Stepping on the Blood Immortal Fate

Scene depiction: The author is very careful in depicting the scene, so that people can imagine the scene at a glance, and the sense of immersion is very good! It's easy to think of. Characterization: In terms of character setting, the writing technique can well highlight the character's personality traits. Make people remember the character immediately. Plot route: Starting from another world, I personally prefer the other world style, so I won't comment much here. After all, I like this style and can't objectively evaluate it! Overall evaluation: The writing is beautiful and smooth, the plot is novel, the characters are outstanding, and the inclusion index is ★★★★! Looking forward to the follow-up plot, I hope the author will work hard!

Book review time: 56 chapters in series, about 130,000 words; Book review chapters: All chapters have been updated at the time of book review; Book review text: The overall narrative of the article is smooth, but there are flaws in some details. The most obvious one is the battle between Wanshou Mountain and Baishou Mountain. The narrative in some places is obviously not smooth. The description of the environment at the beginning is quite good, and it is very helpful in explaining the story scenes and rendering the atmosphere, but when it comes to the later battle, the description of the environment is a little worse, and the appeal is not so strong. The psychological description is a little lacking. The psychological activities in many places can actually be written using psychological description techniques. Using narration to explain psychological activities will actually weaken the sense of substitution to a certain extent.                                                  There is no big problem with the previous descriptions, but in the part about the battle, the description of details is obviously worse. If that part of the detail description is handled better, and those tragic and tragic scenes are described more delicately, the sense of substitution and emotional appeal can actually be stronger. The plot creates crisis and suspense from the very beginning, which is very attractive. However, there are too many characters that pop up in Chapter 2, which makes me a little confused about who is with whom. And what about that, is it difficult to get past the plot of using the body of the vagina to make elixirs? Why do I always like to play this [cover my face and cry]? Men's videos often appear, but there are also women's videos. And I have seen more than one book like this. Why do I always like to play this kind of thing? It makes me so annoyed!                                                                                                                                                             Back to the topic, starting from Chapter 6, the plot turned to a slow burn, and it was obviously much duller than before. What about this part of the plot? I don't know how the plot of buying treasures, being targeted by people, buying things at auctions, and conflicts with people when buying things is in the female channel, but it is definitely tired of being played in the male channel. I almost gave up the book and left when I saw this part. I really watched too many such plots, and I was too tired of watching them. Then starting from chapter 30, the plot turns to a climax. I like this part of the plot better. I can see the author's feelings in this part. The tragic and heroic atmosphere makes me feel the same, but the emotional contagion is not strong enough. In fact, many places can make people cry, but it seems that there are no tears. There is a little less foreshadowing in the article, and the integrity of each story in the article is weak.        ，30，，，， The overall emotion of the article is relatively delicate. The best performance should be the protagonist's feelings for her mother. However, Ye Qingcheng's feelings for her master are still a bit far-fetched in my personal opinion. The main reason is that there is too little emotional interaction between Ye Qingcheng and her master, and the reader's empathy is insufficient. It can be seen that the author has his own thoughts and feelings, but his very unique insights are somewhat lacking. I suggest that you add more of your own views on things in your works. Only works with your own thoughts are truly your own. Personal opinion: How should I put it? This work is labeled as fantasy romance, but I feel that it is more like male fantasy. At least so far, I can't see where the two fonts of romance are now, but it's a shame that this work is published on a female channel. If it were published on a male channel... Ugh! It's really hard for young men to write male videos nowadays [crying]. Overall, this work is pretty good, and it's readable as long as you're not particularly picky. (Book reviews are highly subjective and represent only personal opinions. Please consider carefully before making a decision whether to adopt it or not.)

I don't know why, such a good book was ranked so low, but I kept searching until I found it and read it several times. I feel uncomfortable if I don't reward. Please give the author a big boost and update it quickly. I look forward to the plot content later.

Thank you all book friends and authors, I love you❤️❤️            Thank you for your support (´-ω-`)!

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