Immortality in Uncle Jiu's World
长生在九叔世界
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 100k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
48Chapters
0Votes
364Recs
5Fans
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Reader comments 13
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The protagonist is a schizophrenic with cunning and changeable thoughts. What kind of way do you practice? To cultivate the Tao, cultivate the mind first. Even his xinxing is not the same as that of a child. If you just write that you have enough mana, it will be much more uncomfortable to advance. If you are not firm in your heart, you still practice Taoism. Go practice Buddhism.
Don't make the golden elixir worthless. As soon as the protagonist advances to the golden elixir, a bunch of golden elixirs will appear.
I have read many movies and human books, and I have summarized my experience for the author's reference. I hope the author will gain something from reading it and write a better book. The most taboo and frustrating thing about writing a book written by a fan of this type of movie is to follow the plot, copy it mechanically, and only add a bit of the author's personal yy. After writing and writing, in the end I couldn't write anymore, and the readers could only read it at a glance, and it couldn't attract readers at all. The best fan fiction is that it does not follow the plot, but can change the plot and the ending, but it is regrettable, unexpected, and has new ideas. It can attract readers even without the powerful golden finger yy. What is better in writing is to refine the characters' personalities, write out things that are not there before, and use certain information to dig out the story behind the original story, reveal the deeper things, and write your own story. This is the most attractive
Don't write about Ren Tingting. Also, you got together inexplicably without writing any emotional basis. You also have to find a way to get Ren Tingting to practice Taoism. You didn't see the emotional basis at all.
As soon as I see someone brave enough to do justice and die traveling through time, I'm not interested.
It looks good, but it's missing a few hundred million points.
I don't want Ren Tingting as the heroine. In ten of Jiu Shu's books, the heroine in ten of them is Ren Tingting. Can you change it?
The author doesn't want to write the novel about Uncle Jiu's first disciple. The protagonist Qiu Sheng has been grinding for 500 chapters and has little strength.
Looks good, updates quickly, updates quickly
Give me a little reward, the author, keep it up.