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After reading a few chapters, I felt that there was a reason for the poor performance of this book. The interaction between the protagonist and his parents was so embarrassing that I couldn't stand it anymore after the second chapter. I suggested that the author make a slight modification and just write the protagonist as an orphan. It can be seen that the author is not very good at writing emotional dramas. It is recommended not to write emotional dramas. The creativity of this book is quite good, but there are many places that can make people watch to death. If these shortcomings are corrected, the performance of this book will be much better. It is estimated that many people are like me. They can't stand it when they see something uncomfortable, and then abandon the book. I hope the author can listen to his opinions! I hope the more you write, the better.

I feel a little confused, so when I went to Aqua Blue Star, I could directly use the ability to control metals to kill gold ants, but I had to use psychic energy to fight them. I found that it was of little use before using this ability. Speaking of this ability, I don't know if the author wants to use it in the later stage or something. I haven't seen how useful this ability is until now. I would like to suggest the direction of the combat development of this ability. You can use hundreds or thousands of flying knives or flying swords to attack (you can also add some attack runes). This can also be combined into a shield for defense, and you can use the Creation Motherboard to create a computer engine like that of the Super Seminary to assist in control.

Chapter seventy-nine has been revised. Now you won't think there is a problem, right?

A group has been created. Friends who want to join can come in to discuss the plot, chat and spank, 738860969

Compared with the background world view of the novel, it has a strong sense of playing house.

I see other authors have one, so I'll make one too, and I'll post anything here!

Creator Collection Post You can write down the items or creatures you want the protagonist to create, and I will arrange them according to the needs of the plot. Everyone is welcome to participate!

I still like the kind of family worshiping God, with only one protagonist. . .

Let's look at it after it's fattened up... The farming flow is still pretty good.

It looks a bit bland, and the author is not good at counting words. It makes people feel redundant or cumbersome, and there is no immersive feeling. How should I put it, like a first-year elementary school journal?

It's so awkward to watch the protagonist's interaction with his parents. Can there be less parents... It feels so poisonous and awkward.

Author, don't you know that Qidian Orphanage doesn't deserve parents? (Laugh)

The setting is okay, but the article is written like a running account, and it doesn't stir up emotions.

This book will be a hit! Collect, recommend and reward 😃

If you can't write well, just give up on the rules level, whether it's the parents or the heroine. If I can't write family love well, I'll make the protagonist an orphan. If I can't write love well, I'll have no harem or no heroine. It's really rare to see someone like this author who is so unreliable. I know I'm new, and I know I can't write well, but I just want to write, just write.

The protagonist tells his parents that he is reborn and that giving money is wrong. People talk too much. Once word spreads, the protagonist will be dead. Author, your setting shows that you are not mature in reality!

The subject matter is fine. The content is a bit off. Creator, there are no restrictions in the future. I don't know how to use my imagination to let someone modify something like the AK47. The T-Virus can be created to target the dark universe. There are so many good things in mythology and science fiction, but the protagonist only focuses on the earth. Abandoned

I admire the author very much when I see him persevering. No matter what, please support me here.

Why doesn't the author write about those people on earth and bring them together as the same civilization?

How retarded were the previous creators who could only create individuals with strong combat capabilities? Can't we create a virus or something? And the ones created can't evolve?

Under the premise that some players have failed, why does the protagonist think that he must be awesome after obtaining the Creator Template (career)? Just an idea to create a creature with unlimited potential, do you dare to try it? Can a mere few hundred energy create a life with unlimited potential? A civilization that can give birth to level 8 experts doesn't have such an idea? Such an awesome creator civilization perished casually? Would it not be possible to create a member of the same species with weak reproductive capacity? It takes three days to mature a batch of food in the portable space. What about the conservation of energy? The system has blocked so much portable space, but there is still a shortage of food? How picky is the war beast? It only eats food and does not absorb other energy? These settings are illogical and self-consistent when you think about it.

Come on, author

Aren't all male pigs in games like this usually orphans? This novel even includes parents, how can you pretend to be cool?

I'm impressed by the people in the comment area. If you create the most powerful weapon or life form from the beginning, how can you write about it later? Um? Just become invincible. Also, I want to know when the two-way foil will appear 😁

The creativity is a good idea, but the plot is really not very good. The Creator Civilization is outrageous. With such a strong ability, they only think about creating powerful creatures. Even if the people of the Creator Civilization ignore other things, are other civilizations also fools? The Creator Civilization must also do customized services. So many civilizations have never thought of it. This is inappropriate. Reason, and what's more, the protagonist created the T virus and people from other forces used it. Could it be that no one from the earth's civilization noticed something was wrong? After all, the T virus is not a thing, and the people on earth are so familiar. It feels like all the people on earth except the acquaintances of the protagonist and the protagonist's parents have disappeared. There are so many people on earth that I can't believe that there are no talents. (I only read a hundred chapters and then stopped reading)

Personal feeling! This book is full of ideas and creativity, but the author's writing style and plot conception are average. There is also the feeling that the monetary economy is a bit collapsed. That's the part I've seen so far, I'll talk about it later.

After reading the first chapter, I thought whether the protagonist would create a lot of golden fingers.

The layout is too small, there are only a few places to come and go.

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