I Can Get Money in My Life

Be sure to control the rhythm and logic, and don't write chaotically. Author, support you and come on

Signed the contract, congratulations😁

I don't know if I am the first to give a reward, but this is my first time to give a reward. This is my first time for you, the author, so you should cherish it!

The name of the protagonist is destined to make this book unpopular. Let's change the name to Dianqi.

Pure novice writing, pretentious and cool writing, with a strong diaosi style, and a feeling like watching a Kuaishou earthy video!

It is obvious that the author is writing about a harem and a relatively open subject matter. Although it may not be a sacred book, it is certain that he will make a small amount of money after writing it.

I hope the family situation will be resolved as soon as possible. We don't want the protagonist to live and drink, and the family will be depressed. Also, I feel that the level is not right. Level 3 is equivalent to a first-class director, so the level of directors on Earth is a bit low! Is it Galaxy level?

What I want to say to the author 1* The emotional scenes are embarrassing as hell, try to improve the shortcomings. 2* The male supporting role is not outstanding enough. It can be seen that the author wants to describe a funny buffoon-type male supporting role, but if it is transferred to the real world, it will make people around him somewhat uncomfortable. 3* The author blindly pursues a refreshing plot and blurs many details. For example, special effects need to be modeled, and even the most advanced special effects software needs to be modeled and then rendered. The author can be forgiven for this, after all, not everyone knows something about this kind of thing. 4* The author does not fully understand the current social situation. How should I put it? The author should be a student. If the author wants to describe a wonderful world, then he must have outstanding villains and intrigues. At present, all the characters seem to be quite silly and sweet. 5* Personality issues. I am also a student studying at a provincial first-level art college. This issue of character is the most important part of the novel. If this is just a practice, then it doesn't matter. If you want to really write well in the future, please sort out the issue of character to some extent. You can't let readers see a character with conflicting personalities, right? I hope the author will work harder. Also, I am the king of words.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

You need to be cautious when investing. The author actually stopped updating for 7 days.

Fortunately, I took a look and almost invested.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Xiaobai's novel is very good. As an old bookworm, I felt very happy reading it. I hope that the rest of it will be the same as the previous one. Come on, author

Only people who don't understand people will buy Maserati. The Italian automobile industry is not good. The cars they make have a higher failure rate. Maserati buys a logo and comes with a car. From a practical point of view, Japanese cars are the best. If you want a brand, you can buy Porsche, Maserati, Lamborghini, and Ferrari. They are all fake and have very low reliability.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~