Begging for Work in the Late Western Jin Dynasty

It's a good read. First of all, the writing is good and it doesn't look tired. Although there are many shortcomings, the flaws are not outweighed. The setting of martial arts is okay, but how to create a martial arts sect. He has no basis for survival in the world, let alone the dynasties before the Tang Dynasty. During this period, the world was controlled by aristocratic families. There is no way they would allow such a collective existence. Tell me how a sect like this can survive? It supports a group of martial arts practitioners who are not engaged in production. Large quantities of various materials are consumed every day. Not to mention that there is a department dedicated to making money just like in the novel. Aristocratic families and civil servant interest groups. Such a group cannot be allowed to exist. Although there is a martial arts setting in the early reading. But now that there is a shortage of books, I can still read it. But now that a sect has come out, I really can't stand it anymore. It's too poisonous, so I gave up the book.

Try to write as little about martial arts as possible. The author may find it interesting, but for readers of historical texts, martial arts is the biggest poison.

It's a pity, I thought it was a historical novel, but it turns out that the protagonist is from a martial arts school with dark strength and bright strength, and the protagonist can have a bit of a golden finger...

It's okay to write about martial arts, but don't write about martial arts. Try to write about fierce generals in the army.

This is a typical example of the author who is trying to kill himself. He just ignores history and insists on adding some martial arts elements. Maybe he wants to adapt it into a TV series? Neither fish nor fowl will please both sides. No matter what you want to do, you must first make yourself popular, otherwise you will die immediately.

The escape plot in the first two chapters was so well written, especially Chapter 2, which made me laugh so hard. But the more I watched, the more something felt wrong, especially when I saw some Ming Jin martial arts fantasy plot, I couldn't stand it. Goodbye

It feels a bit poisonous for the protagonist to develop from overseas. It would be more interesting to join Kansai and fight in Kanto and get involved in the war in the Central Plains. As for novels, you have to dare to face the biggest challenges of that era to feel satisfied. This kind of overseas development routine can easily delay the progress of the entire novel, which is enough for you to write hundreds of chapters without entering the mainland. Then who is watching? Besides, China did not lack land at that time, but it lacked people. If you occupied so much land and engaged in handicraft industry, you didn't have that many people at all.

What did you write? Kindergarten novel, the protagonist with this kind of mentality cannot survive for three days in troubled times. Kindergarten level. In troubled times, he must be as cunning as a fox, as ferocious as a tiger, and as cold as a wolf. The author makes the protagonist look like a young man of four kinds.

When I see Ming Jin and Dark Jin being easy to play, I can always think of the era of the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China, and there were no martial arts schools in that era.

Feeling like a pig's foot, just go with the flow! As a power-minded person, there is no clear goal to strive for! Do you still want famous people to work for you? What readers want to see is a new dynasty that conquers troubled times and establishes a unified new dynasty. Pig's feet only wants to escape from the troubled times, which makes him feel really frustrated.

From what I saw at the event, I really wanted to see the subject matter, but I saw martial arts? ? ? Writing about martial arts in historical texts is the only way to truly abolish martial arts 😂. I wonder why a historical text of more than two million words is not so miserable, no matter how miserable it is. There are only 50 book lists and only 50 comments, and no one even criticizes 🤣. In fact, to make the protagonist stronger, we need to set him up with natural supernatural powers and a height of seven feet, so that it will not appear so abrupt.

In that era, wine making was similar to why not eat meat. Even though there was not enough food to eat, people still made wine.

I've read a few chapters and it's okay, but it's too nonsense for one or two people to want to beat an adult tiger. One slap can kill a person. The results are so bad, but the author is still working hard to update it, so please vote for it!

Stop it, your martial arts skills have already defeated many readers.

I have only read a few dozen chapters, and Ming Jin and Dark Jin are really trying to persuade them to quit. You can say that one day a master of Dark Jin will beat the protagonist to death. In other books, the author directly gives the protagonist a powerful attack. I think it is natural and there is nothing wrong. Your secret strength can persuade many people to quit.

After reading a few chapters, martial arts and first-, second- and third-rate masters appeared. It was like eating a bowl of rice and the bottom suddenly turned into noodles. It was very uncomfortable. I hope there won't be any internal strength or anything like that, just to keep fit and have good fighting skills.

I really can't stand the martial arts and fantasy elements in the article! If you write history, just write history. It's really unpleasant to read all the things that are there and not!

Jin Wei's novels about time travel are rare. The theme is good. The disadvantage is that there are too many female protagonists. A heroic character is easily led by female protagonists and has no independent opinion.

I just entered the pit, and I feel that the writing is okay, which is worthy of recognition, and the plot is not bad, but the setting of martial arts is a bit confusing. I estimate that this is enough to dissuade one-third of the strict people. The author should try to be more rigorous in the setting of the next book. Don't show too many martial arts-type things. The same goes for A Strategy to Travel the Three Kingdoms. Doing Tai Chi gymnastics and knocking down Dian Wei are really off-putting. The rest is okay. If it weren't for the book shortage, I would definitely not read that kind of book. I would advise you to quit

As soon as I saw spanking 🐯, I felt something was wrong, spanking 🐯 was like teasing 🐱

The writing about women in the late Jin Dynasty is the same as that of women today, always being petty... The protagonist has no opinions and persistence of his own... In the case of the refugees, the woman acted coquettishly, showed some expression, and immediately gave up her position! Killing Shi Le, three hundred killed dozens, sneak attack, ambush in the middle of the night, still one man and two horses, the enemy injured the horse, just couldn't catch up! The beggar sent the letter in vain, that part, that sword... After looking at each other for a while, he started to get jealous and become a dog licker... Knowing that the two of them are in the middle, they still follow each other's ideas! Military and national affairs are like child's play...

To be honest, after watching it for a long time, I found that the setting is basically frustrating. It talks about inner saint and outer king. In fact, if it were not for the aura of the protagonist, it would have died long ago. Talking about justice to barbarians and slave owners is probably a bit lame. During the Western Jin Dynasty, there was no concept of nationality, only who had to eat and listen to whoever wanted to eat. The nobles of the Jin Dynasty did not take the common people seriously and massacred the city anyway. Basically, the Xiongnu massacred the city once and the Western Jin Dynasty massacred the city once. The soldiers looted once when they were happy and massacred the city once when they were unhappy. This book can be read without thinking, but even those who know a little bit about history can't read it. At that time, it was easy to unify. As long as the family members were controlled, no matter who they were, they could serve as servants. As long as the rewards and punishments are fair, that's all.