Set Things Right

The plot progresses very quickly, and the content is compact and not draggy. I hope the author will update more every day. One chapter is not enough.

The writing is good, the plot progresses quickly and doesn't drag on, and it's worth watching.

It can be seen that the author wrote very carefully, but the writing power is still lacking (although it is a fictional article, some parts still look awkward) In terms of character creation, for example, in the first chapter, Li Jinzhong and Li Kedi mentioned the matter of returning to the court to receive a title. On the one hand, judging from the subsequent chapters, Li Jinzhong is not brave and clever. On his way back to the court, he bluntly said to his foster son, "You have done great service, and the emperor will definitely reward you." This was really not what an officer, let alone an elder, should say - it would easily make the listener feel arrogant, and it would be even more difficult for people with ill intentions to talk in front of the emperor. In terms of details, although it is a fantasy novel, it can be seen from the "Han Li" and "Hongnu" that it is intended to refer to the history of the Han Dynasty, at least in the medieval period and the dynasties before it. From the Qin to the Ming Dynasty, the courtiers did not refer to the emperor (including when the emperor was mentioned among courtiers). If it is written for fun, it is much better than most novels. If the author really loves writing, it is recommended to read more history books. Wish you better and better!

Author, can you make 10,000 yuan a day? Gkdgkd

Although the author is writing fictional history, you can still feel the heavy atmosphere of history coming to you. Come on, author ( ¯ᒡ̱¯ )و

The author will put it on the shelves tomorrow. I hope those of you who are following me can order first.

The content of this book is good. I like it very much. I hope the author will work hard! An update once a week! ! !

The writing is pretty good, but there are occasional typos. The author caught them before publishing.

Is there any group? I want to join the group!

I don't know why, but your book didn't have a protagonist in the early stage, and it was supposed to be a bit toxic, but unexpectedly it attracted me deeply!

Nice writing in big letters, bookmarked

Author, if you create a QQ group, I think it is necessary for us to have an in-depth communication with you 🤫

The writing style is also very good, it is very comfortable to read, and it is not like those junk Internet articles at all.

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The new plot has finally started, author, come on!