardless of whether the book is completed or not, this post will always be kept. If I want to say anything, I will reply to it one by one when I am not busy. I will never forget the answers and thanks! Finally, everyone should be enthusiastic about the book review section. There are so many things to say, but I am the only one 🙃🙃🙃

Writing a book is not easy, I hope the author can persevere until it is finished.

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In addition to describing animal types, the author can add plants, such as luminous Venus flytraps, carnivorous flowers that emit a special fragrance to attract insects, cannas as big as umbrellas, which can suck nectar from the roots, from normal plants to giant underground worlds.

Data is taking off, what do you want?

In fact, the request is very simple, that is, send me your favorite name, and I will use it in the book. At present, the names of the characters are a little less, after all, no one can be seen! Another thing is the naming of prehistoric behemoths. Species that don't exist can also be created. After all, they are ancient behemoths from the Big Bang of Life. Anything is possible. There are no records but they haven't been excavated yet! There are also some jokes, jokes and the like to enliven the plot and make it easier for everyone to watch! As for technological fantasy, this is also needed. After all, smart technologies such as live streaming eyes have appeared, so intelligence is also needed. The rest are hot topics and discussions. Writing comes from life. If you think your story is good, send it to me and I will arrange a plot for you. Let's share the wonderful moments of life together. That would be the best! Looking forward to it, I hope everyone will be active!!!

Happy New Year! I wish the author all the best in the new year, and I wish all book friends to make great achievements in the new year. I wish this book will have higher sales and better reviews in the new year 😁😁😁