The Superstar's Cultivation Tale

In fact, I personally feel that with the author's writing skills, there is no need to add some routines, such as the tenant and the landlady. I feel like vomiting after reading too much. As an entertainment article with creative ideas, why not develop into cultivating immortality and entertainment. Using some routines will easily make people abandon the book. It is embarrassing to read.

I would rather sit on a ten-color horse and cry than sit on a one-color horse and laugh! !

Yes, the black store should have stopped earlier and stopped when it was necessary.

The protagonist talks too much and doesn't look like an expert who has practiced spiritual practice for 500 years. Suggestion: Don't be a saint bitch. The relatives of soldiers who died will be supported by the country. Do more things that are beneficial to yourself. Talk less nonsense, do more practical things, live well for yourself first, and then take care of others. You should have your own private space. It's right to like making money, and don't get involved in other people's lives easily. The mother and daughter have their own lives, what does it mean if you go in? Savior? The taker? Have you ever thought about how other people's wives feel?

Author, I haven't been paying attention to you for about half a month, why did you stop updating again? Can you hold on?

I just read it, and the first chapter was the type I was looking forward to, but the second and third chapters made me a little worried. I think it is understandable to inherit the cause and effect, but it is not unlimited. You have to know that you are you, and the original owner is the original owner. You need to understand the priorities, and the protagonist's so-called helping comrades to take care of their families gave me the feeling that I treat you as a brother, but you give people the rhythm of sleeping with other people's sisters and wives. What is the situation?

I feel like I've read similar content in the first chapter, but that was a long time ago? ? ? (Creating a sense of time and space confusion)

Well, not only is the introduction and content different, but also the second chapter is about immortality, right? Why is the life span exhausted? Does the author have any misunderstanding about longevity? Be more rigorous

Can you make hundreds of thousands in one breath like in the book?

Not bad, well written. As an old bookworm, I think it's very good, but there are too few updates. I hope there will be more. I give you all the votes.