The Road to Command

If you have any suggestions or shortcomings in the work, you can write them on this floor. The author will work hard to correct them.

It's very white, but it's good enough for old bookworms. Don't bother with it. The author's setting is okay, but the dialogue is very white. Practice it slowly. The writing needs to be improved.

I think some people should still read my books. I personally have a few suggestions. When you read my books, you can actually comment on paragraphs, just which part is more interesting. Or if you have any questions and want to complain, you can make comments. The author will take a look on the computer when he goes back in the evening. I found that people read the comments in the first few chapters, but there were fewer or even no comments in the later chapters. Some self-doubts are whether my writing is poor and no one reads it. I hope everyone can comment more to help the idiot discover the problems in his writing, and give him some motivation to persevere. After all, it is difficult for a part-time author to update ten thousand times a day, and he needs the motivation to persevere. Thank you everyone😌

Reading this comment, it feels so fake

Haha ~ I have some experience in the water ~

I really like the protagonist, vote every day

Very good novel, much better than those Shenma system books

There are too many books in Qidian, and there are too few to read. It's not easy for people who are short of books to find this book. I like you, but the updates are really slow.

In the past week, at least 50 books on spiritual recovery have been published.

The dialogue is very clear and the writing is decent, but it feels a little uncomfortable if you don't sign a contract with your data.

My God, if you don't sign the contract for your book, then my book will be out of business, . "Venom II Deadly and Guardian"

Is it my imagination? I feel that this novel is somewhat similar to The King, Spare Your Life.

Just like my book, the underworld summons ghost soldiers😁😁

The emotional drama is very strange. The protagonist is handsome and has adventures, but he is a little poorer now. I wonder if he is so unsure of himself and so irresponsible when he likes a girl. Even if the relationship doesn't work out later, so what. If you don't like Li Xingyue, but if you like Su Xue, just fight her, you loser

Why haven't you signed a contract? What criteria do you need to sign?

This is my favorite type of novel, silently like it

The writing is still interesting 😄 Come on, author!

Come on, support us and encourage us together!

Brother, why can't I see your book on the new book list? Is it finally signed?

Brother, do you have any news about your book signing? I just applied for 100,000 words and was rejected in 40 minutes. I want to cry! I don't know if I should continue writing, it's such a shock.