My Wife and I Were Reborn Together

What have you written recently? Strength advises you to quit and say goodbye!

I haven't looked at it for a few days, and I found that the ancient weapon has been changed, which is good. Before, Gu Wu's appearance could be said to be very sudden. He originally thought that he would use the opportunity of rebirth to start a business and make a fortune, and then regain his wife. The sudden appearance of Gu Wu made the whole story seem a little different, a bit nondescript. Fortunately, the author changed it. Also, the male protagonist didn't act so scumbag. After all, you said that husband and wife are reborn together. If you want to open a harem, you really shouldn't set it up like this. On the one hand, he behaves affectionately, but on the other hand, he flirts with girls everywhere. This setting is even more unflattering. Either don't talk about affection in the harem, or be affectionate and don't show it everywhere. If it is set to swing on both sides, both sides will be unflattering. Now Qidian is no longer the time when stud harems were so popular. The affectionate and devoted male protagonist is actually also very popular. You see, all the great writers who wrote harem novels in the past are now writing single-female protagonist novels. Although there are still some minor problems, it is much better than before. Come on!

I just discovered this book today and read it in one go. Let me say something, First of all, the subject matter is very good because almost everyone got married between 85 and 95 Then there is no serious poison, and there are constant little poisonous points The writing style is not bad, The plot is full of minor poisonous points. The protagonist doesn't need foreplay for anything he does, and just fights directly. Isn't he afraid of pain? Just like the appearance of the godfather, it's too random. The same goes for the heroine's illness. In fact, there is no need to arrange for her to leave. The young couple is warm and starts a business, and some people will read it, just like the daddy article. In fact, this is the direction your subject should be. And are you sure that the first pot of gold will be food delivery and online cars? This is really boring. In fact, it would be good for the two of them to start their own businesses separately. It is probably out of the question now, after all, they have gone abroad. Are you sure you won't change the last 28 chapters?

When I was dying of poverty, I sat up in shock, another short and weak update

I have only read less than twenty chapters, and I feel that the frequency of bitter smiles is a bit high. A small suggestion to the author, change the bitter smile to small actions such as curling your lips helplessly, puckering your lips, shrugging, rolling your eyes, stomping your feet, etc. Adjectives that can be replaced by actions are best written in actions, so that the characters will be more vivid Or give the male protagonist a signature habit Actions, used when worrying and thinking, than Like strands of hair, touch the side of Fa Bin's face, wipe it off, cross your arms across your chest, clasp your fingers tightly, snap your fingers, clap your legs, raise your head and frown, etc. Don't always smile bitterly, you are allergic to touching your nose and smile bitterly after a fight, even if you really smile bitterly, you can write a bitter chuckle, which is better than a bitter smile There are too many bitter smiles, I can't stand it, the story is still quite interesting, come on, the author, if you can improve your level more, just follow it and subscribe

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I can't figure out what I want to do? The poor and humble couple are miserable. People in the previous world lived in such misery. Doesn't the protagonist have some ideas? After being reborn, he doesn't know how to work hard to make money and change his life. Instead, he kisses me here. Now a girl next door comes out, and a goddess at the same table comes out. I want to What do you want to do? Do you want to say that after you are reborn, the whole earth will revolve around you, and all the beautiful girls will cry and shout to marry you? The theme of your book does not match the content you write at all. This kind of routine may be popular in wireless literature, but I personally feel that it will fail miserably at the beginning.

Don't write too realistically! Sweetness to joy!

It's really poisonous. Throughout the story, the female protagonist hides from the male protagonist and watches the male protagonist pick up girls. She finally recovers and becomes mentally ill again. She hides from the male protagonist and watches the male protagonist pick up girls.

I feel that the couple is not in this kind of living situation and cannot accept saying goodbye.

The subject matter is pretty good. But why do you have to forcefully show off all kinds of ambiguity, poison, and daily interactions? I don't know what other people think. I was attracted to it because of the title. The first chapter is also full of interesting things. Later. Drive high and go low. I've read too many urban pretentious articles and am tired of aesthetics (ー_ー)!!

Author, please don't mess around. In foreign countries, models are just a bus for the rich and powerful.

I've read about forty chapters and I can't stand it anymore. Let me tell you my opinion. The beginning is very exciting, except for the poisonous act of forcing the show on the bus. The emotional line is a bit pretentious but acceptable. I feel that the author wanted to write the plot and the feeling of the movie, but ended up copying the tiger. I started to be unable to bear it anymore, which probably started when the heroine got sick. Although the cause of the disease is very logical, it is normal to go abroad for treatment. But the development feels a bit baffling. It should be that the author has his own ideas here, but I can understand that they are not in line with the public's taste. The next plot point that decided to abandon the book was the male protagonist's multiple ambiguous relationships. From the girl next door to the college classmate (where did the college classmate come from?) To the various overtures from passers-by, the male protagonist is full of infatuation while also showing warm affection to the female counterpart. After reading the author's comments and replies, I feel that the author's attitude is that of a scumbag. That being said, it is clear that the author does not have the delicate writing style required for this kind of character. The girls I have seen before are also scumbags, but as long as the writing style is sufficient, it is a last resort. And it's hard to write about business wars now. Without some useful information, you can't get readers' recommendation votes. The inexplicable godfather is so poisonous My feeling after reading the book after reading Chapter 40 is that it starts high and goes low. The author has many ideas but lacks writing skills and does not have a good grasp of the reader's psychology.

In this setting, the couple is reborn and goes back to college. They have to make different choices after rebirth. Otherwise, the rebirth is meaningless. Then the two couples are not necessarily two couples. Even if there is no poison now, there will definitely be a lot of poison in the future. When the love rival comes, he will feel like a cuckold 😰, which will be too disgusting and uncomfortable. I have also seen couples reborn together, but others are generally warm dog food and water every day, that is better

After reading the latest, others also said that was in the past, and I just wanted to ask a question: They had children together before they were reborn, so why are they engaging in love rival assassination now? Moreover, since junior high school, Hu Chao has prevented others from commemorating Si Si, treating him as a forbidden person. Logically speaking, it should be taken seriously for such a long time. With Hu Chao's character, it is impossible to let him go easily. So before rebirth, with Gu Xia's capital, it is completely impossible to get Si Si?

Amazing beginning, then nothing more.                                                                                                                                                                       ,             wall of the 1990s and 1990s been made in 2016 have been made older are taken in the design. Reborn 10 years ago, the male protagonist is in love with the female protagonist, and warmly starts a business. It's not like no one reads novels like this, even though it's a niche one. But the author didn't think much about it. First there was ambiguity, and then the heroine got mentally ill and went abroad for treatment. And that's not to mention another love rival. You can't finish this without being disgusted to death.

🤔The fake university I went to?

This is not a rebirth novel. I wrote a romance in the name of rebirth. In order to open a harem, I wrote that my wife became mentally ill and went abroad.

What the hell, the first 25 chapters were so well written, but after chapter 25 the characters were changed? The author, you wrote this very well. . . What's the point of saying something unpleasant? I feel a loss even if I invest. This routine of yours was written 10 years ago. Go and read the books that are currently on the top of the list. They are either pure hard books or typical soft-texts like yours. Don't include those with conspiracies. You are tired of writing and we are even more tired of reading. I don't know how you wrote the outline. If you have an outline, rewrite it quickly. I really can't read this, especially 34 and 35.

I've finished reading it, and it's okay so far. The part that I think is a little bit toxic is the part about recognizing my grandfather. It's unrealistic and too exaggerated. After chatting for a while, I recognized my grandfather and grandson soon after we met. Also, I don't want to see the male protagonist having an affair with some women. Just a single female protagonist is fine. It's good as it is now. I've invested in the book. I hope the author can make this book more interesting.

The male protagonist accepts the setting of rebirth so quickly that he doesn't even think about his wife and children in his previous life, which is a bit poisonous. A man who has been married for several years and is obsessed with a teenage girl is almost in trouble. Also, I beg you, never have an affair with another woman; just stick to your wife from your previous life, step by step, and spread dog food every day! !

Looking for dog food, but saw a comment section saying there is a love rival? Slipping away

Since they were husband and wife in the previous life, at least they had been honest with each other and should know something about their respective families and other things. However, the way the character behaves after rebirth in the article is so pretentious that it's hard to bear to look at it.

I don't know when the male protagonist and the female protagonist were reborn. They just went to college after being reborn. According to the normal rules, they should go to college for at least 4 years, and then add the first year of getting to know each other and falling in love, which is 5 years. The author mentioned in the previous article that they are in their 30s. According to this calculation, they must be at least 35-36 years old. The author doesn't know if he wants to write a novel about life and entrepreneurship or something else. According to the protagonist, he is about 35-36 years old, that is, the post-80s generation was born around 1982-83 in reality. After his rebirth, he just graduated from high school and went to college, which is around 2000. The point is, a couple was reborn in 2000, and there was a development period of about 15 years in between. The author wrote something bad and insisted on poisoning it. How can the couple make enough money by paying close attention to the prophets of these 15 years? Even if they don't know anything else, the housing prices must change every year. With this prophetic ability, they won't have to suffer in the future even if they buy more real estate. What kind of emotional entanglement is there in the beginning? Author, why is the protagonist reborn? Isn't it just a conflict in the couple's life over household chores or, to put it bluntly, over money? Now it's better to post it to a female channel than to post it on a female channel. It's interesting to have entanglements in love life? The subject matter is good, but the writing is too messy. I feel that the protagonist is not a reborn person, and the advantages of the reborn person are not brought out at all.

Has the author watched Korean dramas? So familiar😁

The setting of this book is the same as that of the Korean comic "I Want to Do It Again" on the p station. It is a plot of an old couple being reborn and returning to the past.

Hey, although there are a few books I like, yours is the one with the fewest votes, and I give it to you!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's over. I haven't updated it in 7 days. It's getting cold.