To Express My Sorrow for the Autumn Poems

Judging from the content and title of the work, the protagonist should be the fairy Qiu Ci. Only Ji Liang's gorgeous appearance at the beginning almost makes readers mistakenly believe that only the adopted mount that was born can bear enough attention from the viewers. And when we will follow the author's narrative mode, focus on the baby's development plan, and look forward to its unique growth process, the heroine Qiu Ci, the caretaker, lost the baby Ji Liang just to take a look at the beautiful boy. Even though the beautiful boy's ability to conquer the world seems to be the destiny of the male protagonist, it really makes readers worry about Qiu Ci's reliability. What about the training of a beautiful young man? Reincarnation and stolen lives are not the cause and effect of destiny. Could it be that Ji Liang's incarnation was just to exaggerate the theme background of the existence of a male and female protagonist? From the introduction and description of various scenes and monsters, beasts and immortals in the text, it can be seen that the author has worked very hard and is good at carving out such detailed situations, but some of the lines are not very clear. Judging from the main theme of the work, the goal that the protagonist wants to pursue may be mentioned in the dialogue, but mostly in passing. The author probably wants to leave more foreshadowings, but it is buried too deep, making it impossible for readers to figure out the purpose of Qiu Ci, the meaning of Ji Liang's existence, and their goal of progress, which makes the whole work seem a little disorganized. I just feel that Qiu Ci's life is just muddle along and take things as they come. Judging from the progress of the plot, the presentation of some characters or scenes initially seemed quite meaningful. For example, the weird baby in Langhuan City was full of mysterious opportunities. However, in the end, he was just entrusted to others to be fostered by Qiu Ci, and there was never anything to explore. Maybe the author will mention the echo later in the article, but here it will give people a feeling of anticlimactic start and ending. Including the dream-seeking journey under the sea, it was also top-heavy and hard to figure out. I don't know what the final result means. The author's writing style is smooth, without any sense of lag, and the writing technique is quite consistent with the content of the work. However, the author feels that he always ends the paragraphs in a hurry, as if there is a tiger chasing him behind him. If we can control the rhythm of the plot and check for omissions, we should be able to better express the dreamlike and fairy-like temperament that the work should have.

The writing is very good. I especially like the story about the Arctic Poseidon. I will reward it.

I can't see the main plot yet. I feel that the subsequent development is not simple, such as Hwarang's dream and the immortal mentioned many times. It's also strange. When I saw the introduction of the protagonist, the male protagonist was so embarrassed. Why didn't he show up? I felt like I couldn't grasp the key points after watching it for a long time. We are not the authors and have no idea what he is planning. So please update it quickly. It's too slow. We are rushing customers. Anyway, keep reading and see what the author plans.

Personally, I feel that she is not a popular Mary Sue protagonist, nor is she a perfect person. She has many shortcomings, but she also has advantages that cannot be ignored. Each story has its own uniqueness. I feel that every character is vivid and lifelike on the page. I hope the author can continue to work hard and continue to paint this picture better 🥺

The contract for my humble work has been signed, let's spread the flowers ~ a newbie is on the road, please collect and recommend ~ 😁

Okay, this is the protagonist. Unlike some disgusting books, the protagonist is either tortured in one way or another.

In order to express sadness in Qiu Ci, the original meaning of the poem is that because the young man has not had many experiences, he cannot truly appreciate the charm of words when expressing his emotions, so the poems he writes are blunt and obscure. The title seems to express the author's humble attitude, but after reading this article, I deeply feel the author's skillful control of words and the deep emotion and love blended between the lines. I saw the ancient landscape with splashes of ink and lacquer, the rugged and weird monsters and monsters, the majestic beauty of Qingyi Sushang, and the dream-like nightmare. But it is not leisurely and exquisite, calm and calm. Instead, it seems that the baby's cry at the beginning has broken some restrictions, making the painting come to life like a huge wave in the deep sea, and then presents to us like a fairy-like online game, in which we can see a whole world. And this world is different from what we are familiar with. It is more mysterious, more beautiful, larger and more wonderful. It's just that when we are in the Novice Village, we can only see clearly the main line in front of us that constantly jumps with task prompts, and then we follow the NPC's guidance to complete the growth, upgrade, equipment, and receive massive experience. Light up one city stronghold after another, and unlock the confusion that was originally shrouded in black fog and you didn't know where you were. Then I discovered that the scope of its extension is so vast that it has not yet touched the edge. To this world, we are as small as ants, but we are as determined as snails, completing the construction of the entire framework. The author's writing style is similar to the small seal script of the Qin Dynasty, which is profound and tactful, and the writing is ancient but elegant and tranquil. There is no sense of contradiction between the words and deeds and the plot, which shows that the writing skills are extremely profound. In addition, the sources of the various images of monsters, spirits, gods, ghosts, fairies, monsters, etc. That appear in the world can be found in the article. It seems that a lot of effort was put into the carving of the characters and the connection between the scenes, so that it can read properly. What's more, like Qiu Ci, he cultivated his fairy body with books and then became the leading character. His description is beautiful but deserted, his mood is indifferent and informal, but he is happy in his expression. But it makes people feel really close to her. Even her teasing and seducing of Hwarang felt cute and cute.

After watching it for so long, there is finally someone who has the same vision as me. I hope it will get better and better~ I don't care! I want to dominate the top three fans list, spread flowers~✌️✌️✌️

The plot in the first few chapters was not smooth. I often got distracted while reading, not knowing what Qiu Ci and the two were going to do, and they often hit each other with a hammer or a stick. What I am very confused about here is what is the identity of that little baby? At the beginning, where was the little baby that Qiu Ci and Ji Liang met in the ruined temple that was fine even if sparks jumped into its eyes? I thought this was a big shot who would appear later, but in the end he disappeared, but when he was described in great detail, he felt very mysterious. Then the two of them bought a house, but inside the house the couple ate babies, and Qiu Ci ignored them. Although the protagonist was not a virgin, I thought this was too cold-blooded, because at first I thought Qiu Ci was quite caring towards the little baby, but now he is so indifferent to the babies being eaten, which makes people feel uncomfortable. Then Ji Liang was captured, and then Qiu resigned from the search. During the search, he also met Hwarang. From here on, the plot became very smooth. I particularly like Chapter 20, the arctic Poseidon. I like this chapter, Poseidon, and affectionate men. Although there is no such thing in real life, it does not prevent us from creating one. But Poseidon's affection is for the female devil, not his wife. Fortunately, the one I brought in is the female devil, not his wife, hahaha. Speaking of this chapter being Pixiu's dream, I followed the clues to find someone to find out the reason, and finally found out the lover of the female devil, and finally pointed to the moonlight. In fact, I always thought there would be a shocking secret or conspiracy when I read it, but I didn't expect that in the end, the clues came out only because of Qiu Ci's words, and it was just moonlight. To be honest, I am a little dissatisfied. It has gone a long way, leading us into a psychedelic dreamland, and also giving many clues. So why has Poseidon not figured it out after thinking about it for so many years? I think it is very obvious to Yue Yue Guang. Poseidon obviously also understands the female devil. He also has certain abilities to find out some clues, but he has never been able to figure it out for thousands of years. This is not consistent with the image of being wise and wise. Of course, this is my personal feeling. Maybe I have a God's perspective and Poseidon is just an outsider. But I think we can rethink this answer. The clues should not be so obvious and should be a little more subtle. This way, when it is revealed later, the reader will be more surprised and suddenly realize that this is the case. I like this story very much. I hope I can write more main stories. In the dream, I saw that Hwarang also has his own story. I don't know what his story has to do with Qiu Ci, and I don't know who Qiu Ci is destined to be? I'm really looking forward to the next story, so I'll update it soon.