The Protagonist Who Is Invincible from the Moment He Appears

It's good-looking. Very good-looking. I like this style very much. It's wild and wild, with all kinds of magical changes and chaos... It's just that it doesn't look good to me. It's the protagonist teasing beauties in various ways, making the beauties fall in love with the protagonist and want to have a family with the protagonist. Then the protagonist walks away, and the beauties are like clowns. . If you like it, take it into the harem. If you don't like it, don't play with your feelings. I'm most annoyed by this kind of people. They feel hypocritical and irresponsible. I just read Chapter 154. I really like the character of the protagonist, who can do whatever he wants. But I can't stand the protagonist's feelings. I'm a bit of a traditional man. If you don't like it, don't criticize.

It's so out of the ordinary! You can do anything, and you can also role-play! Have you seen it (this is a role-playing game)? That's probably the name. Suggestion first, there is no need to introduce the source of power. Second, limit the protagonist's ability. Invincibility is okay, but omnipotence is too much. Set the character's ability, and then play it, writing one copy after another. Third, Marvel is boring, Dark Alliance is boring! I'm so bored that I don't want to read anymore! I think the author can write based on the general setting of (this is a role-playing game). The protagonist only needs to set up his own small uninhabited world, such as the floating city of Sword Art Online or Minecraft. The small world has a time tree that produces 36 fruits once every hundred years. Each fruit can increase a person's life span by one hundred years without any side effects. Then there is the ability to travel through the world and the contract ability, which requires voluntary dealing. After completing the contract, it can be summoned. The protagonist can unilaterally cancel it, and only the contractor can enter the small world. Then the protagonist seals the invincible memory and goes on adventures, and will only recover after desperate situations or a thousand years. It would be interesting to start from scratch and conquer the harem to become stronger!

I would like to mention some areas that I personally think need improvement. The author failed to grasp the rhythm of the plot. Why is it difficult to write about invincibility? Because once you are truly invincible, you cannot write plots about killing monsters and upgrading to make up the word count. So you have to either set a goal for the protagonist or have fun yourself. This book basically belongs to the latter, but the author wrote it well It's too casual. It comes up as soon as you think about it. The protagonist is invincible, but you can kill him in one encounter. Jin Shining in the fifth battle died without any role, and his value is equal to that of a passerby. What's the point? The Holy Grail War could have had many tricks, but you ended it in an instant. It was so exciting that you poured cold water on me. It's very uncomfortable. What do you do if you don't wait for seconds? Just show off, just show off your skills a little bit. It doesn't matter if you are the villain, but the protagonist is still on the human side, which makes the position very awkward. The author lacks respect for the original characters. When writing fan fiction, you can be mildly OOC, but you can't belittle the original character in order to improve the protagonist's character. I'm quite disgusted with this kind of behavior. For example, when writing about Odin, he was not originally a buffoon, but he was written to have no character and no knowledge. Diarmuid also fell in love with each other as soon as they met. The first time the servants met, they all tested each other. It's so embarrassing for you. A character with a lot of scenes was given the treatment of Hassan in the fourth battle. Maybe the author doesn't have much love for these characters, but I really hope that he won't write like this again. There are too many women who follow the protagonist. The problem is that there is no story and there is not much use. The author just wants her to appear. I don't know if it is the author's hobby or because he thinks readers like it. The author should think carefully about why the results of this book are not satisfactory. It is still possible to write well in the future. Chaldea and BOSS teams still have many characters to join. You can write about members of the Lord God Space colliding with other worlds, and you can also engage in team battles.

Personally, I feel good. I like this kind of promiscuity and pretense.

Warhammer Warhammer

Changed the cover, it's not bad😄

Write about the world you want to see. The author may refer to 🙂

Ah ah ah why can't I sign the original book?

. . . I really flirted everywhere. After the angels had teased them all, they ran to tease the people on the earth. Anyway, as long as they didn't cross the line, they were single female protagonists. . . . Is this the line of a scumbag, throwing it away after flirting?

The sense of immersion is a little bit poor. You went to that world before you finished this world. The author's own post!

Why don't you change your profile😁

The setting is okay. No one is watching. I feel like the protagonist is always trying to show off, and he feels a bit like a scumbag (women have to like me). There are also some details. Take the deviant sword for example. It broke after being swung by the protagonist a few times, rbqrbq.

It's really hard for you to flirt around but not open a harem.

In the book, except for the first point in the introduction, where the appearance is invincible, how else can it be done?

It's not that technology isn't strong, it requires brains. For example, causality weapons, universe sealing machines, dimensional equations, and conceptual quantum constructors.

. . . . . . The ones who are in the water can no longer be in the water.

The author has written this book so well that I want to sign it 😄 support it 👍

Tieba tour group,,, according to this introduction, the first reservation is given to

The promise made by the protagonist must be fulfilled. These women do not say what they must do to them, they must fulfill their promises👍👍

Others are fine. It's just that I haven't seen the first world. It's so painful to watch. I haven't seen the second one either. It jumps too much and I don't want to watch it anymore

If you want to write about the harem, just write about it. Why are you doing this kind of flirting and not caring about how disgusting it is?

When others are not hungry, they use delicious food to tease them out of hunger, and then feed them. This is a scumbag... But this protagonist refuses to eat for others...

As someone who has read it, I can say that it is well written, but the main character is too narcissistic (> Dis<).

This book is so strange→_→ But I hope the author can change his view on love.

It's really hard to see if you can't separate the rolls properly.

Has Catherine's plan to convert the entire world to the God of Light succeed? 😭😭😭

How can I put it... This author's approach is not ordinary!

Do you have any other invincible articles? I really like something like this. I went to see it and watched it twice. Simply! It's so cool 😄😄😄😄😄😄. What a pity, I didn't read it until it was finished.

I first thought about whether it was worth it or not to waste my points.

Invincible writing, not a stallion? Is there a heroine? Or is there a female character?