The End of the Road

After thinking about it for a while, I hesitated to say anything... Brother, I'd better open a new book, I say this with a dark heart. (The following content is only my personal opinion) The first few hundred words can be cut off directly; not to mention the first chapter, the entire first three chapters have no point of attracting readers, which is the way of fantasy ten years ago; change the name of the protagonist, just two words will be ok; a paragraph should not be too long, affecting the reading of mobile phone users; fantasy must give readers a sense of novelty, brother, your book does not have that sense of novelty; suggestions Read more recently signed fantasy books, commonly known as sweepstakes, and learn writing methods and routines, especially those signed by newcomers, and don't look at the works of great masters; don't have too many dialogues, which will appear cumbersome. Just use them to highlight the characters and promote the development of the plot. The rest can be simpler... I won't say too much, but the core of writing a book is actually one point: how to make readers interested in reading. Editors are also readers, and they are very sophisticated readers. They need to put themselves in their shoes and think from the readers' perspective. Why should I read this book? Many authors think they write well, but readers don't think so. This is commonly known as the self-pleasure mode. emmm... I really won't say much more. Brother, come on, if you can't hold on anymore, just reopen it. Forty thousand words is indeed a pity, but I wrote more than 400,000 words just at the beginning, and failed to submit seven times to Qidian. It seems that they are all of the same mind... 🙏

Congratulations to my brother for completing a million works 😁

The article needs major changes. The name of the country, the exercise system, and the aura system are all a bit ridiculous, and it looks like they are just made up. The setting of the two protagonists is very good. They are both rare and excellent seeds. There must be countless hardships waiting for them later. The mission and ideals of the two people did not appear in the first three chapters, so the main plot cannot be seen. Suggested major changes: Improve the aura and skill systems. Book list: The home of bean sprouts.

Personally I think the author is too lazy.

Author, where is your home address? I need to send you a gift.

If you write well, you won't get any flak. If you don't get flak, you will definitely become a blockbuster in the future🤓🤓

The writing is simply beyond my scope of knowledge. It can be said to be a shocking article that makes people cry. This child will become a great writer in the future and realize the joy of writing 🤓🤓🤓🤓😎😎Finally, Crab.

Brother, I'm here again. I'll come to visit you every once in a while. Whenever I can't hold on to my writing career, I'll think of that old man who made millions on a single computer. You are my spiritual support. Come on!

This novel is written in a simple and profound way, which coincides with the principles of heaven and earth. If you can study it in depth, you will definitely understand the philosophy of life. After reading it for a while, I always feel that I can't sleep at night, and I want to finish reading the article~~

There was no update yesterday, and I would like to apologize to the people of the country today. I went out to collect materials yesterday. Yes, I went out to collect materials. By the time I remembered, I had lost the opportunity to update. So I will make up for it today (after all, there is no other way to go out to collect materials). 😁😁😁

I'll give it to you as soon as I have a vote, okay 😌?

First: Yesterday I watched a live broadcast of a certain fantasy, and followed the trend and typed something like "Xuxuan is a chicken, and the novel will be updated tomorrow." Although no one saw it, I decided to take advantage of the popularity. Second: As I said, I participated in the Code Word Tribe event, which lasts until the 27th, so during this period, I will find various reasons to update.

The author is good at structure, so he should be able to set up the world and do a lot of balancing. But the author is too transparent, and the result is that readers see a lot of core balancing, and the result is a combat explanation comparable to a math exam. In addition, it greatly interferes with the conversation. Another problem is that the large number of settings and the rapid progression of the rhythm make reading difficult. I love each other~~~

Things change and people change. I haven't updated for four months.

Haha, I am not alone, there is another person here! (ง •̀_•́)งWeave our world