The Vicious Shark

Being timid before fighting, you want to write a counter-attack, right? The writing is too much and the degree is not grasped well. Distortion.

1. You didn't explain clearly the protagonist's original social background. The beginning was extremely vicious, with a fight breaking someone's leg. 2. You even dare to use these gangsters whose legs you have broken. From the beginning, people have been staring at the head of the Quanzhou family. You have never found anyone to test and stare at the man named Li. 10 Articles a day. Why didn't Li Zhi betray you? It was you who broke his legs. The revenge mentality of these gangsters should be very serious. 3. In the scene you asked Li to stare at, you wrote that he tried to get on the roof and use a diabolo tube. This is not something that someone with broken legs and bones can do. 4. You said that no one dares to sell Wuzhou Salt Farm because of the prevalence of pirates. But the strength of the pirates you have shown in the entire article so far is only two or three big kittens. With this kind of strength, a person who can be trained for less than three months can kill a ship. Do you think that the thugs raised by several big families in Quanzhou since childhood are afraid of thugs? 5. The amount of salt money and interest transactions is unclear. 6. By the way, there is another question. You can catch Lao Liu the first time, but people make a living by catching salt dealers professionally. But he couldn't squat for several months. As for the subsequent internal strife among the salt dealers, you wrote it briefly. It was too sudden and did not explain clearly. 7. Come on, Fatty, as fast as possible and ensure quality.

What a good book, but it's a pity that it's all about the little girl.

It would be better if the title of the book was changed to Evil Shark in the Late Ming Dynasty

I have always wanted to read a book by Zheng Zhilong, and I found this one. It is good, well written, and the author has the potential to be a gangster 😁😁😁😁😁,

Catching up with a book passed down by heroes of the Water Margin, 😍 Great efforts

Zheng Zhilong is Zheng Chenggong's father, right?

It seems that he is a eunuch. The author should explain it. Don't disappear.

Zheng Zhilong was originally called Zheng Yiguan. The name Zheng Zhilong was changed later when he was a pirate. Moreover, his father is a small official and his family background is not bad. That's why I could idle around and be a gangster when I was young. It would be nice if this kind of bully didn't bully others. How could he be bullied by his stepmother? Even his father can't control him, so what does your stepmother mean? Also, in history, Zheng Zhilong left home and went to Macau to join his uncle at the age of 17. He worked as a maritime merchant with his uncle. At the age of 18, he was recommended to work under Li Dan, the largest pirate at the time. In his 20s, he became a big boss in the pirate circle. The time traveler in the book is so crap compared to the original version.

Although I don't know the author's synopsis, I want to tell the author that the sea has a much more promising future than fighting for hegemony on land. There is no need to overthrow the Ming Dynasty. It would be great to build a sea empire on which the sun never sets. Look at Britain, with 5 million people colonizing the world.