Take Control of Fear

I was browsing for new books and came across Chapter 11. I feel that the author wrote it very seriously, but the writing is still a bit white, with too many exclamation points, and not enough atmosphere in key links. However, the chapter about the protagonist's awakening ability is quite good. It is recommended that the author get to the point of this type of book as soon as possible. At the beginning, I feel that the author writes more about student life, and it is basically superficial dialogue. It does not show the beauty of the original peaceful life very well and contrasts with the subsequent ones. It also disrupts the atmosphere of the pre-terrible plot interspersed in it. It seems more... Drama This is just the beginning of this article. I look forward to the development of this article. Good luck, author!

The first chapter attracted me, it's very well written 😠😠 I'll leave a long comment after I finish it 233

... First, you force the protagonist to have a high IQ, but you don't have enough writing skills. Second, the protagonist I saw in the introduction is a crazy person, but in your writing, I only see an ordinary person. Third, the protagonist appears too few times in the first few chapters, so who is the story you wrote_(:з∠)_ Fourth, if you want to scare a madman, you can only be crazier than him. From another perspective, the previous chapters did not let me see the madness of the protagonist who can scare ghosts.

Negative review(*｀Ω´*)v

Bad reviews, disgusting people, why don't you save the heroine?

Isn't this imitating the mysterious recovery? The author is really 6

Horror Resurrection😁 Looking at the introduction and background, I think I like it. Try the waters

It's good to read. Don't worry about what some disgusting people say. Fortunately, I read it first and then read the comments. Everyone's reading is different. Only after you read it will you know whether it's good or not.

The story is great, looking forward to updates

The beginning is similar to Terror Resurrection

The protagonist's ability is very similar to Lilith in "Stealing Stars in September"

The most annoying thing is what he did today and how much trouble it caused him. As soon as I see such a plot, I feel nothing, and I am very sincere in persuading him to quit!

The plot is good, but the character of the protagonist is a bit rubbish~

The author wants to create a protagonist with a high IQ, but I'm afraid that the author's ability is limited and will give the supporting character an aura of mental retardation.

The theme is very similar to "Terror Resurrection".

The first three chapters were okay, but the fourth chapter was poisonous, so I gave up and didn't read the rest.

I was about to read a book, but what happened to the 250,000 words in December last year? Is the author's Buddhist style updated?

There are over 600 tickets listed, you're kidding me.

Author, do you believe me when I say that I have been offline for two months and haven't posted any long comments?😥

Stopped updating? ? The author, has he entered the palace?

No one there? I saw it on Baidu

Have you raised it to death? . . . . . I remember there were quite a lot of supporters.

The beginning is okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable for my deskmate to save the fat man but not the female deskmate (or is it the heroine?). After all, everyone has shown that they like the hero so much before, and the hero doesn't seem to reject it... Ah, it's uncomfortable, come on.

What are you writing about? Give the book a slightly different title.

I found this article accidentally. The plot is good, but it is too thin. Please update it.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Being able to describe all kinds of rich emotions so delicately and truly is truly extraordinary.

I thought it was absorbing fear to strengthen myself. It has unlimited potential. But what happened?

When you write like this, it seems like a copy. You basically look at the beginning and then the end, and you basically understand the copy.