A Pillow of Beauty

The writing is very beautiful, but the author is probably not a show girl. After I read it at a slow speed, I can see that she really likes watching TV series, haha. The structure cannot be seen clearly, it should have deep meaning, but the writing style can continue to be improved, so I will briefly describe some places. 1. Don't write it conveniently at the beginning, especially for big men. This is not humorous. 2 The third prince got off the bus too quickly and did not bring any supplies with him for several days. It won't be the first time to visit the waterfall in a few days. 3. When you look up at the waterfall, you don't think about the source. If the flow coming down is very large, there will be a lot of fog and updrafts. Make a top-down shot. 4. This is a tree house, not a study house. There are stairs in the design, so you cannot climb up or down. 5. The neckline of the clothes is not the neckline of the clothes. Women are looked at the breasts, and different actions have different personalities. There are still a lot of scenes, but the reason is that the camera is flat during the narration, similar to TV dramas where all the scenes are given to the characters. Just make more revisions. The temperament of the prince must also be determined. The details of the hands often indicate the living standard, walking speed and conversation situation, etc., And the nobility is insufficient. The rest is no big problem, good book~~I am a fan of each other~

It will be on the shelves on January 29th, please order first! Thanks for the support! ! ! Bow! 😁

I will give you two more recommendation votes. It is a kind of happiness to insist on doing what you like. Come on!

Although I don't watch women's videos, I still recommend and support them.

The author is very good. Is this your first time writing a book? Doesn't look like a new author.

The story structure is very complete, the plot is rich, and the characters are full-bodied, which shows the author's skill and praise.

It's so hard to find a book like this. It's a really good book and I highly recommend it!

Already voted. Although I don't watch female videos, I still want to send you a blessing. I hope you stick to it.

It's over, I haven't watched it yet. Any novel with an ending is a good novel. 👍️

Hello, I really appreciate your work. It is very well written. I hope I can communicate with you.

Every point is taken care of,